Jump to content

Lady Ninja from Afar - 3rd try.


Jeffrey K.

Recommended Posts

You needz grammar fixes:

"Formerly a ninja master's apprentice, she now travels the world in search of enlightenment."

 

Lower the stats; you have a Level 5 Vanilla with stats characteristic of a Level 7. How about 1900 ATK and 1500 DEF? Also, she seems more suited to have an EARTH attribute.

The pic is good, but the name needs work. It's really bland. How about "Kunoichi from Afar"?

 

You made a good shot at a Vanilla though. Just brush up on your grammar.

Since you're new, 7/10

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

×
×
  • Create New...