My first (almost complete) set!!!!

[zaka159]

My updated and new cards are here!!!!!!

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Monsters ordered alphabetically

[spoiler=(Doodle Monsters)]

 

[spoiler=(Kausaurus)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[ This Monster can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play ]

If this monster is attacked by any other monster that does not have a Fire-type Attribute, this card is not sent to the Graveyard. Damage Calculation applies normally

If this monster is in defense position, you can half its attack points and attack directly

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Battle Caster)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[ This Monster can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play ]

If this monster is face up on the field, you can designate one "Doodle: Stick Figure" monster on the field that can:

• Attack Directly

or

• Can not be Attacked

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Color Ninja)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Con Artist)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[This card can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play]

This card raises his attack by an additional 300 points for each Equip Card attached to this card.

If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy an Equipped Card instead.

Only one "Con Gear:" card can be equipped to this monster.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Hero Isaac)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

"Doodle: Stick Figure Color Ninja" + 1 "Doodle: Stick Figure Monster"

[This card can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play]

If you half this cards attack, this card can attack Directly.

If the opponent has declared an attack on this monster, the opposing monster loses 500 attack points

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Hero Kailee)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

"Doodle: Stick Figure Color Ninja" + 1 "Doodle: Stick Figure Monster"

[This card can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play]

This card can not be destroyed by Spell or Trap cards.

Any monster that battle with this monster is destroyed at the End Phase of this Turn.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Necromancer)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[This card can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play]

This card starts with one "Death" counter. Each time a monster is sent to the graveyard, this card gains one "Death" counter. When this card has 3 "Death" counters, you can Special Summon a "Doodle: Stick Figure" monster from the Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Summoner)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[ This Monster can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play ]

[Flip]: You can summon a "Doodle: Stick Figure" monster with les than 1500 attack from your hand.

As long as this card is face up on the field you can summon 1 extra "Doodle: Stick Figure" monster

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Swordsman)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[ This Monster can only be summoned if the card "Blank Page" is in play ]

If this monster attacks a face-down defense-position monster, it is destroyed, and if it had a flip-effect, it is not activated

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Stick Figure Swordsman/Permanent Mode)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

[ This Monster can only be summoned if the cards "Blank Page" and "Written In Permanent Ink" is in play ]

This monster can not be Normal Summoned or Set. It can only be Tribute Summoned by sending the card "Doodle: Stick Figure Swordsman" from the Field to the Graveyard.

If this monster attacks a face-down defense-position monster, it can attack again, and if the face-down had a flip-effect, it is not activated.

This monster can only be destroyed by battle, by a Fire-Attribute monster, or a spell card

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Spells)]

[spoiler=(Blank Page)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Con Gear: Anime Hair)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Con Gear: Blood Facepaints)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Con Gear: Ninja Mask)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Con Gear: Tribal Mask)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Paper Recall)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Sketches from the End)]

[spoiler=(lore)]

This card can only be activated if you have the card "Doodle: Stick Figure Necromancer" on the field with 3 "Death" counters. Use 3 "Death" counters and summon 3 "Doodle: Stick Figure Skeleton" Tokens [Earth/ 1 Star/0 Attack/0 Defense]

If any "Doodle: Stick Figure" monster would be destroyed, you can sacrifice one "Doodle: Stick Figure Skeleton" token instead

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Written in Permanent Ink)]

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=(Traps)]

[spoiler=(Crumpled Up)]

 

 

[spoiler=(Papaer Cut)]

 

 

 

 

 

Kudos to anbu-of-sand for helpful criticism

2nd round of kudos goes to... Anbu-Of-Sand!!!! Yay *balloons, Confetti, Party Hats*

 

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[Astarael]

please dont post the link

post the cards

[Astarael]

click on card

copy + paste url from under card

done

[zaka159]

i finished

[Cowboy Dan]

Did you draw these pictures?

[zaka159]

yes,

the Dino was an half an hour class waster

page from google images

stickfigures for what looked cool on lined paper

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Welcome to the YCM. Looks like your cards need some uber working on. OCG Wise mostly.

 

Blank Page

You can Summon "Doodle" monsters as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field.

The effect is kinda bland. The whole archetype DEPENDS on this card to be playable. Which means you'll need to protect it with cards like Field Barrier and such. Makes sense to fit the theme though. So for now the card gets 5/10.

 

Doodle - Kausaurus

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" is on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by battle, except by a FIRE Attributed monster (damage calculation is applied normally).

Way to underpowered. Make it as high as Level 6. And if so, change it's DEF to as high as 2800. I'd add at least another effect to make it somewhat playable. Maybe have it inflict piercing damage? Or an effect that supports the archetype. So the rate for now is 6.2/10

 

Doodle - Stick Figure Healer

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" is on the field. Once per turn, while this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can select 1 "Doodle" monster you control. The selected monster can attack directly, OR cannot be destroyed by battle the turn you activate this effect.

Pretty decent effect. Seeing how it can let a monster you control attack directly or protect it by battle for a turn. The problem is, the name doesn't match the effect at all. So a 4/10

 

Doodle - Stick Figure Summoner

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" is on the field. When this card is Flip Summoned or flipped over, you can Special Summon 1 "Doodle" monster with 1500 ATK or less from your hand (ignoring the summoning conditions). As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can Normal Summon 1 additional time each turn, as long as the additional Normal Summon is for the Normal Summon of a "Doodle" monster.

