Yasu Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 First in 2-3 months.Oh... well. inb4 lower the contrast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 I see lighting but no source. Also first one is too sharpened. No depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Oooh, I should have added that stupid red moon ]:<Thank you :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 left side =/= right side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 New versions :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dizzy~ Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I like it. But this is the Scarlet Bat >_>Flandre is the scarlet Devil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 In all of them, I cannot tell whether your BG is LQ or oversharpened. left side =/= right side. ^ And that. There is no transition. You used your render like the Great Wall of China. Blocking half of the TAG from itself. For lighting, you just used a soft brush on soft light over your focal? Choose a point on the tag where the light is hitting the focal naturally next time. The black drumstick thing is unneeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 The transition between the two BG's is a bit too much, you go from a stock to a... starry type place? Idk but it just isn't working, and like LZ said, i see lighting but no source, you want to work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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