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mickey-c

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I like this its novel, quaint and interesting. Ive never seen that pic before and it a very good one, The effect itself is interesting and quite apt. My only problems were with the ocg, there are slight errors but nothing major really. Also for an image so stunning I would have used it for a majorly powerful card, but hey; thats me!!!

 

Overall: 7/10 a solid effort and a great way to start off your card making skills. Keep up the good work

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When this card selects a monster on your opponent's side of the field as an attack target, toss a coin. If the result is Heads, decrease the ATK and DEF of the selected monster by half, if the result is Tails, the ATK and DEF of this card is halved.

 

Can you see how I have tidied it up a bit??

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Original

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Grammar

 

Official

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Grammar >_>

 

(The >_> is not part of it)

 

The OCG is bad, like he said, the picture is pretty good, like he said, the job is pretty good, like he said, and the rate is 7.5/10, like he said.

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