judah8900 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 First ever threadEnjoy and tips are welcomePlease comment Picture credit in in the left under the pictureEach Mech's name is based on an ancient greek city-state New Ones (Updated OCG)[spoiler=Assault Mech Corinth] [spoiler=Assault Mech Samos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Spartanacus] [spoiler=Assault Mech Creatos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Delphis] [spoiler=Assault Mech Argos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Atheneas] [spoiler=Assault Mech Olympias] [spoiler=Assault Mech Rhodus] [spoiler=Assault Mech Delonas] Old Ones [spoiler=Assault Mech Corinth Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Samos Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Spartanacus Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Creatos Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Delphis Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Argos Old] [spoiler=Assault Mech Atheneas Old] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Some fixes contain suggestions Corinth OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. If this is the only Machine-Type Monster you control, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower Machine-Type Monster from your hand. Samos OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card to destroy the attacking monster. Spartanacus OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type Monster from your Graveyard. Creatos OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can select 1 Level 4 or lower Machine-Type Monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Delphis OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. When this card is selected as an attack target, your opponent must discard 1 card. Argos OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. When this card is destroyed, you can draw up to 2 cards. Athenas OCG FixThis card can not be destroyed by card effects. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Machine-Type Monster from your hand. Overall, very good job. Nice pics. Nice concept. 9.5/10 beginner-adjusted rating. 8/10 otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arsenjam Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 dude just simply awsome love argos and samos 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 these r kewl8/10 they remond me of that stoopid show in cartoon networkIGPX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 pretty ok but you need to brush up on some OCG lessons :Dgreat for a first set though (even though my first set is better...no! bad Inferno! XDi do like the general theme though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judah8900 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Thank you all, I will fix the OCG errors now and add a few new ones [spoiler=Assault Mech Corinth] [spoiler=Assault Mech Samos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Spartanacus] [spoiler=Assault Mech Creatos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Delphis] [spoiler=Assault Mech Argos] [spoiler=Assault Mech Atheneas] [spoiler=Assault Mech Olympias] [spoiler=Assault Mech Rhodus] [spoiler=Assault Mech Delonas] pretty ok but you need to brush up on some OCG lessons :Dgreat for a first set though (even though my first set is better...no! bad Inferno! XDi do like the general theme thoughI dont mind inferno. Your first set is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 gr8 i luv delonas but some of them hv ocg errors8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judah8900 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Ya I'm not good with OCG. My forte is deck building, hence why my monsers are all so compatible with each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 I like them. I'd actually use a few in a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judah8900 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 oh "can not" = "cannot""may" = "can""one" = "1" also try to use spoilers so the thread doesnt become clogged so people can read the effects to, etc. makes it look neater. and edit your first post so people can see the new cards without scrolling down now they are real machines >:Doh and thank you for complimenting on my set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 argos is OP immediate +1 no setup requiredcornith has spelling errorsset is great thoughpretty good cards 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 i agree with chuerta, decrease the drawing from 2 to 1yay for spoilers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judah8900 Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Thank you all for helping me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 nice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judah8900 Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 New cards coming up. Some time soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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