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my first attempt at this archetype ddnt get much attention. lets try again.

 

[spoiler=THE STORY]

it's the year 2390...and the animals want their land back. They are tired of being neglected, put into zoos, and made into attractions. Sick and tired of all the hate towards their land, their trees, their lakes their oceans. After the BP Oil Spill many centuries before, the advanced creatures of the unknown deep formed an alliance. The Kraken, The Loch Ness monster and Godzilla came to form the AOAR (assosciation of animal rights) they had lied low for as long as they could, but the word spread. animals around the world gained the ability to speak and communicate over the centuries, and wanted their revenge. the year of 2390, many animals attacked, using the human's own weapons against them. The Beasts took advantage of the advanced machinery, and they themselves became machines...the year of 2390, who will win..?

 

 

 

THE MONSTERS

 

[spoiler=Mechanical Mammoth]

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This card can be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of a Beast-Machine monster.

 

 

[spoiler=Gatling Trunk Mammoth]

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This card can and must attack all Warrior and Machine-Warrior monsters on your Opponents side of the field. This card gains 200 ATK for each Beast and Beast-Machine monster on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed increase 1 Beast-Machine-Type monster's ATK by 300

 

 

[spoiler=Behemoth of the Cosmos]

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When this card is selected as an attack target, the attacking monster and this card are returned to their owner's hands.

 

 

[spoiler=Aerospacial Lion]

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You can Special Summon this card without a Tribute if your opponent has a Warrior or Warrior-Machine-Type on their side of the field. When this card is Summoned successfully, select 1 card on your side of the field. As long as this card remains on the field, the selected monster cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

 

[spoiler=Rehabilitated Bird of Demise]

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1 Beast-Machine Tuner+1 non-tuner

This card is also treated as a Winged-Beast-Type. When this card is Synchro Summoned, all cards on the field have their effects negated until the end of the turn. if all of your opponent's monster card zones are occupied, this card can attack your opponent directly.

 

 

[spoiler=Intergalactic Bionic Enforcer]

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1 Tuner+1 Warrior-Machine non-Tuner

As long as this card is on the field in Attack Position, no Spell cards that designate a target can be activated. When a monster on your side of the field is attacked, you can discard 1 card to negate the attack, and switch the attacked monster into Face-Down Defence Postion. That monsters Position cannot be changed for the rest of the duel.

 

 

[spoiler=MechaniFormed Duke]

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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

- During your Main Phase 1, you can switch the Postition of 1 monster from Attack Postition to Defence Position and vice versa.

 

 

[spoiler=Pixl, The Beast Exterminator]

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When this card is Summoned, your opponent must discard 1 Beast-Machine or Beast-Type monster from their hand, deck or on the field. If they cannot do this, they take 800 Damage. When this card attacks a Defence Postion monster, it is switched to Face-Up Attack Postion.

 

 

FROM JAZINKAY'S ARCHIVE

 

TELL MEH WAT U THINK, MORE TO COME

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