Gin The Silver Samurai [please read story and tell me what you think]

[holymaic]

here

 

 

credit to Father Wolf for the second pic

which is better?

 

read story and tell me what you think please

[Lexadin]

Pic is squished.

The current influence of 4kids won't let the word "kill" YGO apear.

Story sounds typical.

Idea is ok.

A 7/10

[holymaic]

Pic is squished.

The current influence of 4kids won't let the word "kill" YGO apear.

Story sounds typical.

Idea is ok.

A 7/10

 

thank you

[Wanderley]

try this image and credit Father Wolf for it

[holymaic]

try this image and credit Father Wolf for it

 

thank you :)

[Lexadin]

Second is way better then the first.

[holymaic]

Second is way better then the first.

 

 

thank you