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I decided to make a crossover fanfic, a VERY BIG crossover, thus the name. Don't worry, more universes will be introduced soon. Not to mention that there will be new characters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prolouge]

It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one. It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes. Little did anyone know, this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur – mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings. Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning. It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben. “Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,” Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood. He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian. Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?” the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left. He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat. “Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger. His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind. Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him. “Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison. “Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted. “Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,” a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella. “Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!” Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

 

“So, Ben Tennyson is here, huh? Interesting…” the Barton regulars, and Rath, turned to the north, and saw a humongous humanoid creature, about a hundred and ten feet tall. It had a fin-like protrusion on its head and looked like one of Ben’s favourite Aliens – Way Big, with the exception of not having an Ultimatrix emblem on him, and he had cyan around him instead of red. His yellow eyes stared down on the Gaians. Not even Ben’s biggest alien, Way Big, or Ben’s strongest Alien, Alien X could defeat this almost-indestructable Alien. He was one of Ben’s enemies that most do not know about – Gargantuan. “My name is Gargantuan, and I am a Toku’star. I have come to destroy Ben Tennyson. Can anyone tell me where he is?” Gargantuan said with a humongous, evil grin on his face.

 

“Let me tell you something, Gargantuan! People only threaten Rath in Soviet Russia! Rath is outside Soviet Russia, Rath is VERY angry!” Rath was extremely furious. He altered his form into Humongosaur simply by pressing down the emblem on him. A orange-coloured dinosaur alien appeared at the place the tailless tiger was. Humongosaur pressed down the emblem again, causing his to grow even more humongous, and grow spikier. “ULTIMATE HUMONGOSAUR!” a green creature which was an advanced version of the orange one appeared. Zappy came out of hiding.

 

“Hey Ben!” shouted Zappy, “remember when you grew 120 feet tall? I think you’ll be big enough…”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur grew to a maximum height of a hundred and twenty feet, a little higher than Gargantuan. Ultimate Humongosaur was blessed with superhuman strength, but Gargantuan was not, thus giving the green dinosaur an advantage. “Sorry big guy, you’re going down,” Ultimate Humongosaur swung Gargantuan around like a person swinging her pet around. When he released the oversized being, the blue creature flew into the air, followed by the words “I’m blasting off again!”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur chuckled and shouted, “don’t come back!” He then reverted back to his non-advanced orange form, then back to Ben. Ben was pretty sure that Gargantuan will return. Due to his enormous size, Gargantuan just would not die. Ben walked up to Zappy and said, “Sorry pal, Rath is easily threatened. Hope you forgive me…” Ben said to Zappy as they walked towards a bar. “So Ben, do you still have those extradimensional stuff?” Zappy asked. Ben took out a blue-coloured phone from his pocket. “That’s pretty outdated, we don’t use those anymore. After a chat at the bar, we’ll get you a replacement.” They went to the Barton Bar, which was nearby.

 

There they were, at the Barton Bar. They talked about the usual, such as the time the phenomenom that was happening in many dimensions was happening a long time ago, and they met. What really caught Zappy’s attention was that Ben obtained a few new aliens. “Really? What do you call them?” Zappy asked.

 

“That’s a secret…” said Ben. A second after he said that, two plumbers, one wearing red and being short and fat, the other wearing green, being tall and skinny. When they sat down, the green one said, “Waitor, I would like lotsa spaghetti!” Everyone glared at them, thinking that they were idiots.

 

“Mario, Luigi, heard of them,” said Zappy, “It’s a shame they do not know that Bars don’t sell spaghetti.” She walked up to both ofthem and said, “Sorry fellas, Bars don’t sell Speghetti. They sell wine. And Ice Cream.” After that, Ben stood up, and he and Zappy went through a mysterious portal. Zappy stared glowing. Her body was capable of altering itself according to different dimensions. Zappy had turned into a Purple-coloured male penguin, known as Zappyozappy, simply called Zappy. “Club Penguin?” Zappy was stunned. He looked around and saw a station for phoning facilities. “Now its test time,” Zappy and Ben entered the building. Ben had no idea what the test was, but he did hate tests.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1 - Herbert the Pervert]

The test was in the phoning facility building. The phone rang and Ben picked it up. “Let the test begin, Agent Ben 10…” a weird voice boomed from the phone. Ben stepped away and the phone booth, and it turned into a giant screen. “This test is easy with my Ultimatrix,” Ben thought. Zappy was allowed to watch him take the test, for Zappy introduced him to it.

 

“Step on the Red Square. Good. How fast are you? Run to the Green Square. Ready, 3, 2, 1-” Just before the the screen could say “GO!” Ben slammed down his watch, expecting to turn into Jetray, but instead, he turned into a different creature “XLR8! I like this guy,” a blue, reptilian-humanoid creature said in a rather rough voice. It dashed from the Red Sqare to the Green Square within a splitsecond, even faster than how long it took for those Portals to appear out of the blue.

 

XLR8 turned back into Ben. “How stealthy are you?” asked the screen. “I give you 20 seconds to hide. Cameras shutting down…” the Cameras have shut down. Ben slammed down his watch in order to turn into Big Chill. He became an intangible creature. Big Chill turned invisible, in order to remain undetected. However, his plan failed. Camera 1 could detect him with ease. Club Penguin’s advanced technology seemed to know no limits.

 

“How clever are you? Step on the blue square,” said the screen, “It’s a trap!” Big Chill followed the instructions and was trapped in an electrical cage. Knowing that his weakness was Electricity, Big Chill altered his form to Nanomech and easily escaped the cage. “Small put potent, I like! Now lets see…” a squeaky voice was heard. The screen scanned the data of all of Ben’s activities. It appears that Ben has passed the test. Nanomech turned back to Ben in order to accept a reward – a new-and-improved EPF Spyphone! “Congrats Tennyson, now lets report to headquarters. There’s a big Bear on the loose.” Zappy and Ben simply took the lift next to the screen, which led them to a high-tech HQ. They noticed that there was going to be a meeting held on the meeting table.

 

“Agent Zappyozappy! You’re late! Must be because you were recruiting somebody! Agent Ben 10, right?” a blue-coloured Penguin on the meeting table asked. He was Gary the Gadget Guy, the guy responsible for technology in the EPF, or Elite Penguin Force. Zappy nodded his bird-like head as he and Ben sat down on their respective chairs. Gary was about to start the meeting.

 

“So, as all of you know, we have a rather evil outlaw named Herbert on the loose. Herbert is an Ursus Maritamus, commonly known as the Polar Bear. He caused an explosion in the once-existent Penguin Secret Agency Headquarters, tried to reveal our identities, attempted to steal the Golden Puffle, he has gone too far! Now seems to be a good time to split up and find Herbert. Any questions? No? Alright, let the mission commence!”

 

After Gary has ended his speech, all agents teleported away using their Spy Phones, in search of Herbert. Little did they know, Herbert was hiding in his cave, with his pet crab, Klutzy. “I, Herbert P. Bear Esquire, am aware of the return of Ben 10. This gives me an opportunity to snag his newly-improved Ultimatrix. I will reign supreme, and soon the world will be mine! Now, if only I had the Perfect Partner to destroy Ben Tennyson. Who? Which race? Lets see this book…” Herbert took out a rather thick book. It appeared to have an Ultimatrix emblem printed on the front cover. Herbert browsed through the book. The book Herbert was reading previews all Aliens Ben has ever turned into. “Fourarms, Heatblast, Chromastone, Diamondhead, Grey Matter, Way Big… Grey Matter? Way Big?” Herbert flipped the pages. “THAT’S IT! I know two of Ben’s enemies of that race! I will find his foes, and work with them!” Herbert let off a toothy grin, with his sharp, bear teeth.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy were together, finding Herbert. “Hey look Tennyson, a downhill! Why not go Cannonbolt and roll down it?” suggested Zappy. Ben slammed down his watch. Transformation began. He became even fatter and grew padding-like structures on his joints. “Cannonbolt!” an indescribable creature appeared. Canonbolt rolled up into a yellow ball, taking Zappy in him. Cannonbolt rolled down the hill and wailed, “Ahhhhh! I never knew this was a bad idea.” Soon, Cannonbolt was stuck at the entrance of Herbert’s cave. “Ow,” the ball-like creature said.

