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|Freedom the Santuary Guardian| 8 | 2800 | 2500 |

1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fairy-Type monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 Fairy-Type monster on the field, to Special Summon 1 monster with the same Level as the destroyed Monster from the owner's Graveyard. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, inflict damge equal the ATK of the Special Summoned monster to your opponent's life points.

 

 

 

I don't really want to use this pic yet but, haiz, since I'm taking abreak from my Blood Archetype. *Sobs* Btw got a Black-wing Dragon from my very first booster pack from Shinning Darkness (*3D foil*).

 

Anyway rate, comments and critics and OCG edit is kindly needed (wants improve OCG). If it's OP, please kindly tell me where I could change in any of the effects if you would please. Thanks

 

Can't wait to finich my Blood Series =w=

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Wow 3 cards 1 Star and you cards are The Double of good better than Mines ! YOU ONLY MADED 3 CARDS and you make Perfect cards. Rep/10

 

Thanks For the comments. This is only my second card though, I just put in more effot in making these cards cause i really hope I could make a real card some day =w=

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cool but picture got a little messsed up.. 9.9/10

 

I guess it's because of the loading of the image' date=' cause it's quite a big file. If you meant that it's grainy, it is because I wanted to create a 3D foil effect for the card itself. Thanks for your ratings by the way

 

Wayy to grainy! And broken...

 

Wow, people really dont know the meaning of overpowered these days. Bringing out the synchro isn't too hard, and with all the benefits, it really is overpowering. Remove the damaging life points effect. Then it should be balanced.

 

It's grainy because I wanted to create a 3D foil effect for the card itself. I guess I need to find a better way to make a 3D foil.

 

As for summoning of synchro monsters, I did actually tried limiting the Synchro materials to certain degree. which makes it "hard" to summon. As for the damaging life points effect, it has to be activated when the spell card is on the field. Maybe I should remove the search effect. And I was hoping this card could at least be a limited card.

 

Thanks for the comments btw =]

 

EPIC. 10/10 and 1 rep

 

Thanks for the ratings and rep =]

 

Any OCG fixes?

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Besides the whole OP'dness factor in this, you got some skillz.

 

May wanna take out one of those extra effects and/or add some extra Summoning conditions.

 

And honestly, I think the reason people are so freaked out about this card's supposed amazingness is because the pic and extra visual effects. Don't get me wrong, the card isn't bad, especially for your second card evar, but the extra visual effects are probably making this card seem somehow better. But it is an amazing pic.

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It appears OPed. Destroying one monster is fine' date=' but gaining and inflicting and summoning is overdoing it.

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Besides the whole OP'dness factor in this' date=' you got some skillz.

 

May wanna take out one of those extra effects and/or add some extra Summoning conditions.

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I edited the effect of the card so it wouldn't be so OPed thanks on the advices. the follow Lore is the edited version[spoiler=Freedom the Santuary guardian]

When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 Fairy-Type monster on the field, to Special Summon 1 monster with the same Level as the destroyed Monster from the owner's Graveyard. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, inflict damge equal the ATK of the Special Summoned monster to your opponent's life points.

 

 

And honestly' date=' I think the reason people are so freaked out about this card's supposed amazingness is because the pic and extra visual effects. Don't get me wrong, the card isn't bad, especially for your second card evar, but the extra visual effects are probably making this card seem somehow better. But it is an amazing pic.

[/quote']I really hope that everyone would like the picture cause I did put my time in it. I appreciate all your good comments for me. But i actually really wanted to become a better Card Maker though, so currently now I'm improving my balancing skills effect creativity. I really hope you guys would be there to give me more advice and comments to help me out. Thanks Alot

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Points, well, for buying stuff in Shops and Requests.

Your reputation literally shows how trustable and good you are.

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