Well I have to thank two guys for this card...Auxiliary and Zeaux....heres my attempt

[liza banks]

Ok so I have been around for a little while, and I have been watching you guys post cards and what not, but I seem to enjoy and learn the most from ~Auxiliary~ and Zeaux.

 

~Auxiliary~ has perfect OCG, finds the perfect pic, and always amazes me with how playable and strategic his cards are.

 

Zeaux has solid OCG (gets it fixed by Auxiliary lol), even better pics, and his originality is mind blowing (love diamond golem by the way)

 

So this probably sounds really weird cause I have never even posted on ur threads, but I feel I have learned everything from u two and I feel like I kno u guys. So heres my attempt. I hope it lives up to ur expectations!!!!!!

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. This card gains 300 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card returns from the field to your hand you can draw 1 card.

[Toot]

Kewl pic but it has some OCG errors

i think thats all

8/10

[touzaikokon]

You didn't say what you can Special Summon when this card is Normal Summoned...you just said "Special Summon 1." 1 what? Other than that, very good, very creative.

[Toot]

lolz i didnt notice that

[.Impact]

Thanks liza thats very sweet of you to say that

Now onto the card, SPIRTS FTW

However i feel because of its benfits for its summoning and possbile hige amount of ATK it should require 2 Tributes. Also it seemed u were making part of the effect and stopped....lol

anyway fix that and this is the best 1 star card ive ever seen

[Guest Lily]

Lily's New Review #2

 

OCG~

 

Grah, bad OCG errors are bad.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand after it is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, you can destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field your opponent controls. During the turn this card was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up, you can Special Summon 1 ?. This card gains 300 ATK for each DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card returns to your hand, you can draw 1 card.

 

That should of fixed most of it up for you.

 

Playability~

 

Let's see here. By the way you have worded it... You Tribute a monster for this card to be returned to the hand straight away, destroying 1 card and drawing 1 card in the process. To be entirely honest... This card would see little to no use at all if it was real.

 

The reason why? You're Tributing 1 monster, potentially leaving yourself open. You could just run Caius over this. Heck, Caius even has more ATK and it's effect is potentially more lethal.

 

Miscellaneous~

 

The picture is great. The holo could be better.

 

Final Verdict~

 

Not that good... But not that bad either.

[liza banks]

thanks for the rate!!!!

[.Impact]

well iwas thinking the same thing lily but lets also think that

1. its a spirit monster, hard for anyone

2. Shes a 1 star with 4 cards.

 

this is pretty immpressive

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howver liza she is correct about the effect it seemed a bit rushed and old ocg keep up the good work

[RickiMinaj]

This is broken. Drawing one card, adding spells from your deck to your hand, and all to, on a repeated basis. Why don't you just add "Oh and this card can win the duel when summoned" on to the card effect and call it a day. Tone down the effect big time, and remove the whole spell card form your deck thing. It's good and all, it's just way too broken.

[liza banks]

ok i fixed it lily and auxiliary thanks for the help

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and u too essence

[Zeaux]

Ya, you really know us... lol

Thanks for that Liza ! <3

Everything here seems to fit with the card. The only problem I see is that... "During the turn this card was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up you can Special Summon 1"

I don't get it :/

Anyway, creativity is pretty good there; Just make it a Level 8 and you should be fine. Or maybe remove the ATK gain part, fix the "Special Summon 1." part and leave it as it is;

Image is awesome and your OCG is better than mine; only 1 thing:

 

(Old OCG) on your opponent's side of the field = your opponent controls (New OCG)

 

Try to use the new OCG if you can, but the old is not wrong, don't worry.

Keep it up Liza! <3

[Guest Lily]

This is broken. Drawing one card' date=' adding spells from your deck to your hand, and all to, on a repeated basis. Why don't you just add "Oh and this card can win the duel when summoned" on to the card effect and call it a day. Tone down the effect big time, and remove the whole spell card form your deck thing. It's good and all, it's just way too broken.

[/quote']

 

...Seriously?

A Level 7 Spirit like this. (Tl;dr version) It's actually fine if (s)he takes out the Spell Card thing.

Let's put it like this. You Tribute 2 monsters for this, which is a -2, to destroy 1 card your opponent controls, -1 to your opponent, add a Spell Card from your Deck to your hand, +1, have a monster for a turn. Then, it returns to your hand during the End Phase and you draw 1 card, a +1. It can be strong with the Spell Card thing, yes, but with it removed it's fine.

[.Impact]

i completely agree with zeaux and essence on this. I didnt want u to add more of an effect to the card on this when you had special summon 1. just get rid of it. and the old ocg as well.

[RickiMinaj]

This is broken. Drawing one card' date=' adding spells from your deck to your hand, and all to, on a repeated basis. Why don't you just add "Oh and this card can win the duel when summoned" on to the card effect and call it a day. Tone down the effect big time, and remove the whole spell card form your deck thing. It's good and all, it's just way too broken.

[/quote']

 

...Seriously?

A Level 7 Spirit like this. (Tl;dr version) It's actually fine if (s)he takes out the Spell Card thing.

Let's put it like this. You Tribute 2 monsters for this, which is a -2, to destroy 1 card your opponent controls, -1 to your opponent, add a Spell Card from your Deck to your hand, +1, have a monster for a turn. Then, it returns to your hand during the End Phase and you draw 1 card, a +1.

 

7 stars... There we go. I swear I saw it at level six at first. if it's level 7, then you know what people, go for it!

[.Impact]

no essence u were right she fixed the stars

[Inferno I20]

pretty good card that can actually be of use when it returns to your hand

nothing else to say about this card

OCG is great not bad

 

for a new member this is just beyond brilliant

9.7/10

+rep for you!