 

“An Arburbian Pelarota! Are you here to help me capture Ben Tennyson?” Herbert said at the sight of Cannonbolt, not knowing it was Ben until he turned back, with Zappy appearing beside him. “You ARE Ben Tennyson! So, you have come to trifle with me? I’m tougher than ever after having so many fatal blows.” Herbert’s arm started morphing into a revolver gun. “This is what I meant. My mechanical arm is awesome.”

 

Ben turned into one of his first Aliens, Fourarms. Fourarms was a four-armed red humanoid with four eyes. His outfit resembled that of a gladiator, hinting that he was not an alien to be trifled with. “So Herbert, it seems that you are ready to surrender,” the overconfident alien said.

 

“Do not be overconfident, Tennyson, for I can easily destroy you…” Herbert muttered when he was ready to fire his missles. Fourarms easily dented his revolver gun arm. “New abilities don’t help,” said Fourarms as Herbert’s gun-hand changed back into a normal bear paw.

 

“Oh, That’s not the last of me, Tennyson. Meet my friend, the Herbertron 10!” Herbert wailed as he took out a cube-shaped object and pressed a button. A mechanical creature that resembled Herbert appeared. “Capable of mimicking the powers of your ten original aliens.” The Herbertron started morphing. The robots body became green, while his body was covered with a blue shirt. His head became partially purple. Fourarms altered his form to Diamondhead, a crystal alien with a purple head. Diamondhead shapeshifted his arms into a mace and started attacking. Herbertron 10 did the same. It was a rather annoying act. Meanwhile, Zappy hesitated and thought of what to do. He had no clue!

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2 - The Framer]

Herbertron 10 altered his form to a Wolf-like robot resembling one of Ben’s old Aliens – Benwolf. Being a robot, it had loud boomboxes in its mouth. The wolf robot split its mouth into four sections and produced a humongous soundwave that caused Diamondhead to crack a little. “He’s too strong! Wait a sec, I don’t have Wolfy as my original 10,” a frightened Diamondhead said.

 

 

“Oops, I made a mistake, I meant ALL ALIENS you got when you were 10. Hahahaha! Since the aliens you had when your Omnitrix recalibrated had similar powers to your previous aliens, you don’t stand a chance Tennyson!” Herbert chuckled as his mechanical minion caused mayhem.

 

 

“Let me tell you something, Ben Tennyson!” Zappy wailed as he walked up to Diamondhead, “so, you have only a few choices to choose, less than ten choices…” Zappy seemed to be up to something while whispering into the crystal being’s ear.

 

 

Diamondhead altered his form to Terraspin. Terraspin was a wind-based turtle-like life form. Terraspin jumped up into the air, withdrew his head as his hindlegs joined as one. The reptilian creature rose into the air, spinning around like a turbine, blowing the Herbertron 10 away. The mechanical being was puzzled. There was no way it could counter the attack!

 

The Herbertron 10 was dazed. Terraspin altered into Lodestar and fired electromagnetic waves at the bot, causing it to have cracks all over it. “Now I have made you less attractive, metalman!” Lodestar smirked as e altered his form into Water Hazard. Water Hazard fired water at the almost-dismantled Herbertron 10 before turning back into Ben. At this time, Herbertron 10 had been completely dismantled.

 

“Self destruct in 10, 9, 8, 7…” The Herbertron 10 was going to self-destruct. Zappy and Ben escaped Herbert’s cave, in hopes of surviving. They were soon far enough to witness a powerful explosion going on at the cave. They went back to the cave, and saw the Herbertron 10 in more pieces, and Herbert gone.

 

“Looks like Herbert is resting in peace, or should I say, pieces!” Zappy joked as they both chuckled. After Ben got over the joke, He turned into a liquid metal creature he calls Upgrade to put the Herbertron 10 back in pieces, then return it to Headquarters.

 

Soon, Ben, Zappy and the other agents were back in Headquarters. “Ahhh, the Herbertrons, a series of shapeshifting robots I created for my simulation room, a room where agents train to prepare for emergencies. Herbert tried to steal the Omnitrix once, he may do it again. And that’s why I invented the Herbertrons,” explained Gary, “Now agents, meeting dismissed, feel free to use the simulation room with my permission.

 

“Errr, my mom wants me to be back soon,” Zappy said as he slowly de-pixelises, entering another world. That was not connected by these portals.

 

“I’m going home,” Ben said as he entered a Portal, leading to Bellwood. He loved the fresh air of his hometown. He went home, watched some TV, and that was all, until he saw what was on the news.

 

“Hello, this is Will Harangue here. As some of you may or may not know, Ben Tennyson has been terrorizing America…”

 

Ben saw footage of his Aliens terrorizing America. Chromastone robbing banks, Fourarms bashing people up, and a lot of other Aliens in other parts of the continent. Ben was rather astonished for he did not do any of that. “Who could it be?” Ben wondered. Just then, his phone rang. He simply said, “Errr… Tennyson residence how can I help?”

 

“BENJAMIN TENNYSON! How could you! I trusted you! I put my faith in you! And this is what I get! HOW DARE YOU BETRAY ME!” a feminine voice nagged at Ben. And nope, it isn’t his girlfriend Julie, neither is Ben a two-timer.

 

“Alicia! Chill out! Those Aliens aren’t me! That must be some sort of misunderstanding!” Ben was almost breaking into tears, “Hold on a sec, the doorbell’s ringing…”

 

It really was. Ben opened the door and looked around. Nothing new, except his car being parked. Someone must have been kind enough to give him back his car. Someone who couldn’t drive. Ben then went back to the phone and said, “Alicia? You still there?”

 

“Yes, now meet me at headquarters NOW!” after that, the line was cut off. Ben went out of his house, to a top-secret Plumber’s base.

 

These Plumbers do not clog toilets, they fight aliens, work with aliens and patrol areas. They specialize in Alien Technology and Butt-kicking. But no one says that you can’t be two plumbers at one time…

Here Ben was, in a top-secret Plumber’s base. As he walked deeper into it, he saw a silvery-blue-haired 14-year old girl. That was his partner, Alicia Steel. She is a Biosorvitian-human hybrid. She is a trainee who works with Ben. Ben no longer works with his cousin, Gwen, and his good friend, Kevin.

 

“Benjamin! I have evidence right here that you actually did it!” Alicia boomed angrily as she showed footage of Ben’s Aliens on a screen. “Goop in New York? Way Big in Mississippi? Ultimate Humongosaur in Singapore?”

“That isn’t even in America,” Ben interrupted sheepishly.

“Exactly!” Alicia shouted as Ben suddenly pushed his face on her bewbs. “Lets see how you would like a taste of this!”

“Mmm! Mmmm!” Ben couldn’t speak.

“What’s that? You want more? Alri-“ Just then, a group came in. There was Zappytaur10, a Green Penguin with a propeller cap and last but not least… a Plumber in green who was very creepy.

 

“Errr Ben, what the hell are you doing? Anyways, I’ve brought Rookie, this penguin over here, and Luigi, this plumber guy, to help,” explained Zappy, baring her fangs, then saying, “unlike some metalhead!”

“Hold on, that is Ben! Look at that emblem!” Rookie wailed. But Zappy refused to believe. “Why Zappyozappy? Why? He does look the same!”

“Don’t call me that. Hold on, metalgirl, let go of Ben and let me see the colour of the emblem…” Alicia did follow and allow Zappy to see the colour of the Omnitrix emblem. Zappy saw a picture of Rath causing a lethal car ‘accident’. “Boy, is this impostor a murderer or a framer? Now, the emblem and the eyes are quite red. I’m starting to suspect that Albedo has regained the Omnitrix, or even the Ultimatrix! Seeing the image of Ultimate Humongosaur , this must be bad.

 

“Hold on a sec, didn’t Albedo die?” Alicia and Ben said in unison, looking at each other, rather shocked.

“Nope. Luigi, tell them the whole story,” Zappy replied as Luigi turned to the two. Alicia and Ben screamed at the top of their voices. “In the meantime, I’m gonna kick some Galvanic butt…”

 

Zappy and Rookie went out of the headquarters. “So, Albedo should be here any moment, in Bellwood, right?” questioned Rookie.

