PenguinZ Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 V1:V2:V3: CnC. Just some random thing I put together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 ouch, The background hurts my eyes.There is no flow, depth and lighting isnt very good:/Pentooling could use a bit of minor adjustments. But its hard to explain how i feel about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vapor™ Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 the Bg isn't good at all there's no flow and no lighting effects. I suggest using a tut. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 BG =/= Render The whole thing doesn't fit or work well. Scrap it and try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I think it would be hot if it was smaller. Start using sizes like 400 x 170. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Pentooling could use a bit of minor adjustments. LIKE ACTUALLY USING THE PENTOOL. The lines are shakey, so I can tell it was not used. Too many bright colors, and there is no flow, and hardly depth. :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I tried another Bg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I think it would be hot if it was smaller. Start using sizes like 400 x 170. WTF.... Is your brother posting or something? No offense. Are you being sarcastic? I'm just confused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Again, the colors just don't work. At all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mythcaptor Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 ouch' date=' The background hurts my eyes.There is no flow, depth and lighting isnt very good:/Pentooling could use a bit of minor adjustments. But its hard to explain how i feel about that.[/quote'] This Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I think it would be hot if it was smaller. Start using sizes like 400 x 170. WTF.... Is your brother posting or something? No offense. Are you being sarcastic? I'm just confused. No sheet, sherlock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I was just hoping so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-.- Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 The BG is eww.The blend between the BG and render is eww.The attempt at pentooling is eww.The eww is eww. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Tagging isn't really just posting a render+effects on a bg. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Then I'm doing it wrong... Jk. Anyway, just scrap. Colors were HORRIBLY chosen, and the overall look is disgusting, no offense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vapor™ Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 they both r bad. u need more lighting and more effects. Also the size is to big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 The problem is not that he needs more lighting, and more effects, it's that he needs different lighting and different effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Tried it one more time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Much better. Not great, but better choice of colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PenguinZ Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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