> My Drawing of Naruto <

[DarthSuhail]

Howdy guys, first time I've uploaded a drawing and I think it turned out OK, the eyes went kinda dodgy when I colored so it looks kinda messed, and the arms aren't the same width... but I'll let you guys give me some help to get better and erm... I hope you enjoy.

 

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I didn't really wanna do the waist down or the hands cuz I always mess up there.

 

Thanks! :D

[RickiMinaj]

you mess up on the face too.. Sadly...

 

Also, as a jap, seeing my language poorly written is kinda offensive, so you might wanna work on that too.

 

Sharpen the shoulders, the chest and underarms need to tweaked big time and the face is misshaped. The hair needs work and so does the headband. On top of all that, the face details need improvement. All in all, you need to improve on your anatomy and your detail. And don't start coloring until all that has been corrected. Keep practicing though, I hope to see you improve and become AWESOME! =)

[DarthSuhail]

you mess up on the face too.. Sadly...

 

Also' date=' as a jap, seeing my language poorly written is kinda offensive, so you might wanna work on that too.

 

Sharpen the shoulders, the chest and underarms need to tweaked big time and the face is misshaped. The hair needs work and so does the headband. On top of all that, the face details need improvement. All in all, you need to improve on your anatomy and your detail. And don't start coloring until all that has been corrected. Keep practicing though, I hope to see you improve and become AWESOME! =)

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Thanks, I was copying it of a picture/video but I found it hard to do the rest so it went messed. I fail at writing Japanese I know xD I'll keep practicing, thanks :D.

[-DG-]

Too curvy and almost American Anime Rip Off-Looking, no offense. I'd suggest you use a better reference when drawing.