“The good news is that he’s alone,” Zappy heaved a short sigh of relief. Suddenly, Zappy and Rookie heard a faint sound coming through a house. They peeped through a window like Peeping Toms and saw a commotion and eleven people. They could identify one of them as being identical to Ben, with the exception of having red instead of Green. “That’s Albedo,” Zappy said as he pointed to the Ben-duplicate.

“Hey Al-“ Rookie was swearing at Albedo when Zappy pushed him down, warning him not to shout so loud. They managed to take note of the following words: ‘Negative Ben and the Negative 10 will destroy Ben 10!’

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3 - U.N. Owen was him?]

After those words, Albedo started walking away. The Ben-shaped creature tugged his red jacket as he walked out of the house. Zappy and Rookie were almost going to be spotted by Albedo, good thing they weren’t. “Lets go,” said Zappy. Zappy and Rookie stalked Albedo while Zappy took out her Camera. “Wait ‘til the press sees this,” she smirked.

 

Soon, the duo found themselves in a Dark Alley while stalking the framer. They both started to have a feeling that Albedo was actually being paid. When Rookie suggested it was an Anti-Ben newsmaker who paid Albedo, Zappy simply replied “bull.” Little did they know, Rookie was somewhat correct. Albedo was seen with a rather tall, bespectacled brunette middle-aged man.

 

“William Harangue, I’ve done it. Now where’s my money?” Albedo questioned the man, otherwise known as Will Harangue.

“Here’s your cheque,” replied Will.

“How many times do I have to tell you I don’t have a bank account? Just pay me by cash,” the angered Ben clone furiously said.

“Alright, here’s your green. Anyways, did you make sure no one followed you?”

“Nope, no one, not a mere human.”

 

Not a mere human was eavesdropping at Albedo, but a Gaian vampire and a somewhat-annoying penguin was. They had evidence. Rookie accidentally stepped on a plank of wood, causing a creaking sound, causing Albedo to turn around. Albedo gave chase, but to no avail, he lost them before he could even go alien. “Grrr.. I lost them. I have to get out of this dimension! Fast!” Albedo was worried. The next day, the police would split up and find him. So, he simply walked to the nearest fast-food joint to buy some chilli fries. Since he was to be arrested, he lacked appetite to eat his food.

 

The next day, news of Albedo was all over the headlines. Albedo read the new and knew he could not stay in his universe anymore. He was aware of portals around the universes, and thus frantically searched for one that was not in range of the public. Luck was not on his side, but he was fortunate to be from one of the most superintelligent races in his galaxy: The Galvan of Galvan Prime. Yes, he also looked like one of them, until he somehow got stuck in Ben’s form perhaps forever.

 

Creating a teleporter was chicken feed for someone who was smart even for a Galvan.He created a teleporting device in a dark alley and entered another dimension…

 

Albedo looked around. He saw an area with a resemblance to ancient Japan. As he walked along, he saw a black-haired girl emerging from a shrine. “Hello there stranger,” the girl said, “name’s Reimu. Hakurei Reimu. Welcome to the Hakurei shrine. You don’t look like you’re from here. Yukari must be messing around again…”

 

“Lies,” Albedo replied, “I created a dimensional rift. Now, where do we find Chilli fries?”

 

“What?” Reimu replied, “they don’t exist here…”

 

Upon hearing this, Albedo was rather upset. The bigger the body, the more food required. That’s one reason why Albedo hated being Ben’s clone. He’ll have to be part of the Gensokyo food chain. The worst part is that he’s not on top! So, now Albedo sees a weird looking mansion, wondering what wonders there are in there. “Intruder I shall be,” Albedo thought.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy looked around, finding Albedo. They found Albedo’s Machine and jumped into it, thinking that Albedo went through there. They walked around, looking for signs of Albedo. Just then, the duo saw smoke from a nearby mansion. “The Scarlet Devil Mansion! Something’s wrong,” said Ben as he attempted to turn into Jetray, but instead, became a Diamond-headed creature called Diamondhead.

 

“Heavy guy? This could take a while,” said Zappy. Diamondhead and Zappy rushed to as quickly as possible. Diamondhead wasn’t a slow alien, but he was rather slow.

 

A couple hours later, at the Scarlet Devil Mansion. Something bad happened. A purple-haired vampire was defeated. By who you may ask? There was a red flash of light and Albedo walked up to her. “So, Remilia Scarlet, tell you what, you tell me where your sister is, and I’ll spare you…”

 

“She-she’s, over there…” Remilia unwilling said, feeling so embarrassed being defeated by a superpowered alien. Albedo, with luck, walked forward, then as quickly as he did, backwards. That was when he saw Diamondhead and Zappy.

 

“Hold it right there Albedo! Do you realize what you have done?” Diamondhead said in his usual, somewhat low-pitched voice. He then turned back into Ben. Just then, a blonde-haired vampire appeared, described to have rather synthetic crystal wings.

 

“Yeah, I do,” Albedo said like how Ben used to say it when he was immature. The only difference was that Ben never allows indestructible creatures out of basements. “I freed Flandre Scarket from 495 years of imprisonment. That’s shorter than how long we Galvan spend in prison.”

 

“Only problem is, Galvan don’t destroy, they create. Flandre Scarlet doesn’t create, she destroys,” Zappy said, “we have come to the end of one of the most boring chapters involving that- wait, where’d Flan go?”

 

“You sound like you’re breaking through the fourth wall, stranger. Anyways, Ben, its been six years. Now, tell me your tales after we spank your red clone…” said Remilia, sobbing at her sister’s leaving.

 

“No, no, noooo!” Albedo screamed as Remilia and Ben approached him. Sorry Albedo, no debuts for the next ‘few’ chapters!

 

 

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I decided to make a crossover fanfic, a VERY BIG crossover, thus the name. Don't worry, more universes will be introduced soon. Not to mention that there will be new characters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prolouge]

It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one. It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes. Little did anyone know, this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur – mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings. Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning. It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben. “Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,” Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood. He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian. Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?” the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left. He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat. “Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger. His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind. Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him. “Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison. “Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted. “Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,” a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella. “Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!” Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

 

“So, Ben Tennyson is here, huh? Interesting…” the Barton regulars, and Rath, turned to the north, and saw a humongous humanoid creature, about a hundred and ten feet tall. It had a fin-like protrusion on its head and looked like one of Ben’s favourite Aliens – Way Big, with the exception of not having an Ultimatrix emblem on him, and he had cyan around him instead of red. His yellow eyes stared down on the Gaians. Not even Ben’s biggest alien, Way Big, or Ben’s strongest Alien, Alien X could defeat this almost-indestructable Alien. He was one of Ben’s enemies that most do not know about – Gargantuan. “My name is Gargantuan, and I am a Toku’star. I have come to destroy Ben Tennyson. Can anyone tell me where he is?” Gargantuan said with a humongous, evil grin on his face.

 

“Let me tell you something, Gargantuan! People only threaten Rath in Soviet Russia! Rath is outside Soviet Russia, Rath is VERY angry!” Rath was extremely furious. He altered his form into Humongosaur simply by pressing down the emblem on him. A orange-coloured dinosaur alien appeared at the place the tailless tiger was. Humongosaur pressed down the emblem again, causing his to grow even more humongous, and grow spikier. “ULTIMATE HUMONGOSAUR!” a green creature which was an advanced version of the orange one appeared. Zappy came out of hiding.

 

“Hey Ben!” shouted Zappy, “remember when you grew 120 feet tall? I think you’ll be big enough…”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur grew to a maximum height of a hundred and twenty feet, a little higher than Gargantuan. Ultimate Humongosaur was blessed with superhuman strength, but Gargantuan was not, thus giving the green dinosaur an advantage. “Sorry big guy, you’re going down,” Ultimate Humongosaur swung Gargantuan around like a person swinging her pet around. When he released the oversized being, the blue creature flew into the air, followed by the words “I’m blasting off again!”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur chuckled and shouted, “don’t come back!” He then reverted back to his non-advanced orange form, then back to Ben. Ben was pretty sure that Gargantuan will return. Due to his enormous size, Gargantuan just would not die. Ben walked up to Zappy and said, “Sorry pal, Rath is easily threatened. Hope you forgive me…” Ben said to Zappy as they walked towards a bar. “So Ben, do you still have those extradimensional stuff?” Zappy asked. Ben took out a blue-coloured phone from his pocket. “That’s pretty outdated, we don’t use those anymore. After a chat at the bar, we’ll get you a replacement.” They went to the Barton Bar, which was nearby.

