//Zeromaru// Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Okay so this is my first full and proper attempt.What do you all think? What can I do to make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 a ugly. too much variety of color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I totally agree. But a part from that, whats good and bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 er theres a big erased spot you kknow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I swear to god that wasn't there before... Ignore that and I'll get rid of it. EDIT: Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+tr.Ryder Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 the desaturated brushing looks bad on a colored signature. There is a spot where the pink just gets cutoff that is too abrupt. there is no depth. try and create depth by adding maybe morestuff that isn't 2d Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Whats with the brush whoring? Colors=/=Render disrupts blending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 May I write over that tag do I may better explain to you on how to improve it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Sure thing I'll take any help i can get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-.- Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 The brushing hookering (no one likes a whore :b) iz nut guhd.The flow disrupts my digestive process of breaking down food.Da culerz dun't goooooooooooooooooooooooooooo well tugedur.The render is just there. D:T h E r E i S n O d E p T h . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 So i hope the above helps. Have anymore questions, just ask okay? ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Thanks for the advice... mainly becaus your the only one whose given me any. Well Ryder gave me a little. Anwyays I've decided to forget about this mistake and try on something else. I would ask what i should avoid from this one in the future though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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