Atomic Whiskey Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 My first posted card, tell me if it's overpowered or stuff. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 When declaring the types of summonings, don't say : Special, Normal, or Flip Summoned. You should adress the whole thing out : Normal Summoned, Flip SUmmoned, Special Summoned...I feel that the effect could be reworded a little and the slight border can be taken out from the picture. Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Good pic and effect. A grammar problem. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 8/10 ...like the pick ....:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 some OCG problems but pic rocks and effect could improve by an inch so 3.5/5.01 from me (very good fro your first card)!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Whiskey Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 I'm not that good with grammar, can you guys help me out? I used the "Damage Step" thing from Ryu Kokki's effect... "If a monster that battles with this monster is a Warrior or Spellcaster-Type monster, destroy that monster at the end of the Damage Step." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Whiskey Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 I created two more... wow this card maker is extraordinary... :D EDIT: Going to change "Grand Explosion"'s secondary effect. Find the first effect too good, going to change to 200-300 LP per card or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 I really like the pic and for someones first card it is great, i will give you 10/10 because you have a great mind and potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 The newer ones have good pics but are overpowered. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Whiskey Posted January 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2008 Thanks for the advice. Will change. I think for Grand Explosion, 200 LP is enough? I'm changing ADAM's Attack and Defense increase from 3500 to 3000. That seems appropriate. While your rating the others, here are some more cards I made: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 6, 2008 Report Share Posted January 6, 2008 your lying to us when you say your new, arent you!? those are really good for new people 8/10, now tell me...where did you find those pics?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomic Whiskey Posted January 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2008 Ermm... I used the Resource post thing. Here's the website where I get my pics: http://www.epilogue.net/cgi/database/art/gallery.pl?genre=2 And I am new, but not new to Yu-Gi-Oh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 11, 2008 Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 Need work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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