 

There they were, at the Barton Bar. They talked about the usual, such as the time the phenomenom that was happening in many dimensions was happening a long time ago, and they met. What really caught Zappy’s attention was that Ben obtained a few new aliens. “Really? What do you call them?” Zappy asked.

 

“That’s a secret…” said Ben. A second after he said that, two plumbers, one wearing red and being short and fat, the other wearing green, being tall and skinny. When they sat down, the green one said, “Waitor, I would like lotsa spaghetti!” Everyone glared at them, thinking that they were idiots.

 

“Mario, Luigi, heard of them,” said Zappy, “It’s a shame they do not know that Bars don’t sell spaghetti.” She walked up to both ofthem and said, “Sorry fellas, Bars don’t sell Speghetti. They sell wine. And Ice Cream.” After that, Ben stood up, and he and Zappy went through a mysterious portal. Zappy stared glowing. Her body was capable of altering itself according to different dimensions. Zappy had turned into a Purple-coloured male penguin, known as Zappyozappy, simply called Zappy. “Club Penguin?” Zappy was stunned. He looked around and saw a station for phoning facilities. “Now its test time,” Zappy and Ben entered the building. Ben had no idea what the test was, but he did hate tests.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1 - Herbert the Pervert]

The test was in the phoning facility building. The phone rang and Ben picked it up. “Let the test begin, Agent Ben 10…” a weird voice boomed from the phone. Ben stepped away and the phone booth, and it turned into a giant screen. “This test is easy with my Ultimatrix,” Ben thought. Zappy was allowed to watch him take the test, for Zappy introduced him to it.

 

“Step on the Red Square. Good. How fast are you? Run to the Green Square. Ready, 3, 2, 1-” Just before the the screen could say “GO!” Ben slammed down his watch, expecting to turn into Jetray, but instead, he turned into a different creature “XLR8! I like this guy,” a blue, reptilian-humanoid creature said in a rather rough voice. It dashed from the Red Sqare to the Green Square within a splitsecond, even faster than how long it took for those Portals to appear out of the blue.

 

XLR8 turned back into Ben. “How stealthy are you?” asked the screen. “I give you 20 seconds to hide. Cameras shutting down…” the Cameras have shut down. Ben slammed down his watch in order to turn into Big Chill. He became an intangible creature. Big Chill turned invisible, in order to remain undetected. However, his plan failed. Camera 1 could detect him with ease. Club Penguin’s advanced technology seemed to know no limits.

 

“How clever are you? Step on the blue square,” said the screen, “It’s a trap!” Big Chill followed the instructions and was trapped in an electrical cage. Knowing that his weakness was Electricity, Big Chill altered his form to Nanomech and easily escaped the cage. “Small put potent, I like! Now lets see…” a squeaky voice was heard. The screen scanned the data of all of Ben’s activities. It appears that Ben has passed the test. Nanomech turned back to Ben in order to accept a reward – a new-and-improved EPF Spyphone! “Congrats Tennyson, now lets report to headquarters. There’s a big Bear on the loose.” Zappy and Ben simply took the lift next to the screen, which led them to a high-tech HQ. They noticed that there was going to be a meeting held on the meeting table.

 

“Agent Zappyozappy! You’re late! Must be because you were recruiting somebody! Agent Ben 10, right?” a blue-coloured Penguin on the meeting table asked. He was Gary the Gadget Guy, the guy responsible for technology in the EPF, or Elite Penguin Force. Zappy nodded his bird-like head as he and Ben sat down on their respective chairs. Gary was about to start the meeting.

 

“So, as all of you know, we have a rather evil outlaw named Herbert on the loose. Herbert is an Ursus Maritamus, commonly known as the Polar Bear. He caused an explosion in the once-existent Penguin Secret Agency Headquarters, tried to reveal our identities, attempted to steal the Golden Puffle, he has gone too far! Now seems to be a good time to split up and find Herbert. Any questions? No? Alright, let the mission commence!”

 

After Gary has ended his speech, all agents teleported away using their Spy Phones, in search of Herbert. Little did they know, Herbert was hiding in his cave, with his pet crab, Klutzy. “I, Herbert P. Bear Esquire, am aware of the return of Ben 10. This gives me an opportunity to snag his newly-improved Ultimatrix. I will reign supreme, and soon the world will be mine! Now, if only I had the Perfect Partner to destroy Ben Tennyson. Who? Which race? Lets see this book…” Herbert took out a rather thick book. It appeared to have an Ultimatrix emblem printed on the front cover. Herbert browsed through the book. The book Herbert was reading previews all Aliens Ben has ever turned into. “Fourarms, Heatblast, Chromastone, Diamondhead, Grey Matter, Way Big… Grey Matter? Way Big?” Herbert flipped the pages. “THAT’S IT! I know two of Ben’s enemies of that race! I will find his foes, and work with them!” Herbert let off a toothy grin, with his sharp, bear teeth.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy were together, finding Herbert. “Hey look Tennyson, a downhill! Why not go Cannonbolt and roll down it?” suggested Zappy. Ben slammed down his watch. Transformation began. He became even fatter and grew padding-like structures on his joints. “Cannonbolt!” an indescribable creature appeared. Canonbolt rolled up into a yellow ball, taking Zappy in him. Cannonbolt rolled down the hill and wailed, “Ahhhhh! I never knew this was a bad idea.” Soon, Cannonbolt was stuck at the entrance of Herbert’s cave. “Ow,” the ball-like creature said.

 

“An Arburbian Pelarota! Are you here to help me capture Ben Tennyson?” Herbert said at the sight of Cannonbolt, not knowing it was Ben until he turned back, with Zappy appearing beside him. “You ARE Ben Tennyson! So, you have come to trifle with me? I’m tougher than ever after having so many fatal blows.” Herbert’s arm started morphing into a revolver gun. “This is what I meant. My mechanical arm is awesome.”

 

Ben turned into one of his first Aliens, Fourarms. Fourarms was a four-armed red humanoid with four eyes. His outfit resembled that of a gladiator, hinting that he was not an alien to be trifled with. “So Herbert, it seems that you are ready to surrender,” the overconfident alien said.

 

“Do not be overconfident, Tennyson, for I can easily destroy you…” Herbert muttered when he was ready to fire his missles. Fourarms easily dented his revolver gun arm. “New abilities don’t help,” said Fourarms as Herbert’s gun-hand changed back into a normal bear paw.

 

“Oh, That’s not the last of me, Tennyson. Meet my friend, the Herbertron 10!” Herbert wailed as he took out a cube-shaped object and pressed a button. A mechanical creature that resembled Herbert appeared. “Capable of mimicking the powers of your ten original aliens.” The Herbertron started morphing. The robots body became green, while his body was covered with a blue shirt. His head became partially purple. Fourarms altered his form to Diamondhead, a crystal alien with a purple head. Diamondhead shapeshifted his arms into a mace and started attacking. Herbertron 10 did the same. It was a rather annoying act. Meanwhile, Zappy hesitated and thought of what to do. He had no clue!

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2 - The Framer]

Herbertron 10 altered his form to a Wolf-like robot resembling one of Ben’s old Aliens – Benwolf. Being a robot, it had loud boomboxes in its mouth. The wolf robot split its mouth into four sections and produced a humongous soundwave that caused Diamondhead to crack a little. “He’s too strong! Wait a sec, I don’t have Wolfy as my original 10,” a frightened Diamondhead said.

 

 

“Oops, I made a mistake, I meant ALL ALIENS you got when you were 10. Hahahaha! Since the aliens you had when your Omnitrix recalibrated had similar powers to your previous aliens, you don’t stand a chance Tennyson!” Herbert chuckled as his mechanical minion caused mayhem.

 

 

“Let me tell you something, Ben Tennyson!” Zappy wailed as he walked up to Diamondhead, “so, you have only a few choices to choose, less than ten choices…” Zappy seemed to be up to something while whispering into the crystal being’s ear.

