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I got bored one day and decided to work on expanding the Orichalcos. So I'm working on an archtype, and as of now, this is my progress.

 

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Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned, you can add 1 "The Seal of Orichalcos" from your deck to your hand. This card's original ATK is equal to the amount of "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard x400. If your opponent activates a card that would destroy 2 or more monsters you control, you may discard 1 "Orichalcos" monster to negate and destroy that card. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you may remove from play 1 "Orichalcos" monster to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. If "The Seal of Orichalcos" is face-up on your side of the Field, you take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/align]

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I got bored one day and decided to work on expanding the Orichalcos. So I'm working on an archtype' date=' and as of now, this is my progress.

 

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Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned, you can add 1 "The Seal of Orichalcos" from your deck to your hand. This card's original ATK is equal to the amount of "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard x400. If your opponent activates a card that would destroy 2 or more monsters you control, you may discard 1 "Orichalcos" monster to negate and destroy that card. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you may remove from play 1 "Orichalcos" monster to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. If "The Seal of Orichalcos" is face-up on your side of the Field, you take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/align]

neat card, nice support for Orichalcos monsters.

it is a simple effect. i don't see any OCG errors

8.23/10

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"This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard."

Also, it's "can" not "may"

Capitalize "Deck"

 

Good Orichalcos support. Brutal and strong. Although...would the only drawback be a low ATK when lacking Orichalcos cards in the Graveyard?

Nice card.

9/10

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I got bored one day and decided to work on expanding the Orichalcos. So I'm working on an archtype' date=' and as of now, this is my progress.

 

[align=center']450800z.jpg

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned, you can add 1 "The Seal of Orichalcos" from your Deck to your hand. This card's original ATK is equal to the amount of "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard x400. If your opponent activates a card that would destroy 2 or more monsters you control, you may discard 1 "Orichalcos" monster to negate and destroy that card. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you may remove from play 1 "Orichalcos" monster to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. If "The Seal of Orichalcos" is face-up on your side of the field, you take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/align]

 

neat card, nice support for Orichalcos monsters.

it is a simple effect. i don't see any OCG errors

8.23/10

 

 

I see errors...but minor ones..

its always field..not Field...and stuff like that

and it would be better to write "If you control (1 or a) face-up "The Seal of Orichalcos" ...it's the same like face-up on your side of the field ^^...i guess xD

 

Pic: for a monster...i dunno 1.25/2

Originality: well..it's kind of ..effort in beeing original..but..ok ..its ok^^ 2.5/3

Balance: Orichalchos was always OP'd..but average balance 1.5/3

OCG: ok^^ 1,5/2

 

6,75/10

 

 

 

OCG:

"This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard."

Also' date=' it's "can" not "may"

Capitalize "Deck"

 

Good Orichalcos support. Brutal and strong. Although...would the only drawback be a low ATK when lacking Orichalcos cards in the Graveyard?

Nice card.

9/10

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Nope...only is not needed..There might be other ways to Special Summon it..It's his card ^^..his choice..his -0,5 for balance xD

may is possible

Deck..yep..capitalize..!

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Thank you. I'll have to work with the Magic Set Editor from now on, so the cards may not look as good.

 

 

OCG:

"This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard."

Also' date=' it's "can" not "may"

Capitalize "Deck"

 

Good Orichalcos support. Brutal and strong. Although...would the only drawback be a low ATK when lacking Orichalcos cards in the Graveyard?

Nice card.

9/10

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From what I've noticed, people tend to use a lot of monster removal now, and you'll eat your graveyard pretty fast with this guy. So the more his effect is activated, the weaker he gets. You'll need a way to return monsters to the graveyard to make full use of this guy.

 

 

 

I got bored one day and decided to work on expanding the Orichalcos. So I'm working on an archtype' date=' and as of now, this is my progress.

 

[align=center']450800z.jpg

Card Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned, you can add 1 "The Seal of Orichalcos" from your Deck to your hand. This card's original ATK is equal to the amount of "Orichalcos" monsters in your Graveyard x400. If your opponent activates a card that would destroy 2 or more monsters you control, you may discard 1 "Orichalcos" monster to negate and destroy that card. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you may remove from play 1 "Orichalcos" monster to Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase. If "The Seal of Orichalcos" is face-up on your side of the field, you take no battle damage from battles involving this card.[/align]

neat card, nice support for Orichalcos monsters.

it is a simple effect. i don't see any OCG errors

8.23/10

 

Pic: for a monster...i dunno 1.25/2

Originality: well..it's kind of ..effort in beeing original..but..ok ..its ok^^ 2.5/3

Balance: Orichalchos was always OP'd..but average balance 1.5/3

OCG: ok^^ 1,5/2

 

6,75/10

 

Intuneric means Darkness, and that picture seemed to fit what I was going for.

I understand about the original effect part, that's always been a problem for me.

The big problem with this guy is that you need to have a good amount of graveyard control, otherwise he just eats the grave.

 

Thank you.

 

if you are working on Orichalcos cards i think you should fix the seal of orichalcos because some people dont like the "taking soul part"

 

lol

would like to see more :D

 

I plan on making it a bit more balanced in fact.

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