jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Here is my second set. Please rate fairly and constructive critism is always good to hear :D Effect: Once per turn you can remove from play 1 monster or 1 spell or trap card your opponent controls, if you do, this monster cannot attack in the turn you activate this effect. During your end phase you activated this cards effect, by sending this card to the Graveyard, special summon 1 "Death Sorceress lv 6" from your hand or deck. Effect: Once per turn you can remove from play 1 monster and 1 spell or trap card your opponent controls, if you do, this monster cannot attack in the turn you activate this effect. During your end phase you activated this cards effect, by sending this card to the Graveyard, special summon 1 "Death Sorceress lv 6" from your hand or deck. Effect: Once per turn you can remove from play up to 3 cards your opponent controls, if you do, this monster cannot attack in the turn you activate this effect. This card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. Effect: Only equip to a "Death Sorceress". If they activate their effect, they can still attack. If the equipped "Death Sorceress" would be destroyed, you can destroy this card instead.Please rate my cards!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!i want to know how i did, you guys aremeant to support other people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Niiice cards good pics! OCG is good except for 1 error- 'spell and trap cards' are supposed to be like this-"Spell and Trap cards". Besides that nice cards!!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Thanks alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 No problem! just fix that error and your cardz are perfect!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 i will in a second, here is another card Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Spellcaster-Type monstersEach time a Spell card is activated, place 1 Spell counter on this card. This card gain 100 atk for each spell counter on it. Each time a card is sent to the Graveyard, place 1 Death Counter on this card, you can remove 1 Death counter to negate your opponents card and destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Niiice!! For that 1 card pic is good, its well balanced but there are 3 OCG errors: At the beginning of the card there is no capital letter(there should be). 2-This card gain? This card gains. 3- spell counter? Spell counter. Fix those tiny but important mistakes and ur good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 I will, and thanks again, can you please look at my Orichalcos set, they are op'ed but they're meant to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 K ill take a peek but ill reply in that thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 merci boucoup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Derien Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 here's a cheeky 'lil bump ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M-Cube Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Kool Kards! 9.84195409286354/10 LOL :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 Lol ill rate 9.99999999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 thanks for the support MMMKJM and ACECARDMAN22 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 yous welcome you deserve it!! LOLZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M-Cube Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 yous welcome you deserve it!! LOLZ Yeah! What he said! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 cheers, aha! i have made well loadz more of these, so i will create a new thread soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 cheers, aha! i have made well loadz more of these, so i will create a new thread soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M-Cube Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 OK, can't wait to see it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 Terribly broken. LV 4 is more powerful than Chaos Sorcerer, and Chaos Sorcerer is limited and harder to summon. Lv 6 is broken as well. It may have the same effect as LV 4, but Lv 4 is more powerful than Chaos Sorcerer. This card also leads to the even more broken Lv 8. LV 8 is extremely broken. It is at least 5 times as good as Chaos Sorcerer. Some things they all share that makes them broken. 1. They can be special summoned from you hand, deck, or graveyard without any cost. 2. They can all be normal summoned as well. 3. Their equip card makes them even more broken. 4. I keep mentioning Chaos Sorcerer, but that is because they are unoriginal. 5--- I will stop there, but there is more. Edit: Because all think this is important- 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orange Lightning Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 ocg errors everywhere. way OPed and ok pics. last 1 is good but you should make a tuner death sorceress Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 Really, that's all you have to say on it. I give an in depth(ish) report, but got bored and didn't bother to continue after about 8-10 bad things and all you say is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakkk1k93 Posted June 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 Well, urm thanks I guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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