 

 

Diamondhead altered his form to Terraspin. Terraspin was a wind-based turtle-like life form. Terraspin jumped up into the air, withdrew his head as his hindlegs joined as one. The reptilian creature rose into the air, spinning around like a turbine, blowing the Herbertron 10 away. The mechanical being was puzzled. There was no way it could counter the attack!

 

The Herbertron 10 was dazed. Terraspin altered into Lodestar and fired electromagnetic waves at the bot, causing it to have cracks all over it. “Now I have made you less attractive, metalman!” Lodestar smirked as e altered his form into Water Hazard. Water Hazard fired water at the almost-dismantled Herbertron 10 before turning back into Ben. At this time, Herbertron 10 had been completely dismantled.

 

“Self destruct in 10, 9, 8, 7…” The Herbertron 10 was going to self-destruct. Zappy and Ben escaped Herbert’s cave, in hopes of surviving. They were soon far enough to witness a powerful explosion going on at the cave. They went back to the cave, and saw the Herbertron 10 in more pieces, and Herbert gone.

 

“Looks like Herbert is resting in peace, or should I say, pieces!” Zappy joked as they both chuckled. After Ben got over the joke, He turned into a liquid metal creature he calls Upgrade to put the Herbertron 10 back in pieces, then return it to Headquarters.

 

Soon, Ben, Zappy and the other agents were back in Headquarters. “Ahhh, the Herbertrons, a series of shapeshifting robots I created for my simulation room, a room where agents train to prepare for emergencies. Herbert tried to steal the Omnitrix once, he may do it again. And that’s why I invented the Herbertrons,” explained Gary, “Now agents, meeting dismissed, feel free to use the simulation room with my permission.

 

“Errr, my mom wants me to be back soon,” Zappy said as he slowly de-pixelises, entering another world. That was not connected by these portals.

 

“I’m going home,” Ben said as he entered a Portal, leading to Bellwood. He loved the fresh air of his hometown. He went home, watched some TV, and that was all, until he saw what was on the news.

 

“Hello, this is Will Harangue here. As some of you may or may not know, Ben Tennyson has been terrorizing America…”

 

Ben saw footage of his Aliens terrorizing America. Chromastone robbing banks, Fourarms bashing people up, and a lot of other Aliens in other parts of the continent. Ben was rather astonished for he did not do any of that. “Who could it be?” Ben wondered. Just then, his phone rang. He simply said, “Errr… Tennyson residence how can I help?”

 

“BENJAMIN TENNYSON! How could you! I trusted you! I put my faith in you! And this is what I get! HOW DARE YOU BETRAY ME!” a feminine voice nagged at Ben. And nope, it isn’t his girlfriend Julie, neither is Ben a two-timer.

 

“Alicia! Chill out! Those Aliens aren’t me! That must be some sort of misunderstanding!” Ben was almost breaking into tears, “Hold on a sec, the doorbell’s ringing…”

 

It really was. Ben opened the door and looked around. Nothing new, except his car being parked. Someone must have been kind enough to give him back his car. Someone who couldn’t drive. Ben then went back to the phone and said, “Alicia? You still there?”

 

“Yes, now meet me at headquarters NOW!” after that, the line was cut off. Ben went out of his house, to a top-secret Plumber’s base.

 

These Plumbers do not clog toilets, they fight aliens, work with aliens and patrol areas. They specialize in Alien Technology and Butt-kicking. But no one says that you can’t be two plumbers at one time…

Here Ben was, in a top-secret Plumber’s base. As he walked deeper into it, he saw a silvery-blue-haired 14-year old girl. That was his partner, Alicia Steel. She is a Biosorvitian-human hybrid. She is a trainee who works with Ben. Ben no longer works with his cousin, Gwen, and his good friend, Kevin.

 

“Benjamin! I have evidence right here that you actually did it!” Alicia boomed angrily as she showed footage of Ben’s Aliens on a screen. “Goop in New York? Way Big in Mississippi? Ultimate Humongosaur in Singapore?”

“That isn’t even in America,” Ben interrupted sheepishly.

“Exactly!” Alicia shouted as Ben suddenly pushed his face on her bewbs. “Lets see how you would like a taste of this!”

“Mmm! Mmmm!” Ben couldn’t speak.

“What’s that? You want more? Alri-“ Just then, a group came in. There was Zappytaur10, a Green Penguin with a propeller cap and last but not least… a Plumber in green who was very creepy.

 

“Errr Ben, what the hell are you doing? Anyways, I’ve brought Rookie, this penguin over here, and Luigi, this plumber guy, to help,” explained Zappy, baring her fangs, then saying, “unlike some metalhead!”

“Hold on, that is Ben! Look at that emblem!” Rookie wailed. But Zappy refused to believe. “Why Zappyozappy? Why? He does look the same!”

“Don’t call me that. Hold on, metalgirl, let go of Ben and let me see the colour of the emblem…” Alicia did follow and allow Zappy to see the colour of the Omnitrix emblem. Zappy saw a picture of Rath causing a lethal car ‘accident’. “Boy, is this impostor a murderer or a framer? Now, the emblem and the eyes are quite red. I’m starting to suspect that Albedo has regained the Omnitrix, or even the Ultimatrix! Seeing the image of Ultimate Humongosaur , this must be bad.

 

“Hold on a sec, didn’t Albedo die?” Alicia and Ben said in unison, looking at each other, rather shocked.

“Nope. Luigi, tell them the whole story,” Zappy replied as Luigi turned to the two. Alicia and Ben screamed at the top of their voices. “In the meantime, I’m gonna kick some Galvanic butt…”

 

Zappy and Rookie went out of the headquarters. “So, Albedo should be here any moment, in Bellwood, right?” questioned Rookie.

“The good news is that he’s alone,” Zappy heaved a short sigh of relief. Suddenly, Zappy and Rookie heard a faint sound coming through a house. They peeped through a window like Peeping Toms and saw a commotion and eleven people. They could identify one of them as being identical to Ben, with the exception of having red instead of Green. “That’s Albedo,” Zappy said as he pointed to the Ben-duplicate.

“Hey Al-“ Rookie was swearing at Albedo when Zappy pushed him down, warning him not to shout so loud. They managed to take note of the following words: ‘Negative Ben and the Negative 10 will destroy Ben 10!’

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3 - U.N. Owen was him?]

After those words, Albedo started walking away. The Ben-shaped creature tugged his red jacket as he walked out of the house. Zappy and Rookie were almost going to be spotted by Albedo, good thing they weren’t. “Lets go,” said Zappy. Zappy and Rookie stalked Albedo while Zappy took out her Camera. “Wait ‘til the press sees this,” she smirked.

 

Soon, the duo found themselves in a Dark Alley while stalking the framer. They both started to have a feeling that Albedo was actually being paid. When Rookie suggested it was an Anti-Ben newsmaker who paid Albedo, Zappy simply replied “bull.” Little did they know, Rookie was somewhat correct. Albedo was seen with a rather tall, bespectacled brunette middle-aged man.

 

“William Harangue, I’ve done it. Now where’s my money?” Albedo questioned the man, otherwise known as Will Harangue.

“Here’s your cheque,” replied Will.

“How many times do I have to tell you I don’t have a bank account? Just pay me by cash,” the angered Ben clone furiously said.

“Alright, here’s your green. Anyways, did you make sure no one followed you?”

“Nope, no one, not a mere human.”

 

Not a mere human was eavesdropping at Albedo, but a Gaian vampire and a somewhat-annoying penguin was. They had evidence. Rookie accidentally stepped on a plank of wood, causing a creaking sound, causing Albedo to turn around. Albedo gave chase, but to no avail, he lost them before he could even go alien. “Grrr.. I lost them. I have to get out of this dimension! Fast!” Albedo was worried. The next day, the police would split up and find him. So, he simply walked to the nearest fast-food joint to buy some chilli fries. Since he was to be arrested, he lacked appetite to eat his food.

 

The next day, news of Albedo was all over the headlines. Albedo read the new and knew he could not stay in his universe anymore. He was aware of portals around the universes, and thus frantically searched for one that was not in range of the public. Luck was not on his side, but he was fortunate to be from one of the most superintelligent races in his galaxy: The Galvan of Galvan Prime. Yes, he also looked like one of them, until he somehow got stuck in Ben’s form perhaps forever.

