Ryvig Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 [attachment=18960]my first card on this site he is like a version of lava golem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Wrong section, use the Realistic cards section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryvig Posted January 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 sorry i got messed up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Wrong section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frunk Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Moved to Realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Some grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. Not too bad though! Work on the picture... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 the pic could be a bit better i guess but its an ok card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 SOme errors on everything 3.2/5.1:shock::-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 The pic is really bad and you have OCG, grammar and punctuation errors.Completly remake this card, it is also in the wrong section.2*/10 *For the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Pic is blurry, overpowered, grammar problems. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 6/10.. grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 Grammar, pic, and overall problems. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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