SirtyStan Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Thy're really cheap! On sale in select stores now! Come buy a box today!@ Spikeball: It says "OP'edness/effect" I gave it a 1/2 because it needed MUCH more flavour text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dementuo Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I wanna enter too! Name: Dementuo [spoiler=My Card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dementuo Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I wanna enter too! Name: Dementuo [spoiler=My Card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dementuo Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I wanna enter too! Name: Dementuo [spoiler=My Card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 can i join? Name: CrocrulerCard: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 can i join? Name: CrocrulerCard: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 can i join? Name: CrocrulerCard: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 may i join inuser name: Dranzer123Here is my card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 may i join inuser name: Dranzer123Here is my card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 may i join inuser name: Dranzer123Here is my card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Dementuo - Primary Dragon Force Originality: 0,5/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 0,5/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 6,5/10. FINAL NOTES: Dragon Force = Beast? Thats kinda weird... I respect the one who drew the picture but I don't think it fits well in the card (Also the signature is still included! Anyway the Lore could be much bigger. Apart from that it's balanced.---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> EDIT:Crocruler - Luna, the Moon Goddess Originality: 1,5/2Spelling/OCG: 2/3Picture: 1/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 7/10. FINAL NOTES: A beautiful goddess is even more beautiful with a sharp image. This one is rather blurry. Anyway the lore was (at least for me) a bit unintelligible (since English isn't my mother tongue, I wasn't sure about the meaning). Your card is balanced (regarding ATK/DEF/etc).---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> @Dranzer123: Sorry to disappoint you but all (9) slots are full so you can't participate here. Maybe Syrtristan gives you an extra slot but I don't zhink so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Dementuo - Primary Dragon Force Originality: 0,5/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 0,5/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 6,5/10. FINAL NOTES: Dragon Force = Beast? Thats kinda weird... I respect the one who drew the picture but I don't think it fits well in the card (Also the signature is still included! Anyway the Lore could be much bigger. Apart from that it's balanced.---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> EDIT:Crocruler - Luna, the Moon Goddess Originality: 1,5/2Spelling/OCG: 2/3Picture: 1/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 7/10. FINAL NOTES: A beautiful goddess is even more beautiful with a sharp image. This one is rather blurry. Anyway the lore was (at least for me) a bit unintelligible (since English isn't my mother tongue, I wasn't sure about the meaning). Your card is balanced (regarding ATK/DEF/etc).---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> @Dranzer123: Sorry to disappoint you but all (9) slots are full so you can't participate here. Maybe Syrtristan gives you an extra slot but I don't zhink so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Dementuo - Primary Dragon Force Originality: 0,5/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 0,5/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 6,5/10. FINAL NOTES: Dragon Force = Beast? Thats kinda weird... I respect the one who drew the picture but I don't think it fits well in the card (Also the signature is still included! Anyway the Lore could be much bigger. Apart from that it's balanced.---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> EDIT:Crocruler - Luna, the Moon Goddess Originality: 1,5/2Spelling/OCG: 2/3Picture: 1/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 7/10. FINAL NOTES: A beautiful goddess is even more beautiful with a sharp image. This one is rather blurry. Anyway the lore was (at least for me) a bit unintelligible (since English isn't my mother tongue, I wasn't sure about the meaning). Your card is balanced (regarding ATK/DEF/etc).---------------------------------------------------------------------->>> @Dranzer123: Sorry to disappoint you but all (9) slots are full so you can't participate here. Maybe Syrtristan gives you an extra slot but I don't zhink so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 All entries are full... But I'll play nice and give you a 10th slot. So it'll work a bit differently. Also, Round 1 will be finished when each judge has judged every card, or on July 7th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 All entries are full... But I'll play nice and give you a 10th slot. So it'll work a bit differently. Also, Round 1 will be finished when each judge has judged every card, or on July 7th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel killer315 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 check this out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 I'm sorry.. Angel Killer, I was nice to him, but it won't work with 11 Contestants... So you cannot join. Anyways, bump ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 thank you so much, you're nice Sirtrystan 5once again thank you so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 FINAL CARD RATINGS: Dementuo's card: Primary Dragon Force Originality: 1/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 2/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1/2 Total: 8.0/10. FINAL NOTES: All in all, the card is fine. It's just a bit unoriginal. I've seen WAAAAAY too many Element Dragons during my career as a card maker. Also, you need much more flavour text. I'm curious to know the card's background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PARANOiA_brother_Sparky Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Ratings coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Crocruler's card: Luna, the Moon Goddess Originality: 2/2Spelling/OCG: 2.5/3Picture: 1/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 0.5/1OP'edness/Effect: 1.5/2 Total: 7.5/10. FINAL NOTES: Very original. The Spelling/OCG is near perfect. However, you lost marks in the Set number because most sets have 3 numbers. In other words, it should say "001" instead of "01". I've said this many times: people need more flavour text! The picture is also fuzzy and stretched.Dranzer123's card: Garra Originality: 1/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 2/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 0/1OP'edness/Effect: 2/2 Total: 8.0/10. FINAL NOTES: Not so original because the idea is from the manga "Naruto". I love the picture, though! Your spelling is just fine, too. However, you completely bombed on the Minor Details section, because you put numbers in the "Circulation" area of the card. The "Circulation" area should only be used to mark if it's a 1st Edition or a LIMITED EDITION card. Sadly, even when you put that in, the small sticker in the bottom-right corner does not turn gold. So it'd be bet if you just put in nothing at all. Also, in the Set Name/Number area, you put at max 3 numbers in the Set Number section, and actual letters in the Set Name area. Otherwise, it looks fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dementuo Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Dementuo - Primary Dragon Force Originality: 0' date='5/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 0,5/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 1/1OP'edness/Effect: 1,5/2 Total: 6,5/10. FINAL NOTES: Dragon Force = Beast? Thats kinda weird... I respect the one who drew the picture but I don't think it fits well in the card (Also the signature is still included! Anyway the Lore could be much bigger. Apart from that it's balanced.[/quote'] Yeah...About that. That was an error in the text. I really meant for it to be Dragon-Type, but oh well. I'll make sure to keep that in mind in the next round. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 I will now total up the current results. I will also PM the Judges as a reminder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Bumpity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Dranzer123 - Gaara Originality: 1/2Spelling/OCG: 3/3Picture: 1/2Minor Details (Set name/number, Code, date/creator): 0/1OP'edness/Effect: 2/2 Total: 7/10. FINAL NOTES: it's okay you made a Pop-Culture card. The lore matches gaara perfectly and the card is also balanced but you messed up the minor details. Also I think there is a better picture for gaara (why did you use the one where he takes a quiz?). By the way: Since gaara is that strong the LV (as well as ATK/DEF) might be higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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