my Paper Mario TTYD cards comment plz

[krazyxgamer]

Well i played the game again (for about the 4th time)

beat it in 3 days and i wanted to make random cards

i did this quick and for fun so don't get mad if they suck...

the images are pretty bad but yeah i'm sorry i did all of these in like an hour lol

now i wonder... are goombas more like beasts or fiends???...

 

[spoiler=mario and his companions]

 

[spoiler=X-Nauts]

 

[spoiler=other enemies and bosses]

 

 

i know i missed some stuff but yeah i might work on those later lol

now i said MIGHT because i MIGHT get too lazy to do them lol

things like Gloomtail, shadow sirens, Rawk Hawk, and such...

[krazyxgamer]

Well i played the game again (for about the 4th time)

beat it in 3 days and i wanted to make random cards

i did this quick and for fun so don't get mad if they suck...

the images are pretty bad but yeah i'm sorry i did all of these in like an hour lol

now i wonder... are goombas more like beasts or fiends???...

 

[spoiler=mario and his companions]

 

[spoiler=X-Nauts]

 

[spoiler=other enemies and bosses]

 

 

i know i missed some stuff but yeah i might work on those later lol

now i said MIGHT because i MIGHT get too lazy to do them lol

things like Gloomtail, shadow sirens, Rawk Hawk, and such...

[ChaosInfinity]

These cards are really good, you've translated their abilities into effects very well. ^_^

However, you've got a fair few OCG errors in there - the main ones being that 'hand', 'destroy', 'monster', 'activate' and so on do not need to be capitalised.

Your Mario's companions all have an error too - their effects activate when you have a monster named "Mario" on the field, but your Mario card is actually named "PM - Mario", so he can't activate their effect. Better add his full name in there.

 

Here's some guidelines as to how to phrase your effects better. Obviously you'll need to adapt them.

For Koops:

For Yoshi:

For Bobbery:

For the X-Naut:

For the PHD:

 

Also, for Magnus and your Trap Card, you may want to change "you can activate/summon this card when..." to "you may only activate/summon this card when..."

Also, I think Goombas should be Plant-type ;P

[ChaosInfinity]

These cards are really good, you've translated their abilities into effects very well. ^_^

However, you've got a fair few OCG errors in there - the main ones being that 'hand', 'destroy', 'monster', 'activate' and so on do not need to be capitalised.

Your Mario's companions all have an error too - their effects activate when you have a monster named "Mario" on the field, but your Mario card is actually named "PM - Mario", so he can't activate their effect. Better add his full name in there.

 

Here's some guidelines as to how to phrase your effects better. Obviously you'll need to adapt them.

For Koops:

For Yoshi:

For Bobbery:

For the X-Naut:

For the PHD:

 

Also, for Magnus and your Trap Card, you may want to change "you can activate/summon this card when..." to "you may only activate/summon this card when..."

Also, I think Goombas should be Plant-type ;P

[jeremylim167]

most have no backgrounds, goomba is A paragoomba as it flies. minor OCG errors

 

Card - > card

 

and u know... un-capitallized some words

 

7.5/10

[jeremylim167]

most have no backgrounds, goomba is A paragoomba as it flies. minor OCG errors

 

Card - > card

 

and u know... un-capitallized some words

 

7.5/10

[martyman321]

not bad, a few grammer mistakes tho

[martyman321]

not bad, a few grammer mistakes tho

[krazyxgamer]

ahhhh OCG Error Storm!!!!!

now idk what's right and what's not right... someone told me to capitalize Hand, Card and such.. now idk what to do T_T

if i have nothing to do i will fix those but for now i will leave it

 

>>jeremylim167

i think i told you that "the images are pretty bad"

i'm sorry i'm too lazy to put backgrounds on them or finding a pic with backgrounds on them...

[thegreatmightypoo]

Pretty good, but again the effects have no downside, which makes me a sad panda :(.