tommers2008 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Here is a Blackwing monster card that i made, it was for a contest so just said id post it see what ye all taught. [align=center]Effect - When this card is Summoned by the effect of another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target you can, send this card from the field to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Here is a Blackwing monster card that i made, it was for a contest so just said id post it see what ye all taught. [align=center]Effect - When this card is Summoned by the effect of another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target you can, send this card from the field to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Here is a Blackwing monster card that i made, it was for a contest so just said id post it see what ye all taught. [align=center]Effect - When this card is Summoned by the effect of another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target you can, send this card from the field to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 OCG is correct in my opinion,Good Picture But you are using to much effects, meking this card OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 OCG is correct in my opinion,Good Picture But you are using to much effects, meking this card OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 OCG is correct in my opinion,Good Picture But you are using to much effects, meking this card OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 When this card is Summoned by the effect of [took away the "a"] another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand [took away the comma] to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Just change that, there was the only errors, the card are great, and the pic to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 When this card is Summoned by the effect of [took away the "a"] another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand [took away the comma] to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Just change that, there was the only errors, the card are great, and the pic to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 When this card is Summoned by the effect of [took away the "a"] another "Blackwing" monster, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If another "Blackwing" monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, you can discard 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand [took away the comma] to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. Just change that, there was the only errors, the card are great, and the pic to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 great pic neeat effect well balance i think 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 great pic neeat effect well balance i think 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crocruler Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 great pic neeat effect well balance i think 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well AquaMaster did the OCG Corrections already so i think this is a Great Card only you need to State from where you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the Attack. From the hand, Field or Deck. But anyhow i think this Card deserves an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well AquaMaster did the OCG Corrections already so i think this is a Great Card only you need to State from where you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the Attack. From the hand, Field or Deck. But anyhow i think this Card deserves an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well AquaMaster did the OCG Corrections already so i think this is a Great Card only you need to State from where you can send this card to the Graveyard to negate the Attack. From the hand, Field or Deck. But anyhow i think this Card deserves an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great pic, but is it a mix of 2 pics or an existing 1, cause that's definately polymerization in the background, OCG seems fine but yea OPd for sure, though u have added drawbacks, overall it fits nice with the Archtype good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great pic, but is it a mix of 2 pics or an existing 1, cause that's definately polymerization in the background, OCG seems fine but yea OPd for sure, though u have added drawbacks, overall it fits nice with the Archtype good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Great pic, but is it a mix of 2 pics or an existing 1, cause that's definately polymerization in the background, OCG seems fine but yea OPd for sure, though u have added drawbacks, overall it fits nice with the Archtype good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Nice one. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Nice one. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Nice one. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 this is good real good9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 this is good real good9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 this is good real good9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Thanks for the comments, im pretty sure Wanderley made the pic. Aqua thanks for OCG fix Light - from field i will put that in now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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