mega96pain Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 Here Is the new Card Hope u likeThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by cutting the users Lifepoints in half, and by tributing 3 "fiend" type monster whose levels equal 12 . By paying 1000 Lifepoints destroy all mosters on the field (excluding this card). This monster gains 500 ATK for each Card destroyed by this effect. When this moster is sent from the field to the Graveyard my Battle, the user loses half of his/her Lifepoints. im pretty sure there are errors, correct me if there are:D:shock::lol::o8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 too many stars O_O... LOTS of ocg mistakes too, as well as grammar. 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Petal Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 One error listed: Not "by cutting"Instead: "paying half your Life Points" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 22, 2010 Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 For one, you mispelled "Apocalyptic" >.< OCG:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by halving your Life Points and by tributing 3 Fiend-type monsters whose total levels equal 12. By paying 1000 Life Points you can destroy all mosters on the field, except this card. This monster gains 500 ATK for each card destroyed by this effect. When this moster is destroyed by battle, halve your Life Points." Ridiculous Summoning conditions. Half of your Life Points and 3 Fiends with more use than this card!?"?" should not go in the stats unless you have an effect determining them. Otherwise leave it at 0.Squished pic. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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