 

Creating a teleporter was chicken feed for someone who was smart even for a Galvan.He created a teleporting device in a dark alley and entered another dimension…

 

Albedo looked around. He saw an area with a resemblance to ancient Japan. As he walked along, he saw a black-haired girl emerging from a shrine. “Hello there stranger,” the girl said, “name’s Reimu. Hakurei Reimu. Welcome to the Hakurei shrine. You don’t look like you’re from here. Yukari must be messing around again…”

 

“Lies,” Albedo replied, “I created a dimensional rift. Now, where do we find Chilli fries?”

 

“What?” Reimu replied, “they don’t exist here…”

 

Upon hearing this, Albedo was rather upset. The bigger the body, the more food required. That’s one reason why Albedo hated being Ben’s clone. He’ll have to be part of the Gensokyo food chain. The worst part is that he’s not on top! So, now Albedo sees a weird looking mansion, wondering what wonders there are in there. “Intruder I shall be,” Albedo thought.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy looked around, finding Albedo. They found Albedo’s Machine and jumped into it, thinking that Albedo went through there. They walked around, looking for signs of Albedo. Just then, the duo saw smoke from a nearby mansion. “The Scarlet Devil Mansion! Something’s wrong,” said Ben as he attempted to turn into Jetray, but instead, became a Diamond-headed creature called Diamondhead.

 

“Heavy guy? This could take a while,” said Zappy. Diamondhead and Zappy rushed to as quickly as possible. Diamondhead wasn’t a slow alien, but he was rather slow.

 

A couple hours later, at the Scarlet Devil Mansion. Something bad happened. A purple-haired vampire was defeated. By who you may ask? There was a red flash of light and Albedo walked up to her. “So, Remilia Scarlet, tell you what, you tell me where your sister is, and I’ll spare you…”

 

“She-she’s, over there…” Remilia unwilling said, feeling so embarrassed being defeated by a superpowered alien. Albedo, with luck, walked forward, then as quickly as he did, backwards. That was when he saw Diamondhead and Zappy.

 

“Hold it right there Albedo! Do you realize what you have done?” Diamondhead said in his usual, somewhat low-pitched voice. He then turned back into Ben. Just then, a blonde-haired vampire appeared, described to have rather synthetic crystal wings.

 

“Yeah, I do,” Albedo said like how Ben used to say it when he was immature. The only difference was that Ben never allows indestructible creatures out of basements. “I freed Flandre Scarket from 495 years of imprisonment. That’s shorter than how long we Galvan spend in prison.”

 

“Only problem is, Galvan don’t destroy, they create. Flandre Scarlet doesn’t create, she destroys,” Zappy said, “we have come to the end of one of the most boring chapters involving that- wait, where’d Flan go?”

 

“You sound like you’re breaking through the fourth wall, stranger. Anyways, Ben, its been six years. Now, tell me your tales after we spank your red clone…” said Remilia, sobbing at her sister’s leaving.

 

“No, no, noooo!” Albedo screamed as Remilia and Ben approached him. Sorry Albedo, no debuts for the next ‘few’ chapters!

 

 

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I decided to make a crossover fanfic, a VERY BIG crossover, thus the name. Don't worry, more universes will be introduced soon. Not to mention that there will be new characters.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prolouge]

It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one. It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes. Little did anyone know, this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur – mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings. Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning. It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben. “Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,” Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood. He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian. Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?” the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left. He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat. “Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger. His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind. Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him. “Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison. “Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted. “Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,” a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella. “Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!” Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

 

“So, Ben Tennyson is here, huh? Interesting…” the Barton regulars, and Rath, turned to the north, and saw a humongous humanoid creature, about a hundred and ten feet tall. It had a fin-like protrusion on its head and looked like one of Ben’s favourite Aliens – Way Big, with the exception of not having an Ultimatrix emblem on him, and he had cyan around him instead of red. His yellow eyes stared down on the Gaians. Not even Ben’s biggest alien, Way Big, or Ben’s strongest Alien, Alien X could defeat this almost-indestructable Alien. He was one of Ben’s enemies that most do not know about – Gargantuan. “My name is Gargantuan, and I am a Toku’star. I have come to destroy Ben Tennyson. Can anyone tell me where he is?” Gargantuan said with a humongous, evil grin on his face.

 

“Let me tell you something, Gargantuan! People only threaten Rath in Soviet Russia! Rath is outside Soviet Russia, Rath is VERY angry!” Rath was extremely furious. He altered his form into Humongosaur simply by pressing down the emblem on him. A orange-coloured dinosaur alien appeared at the place the tailless tiger was. Humongosaur pressed down the emblem again, causing his to grow even more humongous, and grow spikier. “ULTIMATE HUMONGOSAUR!” a green creature which was an advanced version of the orange one appeared. Zappy came out of hiding.

 

“Hey Ben!” shouted Zappy, “remember when you grew 120 feet tall? I think you’ll be big enough…”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur grew to a maximum height of a hundred and twenty feet, a little higher than Gargantuan. Ultimate Humongosaur was blessed with superhuman strength, but Gargantuan was not, thus giving the green dinosaur an advantage. “Sorry big guy, you’re going down,” Ultimate Humongosaur swung Gargantuan around like a person swinging her pet around. When he released the oversized being, the blue creature flew into the air, followed by the words “I’m blasting off again!”

 

Ultimate Humongosaur chuckled and shouted, “don’t come back!” He then reverted back to his non-advanced orange form, then back to Ben. Ben was pretty sure that Gargantuan will return. Due to his enormous size, Gargantuan just would not die. Ben walked up to Zappy and said, “Sorry pal, Rath is easily threatened. Hope you forgive me…” Ben said to Zappy as they walked towards a bar. “So Ben, do you still have those extradimensional stuff?” Zappy asked. Ben took out a blue-coloured phone from his pocket. “That’s pretty outdated, we don’t use those anymore. After a chat at the bar, we’ll get you a replacement.” They went to the Barton Bar, which was nearby.

 

There they were, at the Barton Bar. They talked about the usual, such as the time the phenomenom that was happening in many dimensions was happening a long time ago, and they met. What really caught Zappy’s attention was that Ben obtained a few new aliens. “Really? What do you call them?” Zappy asked.

 

“That’s a secret…” said Ben. A second after he said that, two plumbers, one wearing red and being short and fat, the other wearing green, being tall and skinny. When they sat down, the green one said, “Waitor, I would like lotsa spaghetti!” Everyone glared at them, thinking that they were idiots.

 

“Mario, Luigi, heard of them,” said Zappy, “It’s a shame they do not know that Bars don’t sell spaghetti.” She walked up to both ofthem and said, “Sorry fellas, Bars don’t sell Speghetti. They sell wine. And Ice Cream.” After that, Ben stood up, and he and Zappy went through a mysterious portal. Zappy stared glowing. Her body was capable of altering itself according to different dimensions. Zappy had turned into a Purple-coloured male penguin, known as Zappyozappy, simply called Zappy. “Club Penguin?” Zappy was stunned. He looked around and saw a station for phoning facilities. “Now its test time,” Zappy and Ben entered the building. Ben had no idea what the test was, but he did hate tests.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1 - Herbert the Pervert]

The test was in the phoning facility building. The phone rang and Ben picked it up. “Let the test begin, Agent Ben 10…” a weird voice boomed from the phone. Ben stepped away and the phone booth, and it turned into a giant screen. “This test is easy with my Ultimatrix,” Ben thought. Zappy was allowed to watch him take the test, for Zappy introduced him to it.

 

“Step on the Red Square. Good. How fast are you? Run to the Green Square. Ready, 3, 2, 1-” Just before the the screen could say “GO!” Ben slammed down his watch, expecting to turn into Jetray, but instead, he turned into a different creature “XLR8! I like this guy,” a blue, reptilian-humanoid creature said in a rather rough voice. It dashed from the Red Sqare to the Green Square within a splitsecond, even faster than how long it took for those Portals to appear out of the blue.

 

XLR8 turned back into Ben. “How stealthy are you?” asked the screen. “I give you 20 seconds to hide. Cameras shutting down…” the Cameras have shut down. Ben slammed down his watch in order to turn into Big Chill. He became an intangible creature. Big Chill turned invisible, in order to remain undetected. However, his plan failed. Camera 1 could detect him with ease. Club Penguin’s advanced technology seemed to know no limits.

