ridle monkey Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 First good, saved cards, no particular set. Hope you like 'em! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neariox Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Major ocg mistakes. Good for first cards. nice pictures. Add color to snake summoner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Well, they're simple, but hey, at least you didn't over-extend on your first shot. Your OCG needs work, so here are OCG fixes. Snake Summoner:You can Normal Summon or Set 1 extra monster. Token Magician:Once per turn, you can Special Summon up to 2 "Magician Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/LIGHT/ATK 0/DEF 0).{NOTE: You have to specify the name of the token and the token's stats. I improvised here.}Welder Dog:This card gains 500 ATK for each card equipped to it. Also, each of those need a drawback to balance it, especially the first two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ridle monkey Posted June 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Thanks I new something was wrong with ocg im not good with it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trixter Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 4/10i didn't give EPIC FAIL cause your new.they're a bit bland mate, you could do well adding more effect ~Trixter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 better pics and ocg are in order4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 giv the first one color, and i would say that the second one is hitler/10 (OP'd) but ur new so just work on it and learn from others Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ancient gear master Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 sanke summoner has too high of a attack for a 4 level monster without a catch to the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Snake Summoner is quite a bit OP'ed, letting you get out a 2000 no cost beatstick with a double summon each turn. For token knight, please describe what kind of token that it summons. For the dog, it seems like a Maha Vailo. Still, definitely not bad for your best cards. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampYoshi101 Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Snake Summoner is overpowered, and has no color, but their pretty good for a start.Keep at it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ridle monkey Posted June 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Thanks guys and i wanted to know where you guys get your pics. Pm me. I got them on google. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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