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WOW, these are really creative and cool, a few errors but, who doesn't get'em?

 

for "Shadow Beast-Death Dragon" change the effect to this: This card cannot be destroyed by fusion Dragon-Type monsters or LIGHT-Type monsters. This card gains 100 atk for every "shadow Beast" monster on the Field.

i would change the piccy of your dragon because it is quite blurred, if you tupe in on google images "shadow dragon" on the bottom of the page 2nd from the right is quite cool :D

 

The owner of this card must pay 900 life points during the end phase (This is not optional). If you cannot, destroy this card. You can tribute this card to special summon any "Shadow Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

 

You didn't need the last part,

 

BUT THESE ARE WICKED :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

on your death archfiend: make this his effect:

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They're pretty OP, especially last one because you can protect it with something like "Prime Material Dragon", then every time it's destroyed, it comes back.

 

This card cannot be destroyed by fusion Dragon-Type monsters or LIGHT-Type monsters. This card gains 100 atk for every "shadow Beast" monster on the Field.

 

That's still wrong, I'm afraid.

 

"This card cannot be destroyed in battle by Fusion Dragon-Type monsters or LIGHT monsters. Increase the ATK of this card for every face-up "Shadow Beast" monster on the field."

 

7.5/10 OCG errors and a bit OP.

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another sweet card by ACECARDMAN22!!!! a little ocg error there though ;) where you put: If there is another monster card in your zone when you tribute this card, you cannot activate this effect.

 

you need it to be: If you control another monster card, you cannot activate this cards effect. :D

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ocgs -

archfeind - (this is not optional). then its effect is kinda effed up because you *have to pay* therefore he can be destroyed by refusing to pay. not ocg but annoyed me

ninga - if im not mistaken "from a warroir type monster" should be "with a Warrior-Type" check me on that 1 guys.

death dragon - listen to zetaru

rest are ok 8/10 (except ure newest might need a dash in name)

creative - 10/10

pics - 9/10

overall 9/10 XD good job

not too OP in relation to each other either, but i cant say that i couldnt think of ways to make them OPed soz 9/10 on that too

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another sweet card by ACECARDMAN22!!!! a little ocg error there though ;) where you put: If there is another monster card in your zone when you tribute this card' date=' you cannot activate this effect.

 

you need it to be: If you control another monster card, you cannot activate this cards effect. :D

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Still wrong again, I'm afraid.

 

While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot Special Summon monsters from the Graveyard. If this is the only monster you control, you can tribute it to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Shadow Beast" monster from your Graveyard. A monster Special Summoned by this card's effect cannot attack the turn it is Summoned.

 

I had to downgrade because it was OP. Plus, there's no need for that last sentence, jakkk.

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