chyneeman Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 If you controll a face-up Tuner monster, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If this card was summoned this way, remove it from play when it is removed from the field When this card is selected as an attack target, you can pay 800 Life Points to negate the attack. When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 "DarkNebula" monster with 1500 or less Attack Points. The monster Special Summonned with this effect is sent back to the top of the deck during the end phase of the same turn. When this card is Normal Summoned you can summon any Tuner with "DarkNebula" in the card name. This card gains 500 Attack Points for every monster with DarkNebula in the card name on your field and Graveyard 1 "DarkNebula" Tuner + 1 or more non TunerDuring your Standby Phase, you can look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap card on your opponent's field. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's field. 1 "DarkNebula" Tuner + 1 or more non TunerWhen this card is succecfully Synchro Summoned you can destroy all monsters on the field excluding cards with "DarkNebula" in the card name.The turn you activate this effect you the Battle Phase is skipped This card gains 1000 Attack Points for each card used in it's Synchro Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 You do NOT need the -You DO need "" around DarkNebulaYou need to punctuate the sentences.I'm sorry if this is a tad too specific but that's not what goes in the Set ID and Circulation.In circulation you put Limited Edition, or 1st Edition. Set ID you put something like, DARK-ENXXXNormal Summoned, Summoned, Summon, Special Summoned, Set, should all be capitilized like that.Attack mode should be capitilized.The picture is good.A tad op.Overall, 6.2/10I also think it should be fish or machine type but whatever. It's your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 thank you for the critiquewhat about if i lower the deffense to 0 ? will that help ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 what about if i lower the deffense to 0 ? will that help ? The defense is fine for a level 4 monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 alright thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Panda Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 well you he fixed your ocg, but good first attempt. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Welcome to YCM! Not bad for a first card. OCG has already been corrected. Seems slightly OP'ed (for the Marshmallon-like effect), but it's not ridiculous. Make more DarkNebula monsters so we can see this card's full potential. Have fun and good luck! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 more coming later on just playing around for now planning on making a series of these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 updated New crads it is shaping up to be something like a speed synchro deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 updated New crads it is shaping up to be something like a speed synchro deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 looking pretty good so far. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 looking pretty good so far. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 ty more to come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 ty more to come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 very good but what is the general theme of the DarkNebulas?also some OCG errors which i will fix later but i have to go soon so cant at this moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 very good but what is the general theme of the DarkNebulas?also some OCG errors which i will fix later but i have to go soon so cant at this moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 the general theme is speed synchro constantly getting synchros and roataiting more cards to come to continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 the general theme is speed synchro constantly getting synchros and roataiting more cards to come to continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chyneeman Posted June 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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