mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Here is my newest card, hope you likeRATE PLease AND COMMENTZHere is my newest card' date=' hope you like[img']http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5287/566607.jpg[/img]When this card is Normal summoned, reveal the top 4 cards of you deck to you and your opponent, put them in any order you like. When your opponents Stand-by phase comes around he guess the top card of your deck, if he gets it wrong he take 1000 points of damage. if he gets it right the user takes 1000 pts of damage and this moster lose 200 ATK points.RATE PLease AND COMMENTZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 When this card is Normal Summoned, reveal the top 4 cards of your Deck to your opponent then arrange them in any order. At each of your opponent's Standy Phases, your opponent must guess the top card of your Deck. If he/she get it wrong, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If he/she gets it right, you 1000 Life Points and decrease the ATK of this card by 200. I lazy'd the OCG, but this is close. Don't abbreviate anything in your OCG, take your time and review it. For future references, boys/men and girls/women can play YuGiOh, always refer to the appropriate gender as he/she or his/her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 replace "Stand-by phase" with "Standby Phase", replaced "Normal summoned" with "Normal Summoned".. lots of mistakes but ive never made this type of card, so cant fix them all.. also, decrease its stats, i.e. make its ATK and DEF around 2800 or somethin.. nice card just needs a lil help, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Here is my revised VersionWhen this card is Normal Summoned, reveal the top 4 cards of your deck to you and your opponent, put them in any order you like. When your opponents Standby phase comes around he/she guess the top card of your deck, if he/she gets it wrong he/she take 1000 points of damage. if he/she gets it right the user takes 1000 pts of damage and this moster lose 200 ATK points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ah, your ocg for the "damage" part of the spell is incorrect, look up "Ookazi" and notice how it words the damage it does Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Wow, i have to shorten damage to dmg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ? Ookazi doesn't say DMG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ? Ookazi doesn't say DMG... ITS THE REVISED-ReVISED version....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 ? Ookazi doesn't say DMG... ITS THE REVISED-ReVISED version....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobicus Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 effect is too complicated 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Anyone else seeing the obvious ruling issue in this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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