hyaku_hachi Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Yes finally 150 posts and three-star member. Another battle between the dark and the light. Lore:Any battle damage you take in battles involving this card is reduced to 0. When this card attacks or is attacked, place 1 "Death counter" on this card (max. 4). You can remove 2 "Death counters" from this card to destroy 1 of your opponent's monsters. Lore: Any battle damage you take in battles involving this card is reduced to 0. When this card attacks or is attacked, place 1 "Life counter" on this card (max. 4). When a monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 "Life counters" from this card to negate the effect. rate/hate/comment/fix OCG/fix effect/you know what to do edit: updated lore on the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Erm there okay, not very original...For the end of Guirdian effect it shuld be to prevent its destruction.Any Battle Damage involving this card is reduced to 0. When this card attacks or is attacked, place 1 "Life counter" (max. 4) on this card. When a monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 "Life counters" on this card to prevent its destruction.though i could be wrong6.431/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 @Dark-Azkrin666, really? I've never heard of that before. I'm too lazy to do it now though I'll do it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 @Dark-Azkrin666' date=' really? I've never heard of that before. I'm too lazy to do it now though I'll do it later.[/quote']yeah its used pretty often as far as i know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 k thnx for the help, I changed the lore.Btw, it is about 5 a.m. here (atm) and I haven't got much sleep, I was bored and had these pics lying around so I some made cards. Wish I could think of a better effect, but I haven't gotten much sleep. Edit: These cards were meant to counter each-other, but I just noticed they would actually work well with each-other. One destroying your opponent's monsters, while the other protects your monsters from being destroyed. Lol I think I just rated my own cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 really bad ocg, death's last stand sounds like a spell/trap card name, so i give it a 7.8/10 nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 "...it is not destroyed" instead of "...to prevent its destruction"But you know what? These are cool anyways.9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 congrats on 3 star, i now have the same :D pretty good cards, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Your ocg is well off, the cards okay, but nothing great, i do like the pics do. Effects are meh Overall a generous 7/10 well done for getting 3 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 OCG:Death's Last Stand:"Any battle damage you take in battles involving this card is reduced to 0. When this card attacks or is attacked, place 1 "Death counter" on this card (max. 4). You can remove 2 "Death counters" from this card to destroy 1 of your opponent's monsters." Heaven's Guardian:"Any battle damage you take in battles involving this card is reduced to 0. When this card attacks or is attacked, place 1 "Life counter" on this card (max. 4). When a monster you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 "Life counters" from this card to negate the effect." Or something like that.They seem really powerful for Level 3's effect-wise. Add some drawbacks? The pics are good, although I have no idea what the heck I'm looking at in the first card. 7/10 Also, congrats on three stars! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 @ FriendlyHost, ya I was unsure about that but I made these cards in the morning with barely any sleep, name is updated.@ psychicplayer, that is what I originally had, if you look at the comments above you I changed it because of Dark-Azkrin666 post.@ ~SJ1~, thanks for the fixes and again I made these cards in the morning with barely any sleep. Also I only made them for my 3-star celebration, so I decided to give them 3-stars. If it would help I could raise their levels to balance it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I really like it, i cant really fix OCG. but it isnt the best. i give you a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Lol thanks for the rating, I have been fixing my OCG from the people in my comments yet it always turns out worse. My original effect probably had best OCG but oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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