Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Tell me what you guys think.*EDIT* I've fixed the Anubis/ Jackal cards I've shown before, and I've added a new card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Good pics, the first monster is a little overpowered, grammar problems. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Good pics' date=' the first monster is a little overpowered, grammar problems. 7/10[/quote'] What words should I fix to be closer to the OCG? And thank you. :) *bows* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elzrath Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 nice pics and effects 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 nice pics and effects 8/10 Thank you! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Pics are good effects are alrightish and OCG is the same with me needs to improve so i'll give you 3.8/5.001 (quite good for a Member):-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Try and improve on your grammar and your cards will be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Pics are good effects are alrightish and OCG is the same with me needs to improve so i'll give you 3.8/5.001 (quite good for a Member):-) Thank you, Sir God Kaiba. :) *bows* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Try and improve on your grammar and your cards will be great! I try. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 wowsome of those pictures are just plain amazing lolbut Deck needs to be capitalizedand you get a 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 wowsome of those pictures are just plain amazing lolbut Deck needs to be capitalizedand you get a 8/10 =) Thank you! :D And I'll keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 or doesnt need to be capitalized, the first seems overpowered and instead of putting in its card name u should have put in its name 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Grammar errorsPicture errorsOcg errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 They're really good. I'd say 9/10. As people have said, 'or' doesn't need to be in block capitals and 'deck' is capitalised. Also when you use the word 'monster', it is capitalised when being used in conjunction with card or its type eg. Monster Card or Normal Monster, but otherwise isn't capitalised, eg. Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. As for the first card being a little overpowered, I reckon you should give it an extra effect cost or a summoning cost like "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field." or anything like that. It isn't that overpowered to be honest (actually I just noticed, you should probably add "until the end of the turn" to the end of your Master Anubis' effect, otherwise the increase is permanent). Make those changes and ill have to say a 10/10.Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 They're really good. I'd say 9/10. As people have said' date=' 'or' doesn't need to be in block capitals and 'deck' is capitalised. Also when you use the word 'monster', it is capitalised when being used in conjunction with card or its type eg. Monster Card or Normal Monster, but otherwise isn't capitalised, eg. Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. As for the first card being a little overpowered, I reckon you should give it an extra effect cost or a summoning cost like "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field." or anything like that. It isn't that overpowered to be honest (actually I just noticed, you should probably add "until the end of the turn" to the end of your Master Anubis' effect, otherwise the increase is permanent). Make those changes and ill have to say a 10/10.Keep up the good work.[/quote'] I will definitely take your advice to heart. Thank you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 I fixed the cards and added a new one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 You should've made their effects support the Jackal Lock!! Anyways, Good work! 8.8979/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 You should've made their effects support the Jackal Lock!! Anyways' date=' Good work! 8.8979/10[/quote'] I didn't know of this Jackal Lock strategy before, but I think there should be another strategy for these cards. Anyway, thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 I've also created the first Equip Spell Card that I can be somewhat proud of: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Dude, this was dead, try making another thread! >_<I think thenew card is overpowerd, and ahs grammar problems =/6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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