This effect is pretty dang good as a swarmer. Might be somewhat OP'd though, just somehow. It also has potential when it's face-down, so it's kinda a win-win if it gets destroyed or not. This gets a 7.5/10

 

Doodle - Stick Figure Swordsman

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" is on the field. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Looks like it should be an effect monster not a vanilla. A basic piercing monster. Nothing that supports the archetype that much. 3/10

 

Overall, the archetype could need some work. The basic thing that they all have in common is that they need Blank Page on the field to be summoned. I suggest putting at least something else in the effects that link them all together. For example, Lightsworns are linked together by their milling effects and how they use that to their advantage. Gladiator Beasts are linked together by how they gain their additional effects when summoned by the deck by their other Gladiator Beast. The whole archetype gets a solid 8/10 overall for the great attempt as a new member of the YCM.

[Inferno I20]

please edit your first post as well so people can see the new cards instead of scrolling down to find them

[arsenjam]

lol mannn super funnY!!!!!

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Thank you for the kudos on the first post. I'll find the time to fix/rate these cards.

But for now, you still have a few OCG errors to fix at the least.

But don't worry, you'll get better at it overtime.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Okay like I said, you should fix the OCG for the cards I already critiqued. Now for the new cards,

And the cards that you changed the effects to. I'll go by order from the newest cards to the oldest cards you re-edited.

 

Crumpled Up

If a face-up "Doodle" monster would be destroyed by battle, negate the attack and remove the attacking monster from play.

I'm pretty sure thats how you wanted to word it out. If so, the card is pretty much the real card Dimensional Prison. But, for "Doodle" monsters. I'd think of something more creative. So for now, this card gets a rating of 3.2/10 for the attempt. Or you might be going for something like this:

If a face-up "Doodle" monster would be destroyed by battle, negate the attack and remove from play the "Doodle" monster.

I'm guessing you were going for this since I saw the card Paper Recall. A decent combo with the cards. Might not be worth it though. Should at least add another effect to piss off your opponent. For example, after the "Doodle" monster is RFP, your opponent takes damage equal to the ATK of the attacking monster? For now, a 3.8/10

 

Doodle - Stick Figure Necromancer

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" is on the field. When this card is Summoned, place 1 Death Counter on it (max.3). Each time a monster is sent to the Graveyard, place 1 Death Counter on this card. You can remove 3 Death Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Doodle" monster from your deck (ignoring the summoning conditions).

Seems somewhat slow IMO. It has basic swarm potential for Doodle's. Also IMO, has better swarm potential then Doodle - Stick Figure Summoner. But it being a Necromancer, looks more like it would Special Summon from the Graveyard and not the Deck. Overall, 7.8/10

 

Doodle - Stick Figure Swordsman/Permanent Mode

This card can only be Summoned while "Blank Page" and "Written in Permanent Ink" is on the field. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 face-up "Doodle - Stick Figure Swordsman" on your side of the field. If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation (flip effects are not activated at this time).

Pretty much a stronger version of the original monster. I thought since it was called Permanent Mode, I thought there would be an effect that would have it like, not be destroyed by card effects or something. So the card gets only a 4.2/10 Oh and you might have to post the lore for some of these cards with long effects.

 

Paper Cut

Activate only when a "Doodle" monster is destroyed by battle. Decrease the ATK of the attacking monster to 0.

A simple, yet helpful effect. Actually has some potential in "Doodle" decks. Nothing else to say with the short effect. 8.4/10 this card gets as it's rating.

 

Paper Recall

Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard and select 2 removed from play "Doodle" monsters. Add them to your hand.

This card also has some potential. Could be worked with cards like Dimensional Fissure, Macro Cosmo's,Crumpled Up...decent recycling for the deck. So this card gets an 8.6/10

 

Sketches from the End

This card can only be activated while you control a "Doodle - Stick Figure Necromancer" with 3 Death Counters on it. Remove the 3 Death Counter from the selected "Doodle - Stick Figure Necromancer" and Special Summon 3 "Doodle - Stick Figure Skeletons Tokens" (Zombie-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) on your side of the field. If a "Doodle - Stick Figure Necromancer" would be destroyed, you can tribute 1 "Doodle - Stick Figure Skeleton Token" instead.

This card has lots of potential. It kinda sucks it only protects the Necromancer though. Their are a few ways to have this card gain more potential. First, change it to a Quick-Play Spell Card or a Normal/Counter Trap Card. That way it gains stall potential. Second, have it so it can protect all "Doodle" monsters, instead of just the Necromancer. But for now, the card gets a 5.8/10

 

Written in Permanent Ink

As long as you control 1 face-up "Doodle" monster, "Blank Page" and this card cannot be destroyed by card effects.

Kinda OP'd if you ask me. Should be somewhat more like Assault Mode Activate. Also has no potential in a deck except for summoning a Permanent Mode and for protecting a Field Spell. Change the effect fully to fit it's name. Have it like, protect monsters from card effects as long as you have something as a drawback. This card gets a 2/10.

 

Overall, re-fix the OCG for the ones I well, fixed. Including the older ones too. I know a few of the other older cards has their effects change, but I'll do them later. The archetype now gets an 8.4/10

[psychicplayer]

ummmm.... uhh... strangest set i've ever seen. It all makes sense though!

[zaka159]

The Necromancer effect was a typo, it should say graveyard...

I have about 10 new cards. but i need to categorize them, and i don't know how (categorize like the way anbu-of-sand's first archetype page is)

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Ah. If you don't know, Use this code to put your cards in spoilers:

 

[spoiler=(Name Here)]
Stuff Here
[/spoiler]

[senatheEND]

umm wtf @.@

 

2/10

[zaka159]

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