 

“How clever are you? Step on the blue square,” said the screen, “It’s a trap!” Big Chill followed the instructions and was trapped in an electrical cage. Knowing that his weakness was Electricity, Big Chill altered his form to Nanomech and easily escaped the cage. “Small put potent, I like! Now lets see…” a squeaky voice was heard. The screen scanned the data of all of Ben’s activities. It appears that Ben has passed the test. Nanomech turned back to Ben in order to accept a reward – a new-and-improved EPF Spyphone! “Congrats Tennyson, now lets report to headquarters. There’s a big Bear on the loose.” Zappy and Ben simply took the lift next to the screen, which led them to a high-tech HQ. They noticed that there was going to be a meeting held on the meeting table.

 

“Agent Zappyozappy! You’re late! Must be because you were recruiting somebody! Agent Ben 10, right?” a blue-coloured Penguin on the meeting table asked. He was Gary the Gadget Guy, the guy responsible for technology in the EPF, or Elite Penguin Force. Zappy nodded his bird-like head as he and Ben sat down on their respective chairs. Gary was about to start the meeting.

 

“So, as all of you know, we have a rather evil outlaw named Herbert on the loose. Herbert is an Ursus Maritamus, commonly known as the Polar Bear. He caused an explosion in the once-existent Penguin Secret Agency Headquarters, tried to reveal our identities, attempted to steal the Golden Puffle, he has gone too far! Now seems to be a good time to split up and find Herbert. Any questions? No? Alright, let the mission commence!”

 

After Gary has ended his speech, all agents teleported away using their Spy Phones, in search of Herbert. Little did they know, Herbert was hiding in his cave, with his pet crab, Klutzy. “I, Herbert P. Bear Esquire, am aware of the return of Ben 10. This gives me an opportunity to snag his newly-improved Ultimatrix. I will reign supreme, and soon the world will be mine! Now, if only I had the Perfect Partner to destroy Ben Tennyson. Who? Which race? Lets see this book…” Herbert took out a rather thick book. It appeared to have an Ultimatrix emblem printed on the front cover. Herbert browsed through the book. The book Herbert was reading previews all Aliens Ben has ever turned into. “Fourarms, Heatblast, Chromastone, Diamondhead, Grey Matter, Way Big… Grey Matter? Way Big?” Herbert flipped the pages. “THAT’S IT! I know two of Ben’s enemies of that race! I will find his foes, and work with them!” Herbert let off a toothy grin, with his sharp, bear teeth.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy were together, finding Herbert. “Hey look Tennyson, a downhill! Why not go Cannonbolt and roll down it?” suggested Zappy. Ben slammed down his watch. Transformation began. He became even fatter and grew padding-like structures on his joints. “Cannonbolt!” an indescribable creature appeared. Canonbolt rolled up into a yellow ball, taking Zappy in him. Cannonbolt rolled down the hill and wailed, “Ahhhhh! I never knew this was a bad idea.” Soon, Cannonbolt was stuck at the entrance of Herbert’s cave. “Ow,” the ball-like creature said.

 

“An Arburbian Pelarota! Are you here to help me capture Ben Tennyson?” Herbert said at the sight of Cannonbolt, not knowing it was Ben until he turned back, with Zappy appearing beside him. “You ARE Ben Tennyson! So, you have come to trifle with me? I’m tougher than ever after having so many fatal blows.” Herbert’s arm started morphing into a revolver gun. “This is what I meant. My mechanical arm is awesome.”

 

Ben turned into one of his first Aliens, Fourarms. Fourarms was a four-armed red humanoid with four eyes. His outfit resembled that of a gladiator, hinting that he was not an alien to be trifled with. “So Herbert, it seems that you are ready to surrender,” the overconfident alien said.

 

“Do not be overconfident, Tennyson, for I can easily destroy you…” Herbert muttered when he was ready to fire his missles. Fourarms easily dented his revolver gun arm. “New abilities don’t help,” said Fourarms as Herbert’s gun-hand changed back into a normal bear paw.

 

“Oh, That’s not the last of me, Tennyson. Meet my friend, the Herbertron 10!” Herbert wailed as he took out a cube-shaped object and pressed a button. A mechanical creature that resembled Herbert appeared. “Capable of mimicking the powers of your ten original aliens.” The Herbertron started morphing. The robots body became green, while his body was covered with a blue shirt. His head became partially purple. Fourarms altered his form to Diamondhead, a crystal alien with a purple head. Diamondhead shapeshifted his arms into a mace and started attacking. Herbertron 10 did the same. It was a rather annoying act. Meanwhile, Zappy hesitated and thought of what to do. He had no clue!

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2 - The Framer]

Herbertron 10 altered his form to a Wolf-like robot resembling one of Ben’s old Aliens – Benwolf. Being a robot, it had loud boomboxes in its mouth. The wolf robot split its mouth into four sections and produced a humongous soundwave that caused Diamondhead to crack a little. “He’s too strong! Wait a sec, I don’t have Wolfy as my original 10,” a frightened Diamondhead said.

 

 

“Oops, I made a mistake, I meant ALL ALIENS you got when you were 10. Hahahaha! Since the aliens you had when your Omnitrix recalibrated had similar powers to your previous aliens, you don’t stand a chance Tennyson!” Herbert chuckled as his mechanical minion caused mayhem.

 

 

“Let me tell you something, Ben Tennyson!” Zappy wailed as he walked up to Diamondhead, “so, you have only a few choices to choose, less than ten choices…” Zappy seemed to be up to something while whispering into the crystal being’s ear.

 

 

Diamondhead altered his form to Terraspin. Terraspin was a wind-based turtle-like life form. Terraspin jumped up into the air, withdrew his head as his hindlegs joined as one. The reptilian creature rose into the air, spinning around like a turbine, blowing the Herbertron 10 away. The mechanical being was puzzled. There was no way it could counter the attack!

 

The Herbertron 10 was dazed. Terraspin altered into Lodestar and fired electromagnetic waves at the bot, causing it to have cracks all over it. “Now I have made you less attractive, metalman!” Lodestar smirked as e altered his form into Water Hazard. Water Hazard fired water at the almost-dismantled Herbertron 10 before turning back into Ben. At this time, Herbertron 10 had been completely dismantled.

 

“Self destruct in 10, 9, 8, 7…” The Herbertron 10 was going to self-destruct. Zappy and Ben escaped Herbert’s cave, in hopes of surviving. They were soon far enough to witness a powerful explosion going on at the cave. They went back to the cave, and saw the Herbertron 10 in more pieces, and Herbert gone.

 

“Looks like Herbert is resting in peace, or should I say, pieces!” Zappy joked as they both chuckled. After Ben got over the joke, He turned into a liquid metal creature he calls Upgrade to put the Herbertron 10 back in pieces, then return it to Headquarters.

 

Soon, Ben, Zappy and the other agents were back in Headquarters. “Ahhh, the Herbertrons, a series of shapeshifting robots I created for my simulation room, a room where agents train to prepare for emergencies. Herbert tried to steal the Omnitrix once, he may do it again. And that’s why I invented the Herbertrons,” explained Gary, “Now agents, meeting dismissed, feel free to use the simulation room with my permission.

 

“Errr, my mom wants me to be back soon,” Zappy said as he slowly de-pixelises, entering another world. That was not connected by these portals.

 

“I’m going home,” Ben said as he entered a Portal, leading to Bellwood. He loved the fresh air of his hometown. He went home, watched some TV, and that was all, until he saw what was on the news.

 

“Hello, this is Will Harangue here. As some of you may or may not know, Ben Tennyson has been terrorizing America…”

 

Ben saw footage of his Aliens terrorizing America. Chromastone robbing banks, Fourarms bashing people up, and a lot of other Aliens in other parts of the continent. Ben was rather astonished for he did not do any of that. “Who could it be?” Ben wondered. Just then, his phone rang. He simply said, “Errr… Tennyson residence how can I help?”

 

“BENJAMIN TENNYSON! How could you! I trusted you! I put my faith in you! And this is what I get! HOW DARE YOU BETRAY ME!” a feminine voice nagged at Ben. And nope, it isn’t his girlfriend Julie, neither is Ben a two-timer.

