starboy417 Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 No other dragon or warrior type can be targeted for a attack except this card. Every time a monster card is summoned this card gets a dragon token. When this card has 3 dragon tokens you can tribute this card and the tokens to special summon "Dragon of Protection" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. This card can only attack face up cards. Every time a trap card is activated this card gets a dragon token. When this card has 3 dragon tokens you can tribute this card and the tokens for "Dragon of the Rage" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. Every time this card destroys a monster this card gets a dragon token. When this card has 3 dragon tokens you can tribute this card and the tokens for "Dragon of the Forsaken" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. Every time a spell card is activated this card gets a dragon token. When this card has 3 dragon tokens you can tribute this card and the tokens for "Dragon of the Living" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. This card has to attack first. This card can attack again if the last card he destroyed was a monster. This card cannot attack directly unless your opponent’s field is empty. If there are no face up monster cards on your opponent’s side of the field this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per a turn you can special summon one monster card from your graveyard until your end phase. No other dragon or warrior type can be targeted for a attack except this card. "Dragon of Protection"+"Dragon of Rage"+"Dragon of the Forsaken"+"Dragon of the Living"This card gains 1000 attack for every dragon in the graveyard. This card gains 100 attack for every warrior type in the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 many, many ocg errors. "face up" should be "face-up", "graveyard" should be "Graveyard", "one" should be "1", "special summon" should be "Special Summon". these are most of the errors, but not all. images could be much better, 6.5/10 good try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted June 30, 2010 Report Share Posted June 30, 2010 Overall these are very commendable. It appears that much thought went into these and as a result you have some-half decent cards. However they are riddles with flaws. Firstly the OCG is off and cluttered, I hate OCG too but after a while it will become second nature, the way to improve is to look at other cards, look at how they are worded, capital letters etc. The images are very good and create your dragon theme very nicely. Overall 7.25/10 Keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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