 

“Alicia! Chill out! Those Aliens aren’t me! That must be some sort of misunderstanding!” Ben was almost breaking into tears, “Hold on a sec, the doorbell’s ringing…”

 

It really was. Ben opened the door and looked around. Nothing new, except his car being parked. Someone must have been kind enough to give him back his car. Someone who couldn’t drive. Ben then went back to the phone and said, “Alicia? You still there?”

 

“Yes, now meet me at headquarters NOW!” after that, the line was cut off. Ben went out of his house, to a top-secret Plumber’s base.

 

These Plumbers do not clog toilets, they fight aliens, work with aliens and patrol areas. They specialize in Alien Technology and Butt-kicking. But no one says that you can’t be two plumbers at one time…

Here Ben was, in a top-secret Plumber’s base. As he walked deeper into it, he saw a silvery-blue-haired 14-year old girl. That was his partner, Alicia Steel. She is a Biosorvitian-human hybrid. She is a trainee who works with Ben. Ben no longer works with his cousin, Gwen, and his good friend, Kevin.

 

“Benjamin! I have evidence right here that you actually did it!” Alicia boomed angrily as she showed footage of Ben’s Aliens on a screen. “Goop in New York? Way Big in Mississippi? Ultimate Humongosaur in Singapore?”

“That isn’t even in America,” Ben interrupted sheepishly.

“Exactly!” Alicia shouted as Ben suddenly pushed his face on her bewbs. “Lets see how you would like a taste of this!”

“Mmm! Mmmm!” Ben couldn’t speak.

“What’s that? You want more? Alri-“ Just then, a group came in. There was Zappytaur10, a Green Penguin with a propeller cap and last but not least… a Plumber in green who was very creepy.

 

“Errr Ben, what the hell are you doing? Anyways, I’ve brought Rookie, this penguin over here, and Luigi, this plumber guy, to help,” explained Zappy, baring her fangs, then saying, “unlike some metalhead!”

“Hold on, that is Ben! Look at that emblem!” Rookie wailed. But Zappy refused to believe. “Why Zappyozappy? Why? He does look the same!”

“Don’t call me that. Hold on, metalgirl, let go of Ben and let me see the colour of the emblem…” Alicia did follow and allow Zappy to see the colour of the Omnitrix emblem. Zappy saw a picture of Rath causing a lethal car ‘accident’. “Boy, is this impostor a murderer or a framer? Now, the emblem and the eyes are quite red. I’m starting to suspect that Albedo has regained the Omnitrix, or even the Ultimatrix! Seeing the image of Ultimate Humongosaur , this must be bad.

 

“Hold on a sec, didn’t Albedo die?” Alicia and Ben said in unison, looking at each other, rather shocked.

“Nope. Luigi, tell them the whole story,” Zappy replied as Luigi turned to the two. Alicia and Ben screamed at the top of their voices. “In the meantime, I’m gonna kick some Galvanic butt…”

 

Zappy and Rookie went out of the headquarters. “So, Albedo should be here any moment, in Bellwood, right?” questioned Rookie.

“The good news is that he’s alone,” Zappy heaved a short sigh of relief. Suddenly, Zappy and Rookie heard a faint sound coming through a house. They peeped through a window like Peeping Toms and saw a commotion and eleven people. They could identify one of them as being identical to Ben, with the exception of having red instead of Green. “That’s Albedo,” Zappy said as he pointed to the Ben-duplicate.

“Hey Al-“ Rookie was swearing at Albedo when Zappy pushed him down, warning him not to shout so loud. They managed to take note of the following words: ‘Negative Ben and the Negative 10 will destroy Ben 10!’

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3 - U.N. Owen was him?]

After those words, Albedo started walking away. The Ben-shaped creature tugged his red jacket as he walked out of the house. Zappy and Rookie were almost going to be spotted by Albedo, good thing they weren’t. “Lets go,” said Zappy. Zappy and Rookie stalked Albedo while Zappy took out her Camera. “Wait ‘til the press sees this,” she smirked.

 

Soon, the duo found themselves in a Dark Alley while stalking the framer. They both started to have a feeling that Albedo was actually being paid. When Rookie suggested it was an Anti-Ben newsmaker who paid Albedo, Zappy simply replied “bull.” Little did they know, Rookie was somewhat correct. Albedo was seen with a rather tall, bespectacled brunette middle-aged man.

 

“William Harangue, I’ve done it. Now where’s my money?” Albedo questioned the man, otherwise known as Will Harangue.

“Here’s your cheque,” replied Will.

“How many times do I have to tell you I don’t have a bank account? Just pay me by cash,” the angered Ben clone furiously said.

“Alright, here’s your green. Anyways, did you make sure no one followed you?”

“Nope, no one, not a mere human.”

 

Not a mere human was eavesdropping at Albedo, but a Gaian vampire and a somewhat-annoying penguin was. They had evidence. Rookie accidentally stepped on a plank of wood, causing a creaking sound, causing Albedo to turn around. Albedo gave chase, but to no avail, he lost them before he could even go alien. “Grrr.. I lost them. I have to get out of this dimension! Fast!” Albedo was worried. The next day, the police would split up and find him. So, he simply walked to the nearest fast-food joint to buy some chilli fries. Since he was to be arrested, he lacked appetite to eat his food.

 

The next day, news of Albedo was all over the headlines. Albedo read the new and knew he could not stay in his universe anymore. He was aware of portals around the universes, and thus frantically searched for one that was not in range of the public. Luck was not on his side, but he was fortunate to be from one of the most superintelligent races in his galaxy: The Galvan of Galvan Prime. Yes, he also looked like one of them, until he somehow got stuck in Ben’s form perhaps forever.

 

Creating a teleporter was chicken feed for someone who was smart even for a Galvan.He created a teleporting device in a dark alley and entered another dimension…

 

Albedo looked around. He saw an area with a resemblance to ancient Japan. As he walked along, he saw a black-haired girl emerging from a shrine. “Hello there stranger,” the girl said, “name’s Reimu. Hakurei Reimu. Welcome to the Hakurei shrine. You don’t look like you’re from here. Yukari must be messing around again…”

 

“Lies,” Albedo replied, “I created a dimensional rift. Now, where do we find Chilli fries?”

 

“What?” Reimu replied, “they don’t exist here…”

 

Upon hearing this, Albedo was rather upset. The bigger the body, the more food required. That’s one reason why Albedo hated being Ben’s clone. He’ll have to be part of the Gensokyo food chain. The worst part is that he’s not on top! So, now Albedo sees a weird looking mansion, wondering what wonders there are in there. “Intruder I shall be,” Albedo thought.

 

Meanwhile, Ben and Zappy looked around, finding Albedo. They found Albedo’s Machine and jumped into it, thinking that Albedo went through there. They walked around, looking for signs of Albedo. Just then, the duo saw smoke from a nearby mansion. “The Scarlet Devil Mansion! Something’s wrong,” said Ben as he attempted to turn into Jetray, but instead, became a Diamond-headed creature called Diamondhead.

 

“Heavy guy? This could take a while,” said Zappy. Diamondhead and Zappy rushed to as quickly as possible. Diamondhead wasn’t a slow alien, but he was rather slow.

 

A couple hours later, at the Scarlet Devil Mansion. Something bad happened. A purple-haired vampire was defeated. By who you may ask? There was a red flash of light and Albedo walked up to her. “So, Remilia Scarlet, tell you what, you tell me where your sister is, and I’ll spare you…”

 

“She-she’s, over there…” Remilia unwilling said, feeling so embarrassed being defeated by a superpowered alien. Albedo, with luck, walked forward, then as quickly as he did, backwards. That was when he saw Diamondhead and Zappy.

 

“Hold it right there Albedo! Do you realize what you have done?” Diamondhead said in his usual, somewhat low-pitched voice. He then turned back into Ben. Just then, a blonde-haired vampire appeared, described to have rather synthetic crystal wings.

 

“Yeah, I do,” Albedo said like how Ben used to say it when he was immature. The only difference was that Ben never allows indestructible creatures out of basements. “I freed Flandre Scarket from 495 years of imprisonment. That’s shorter than how long we Galvan spend in prison.”

 

“Only problem is, Galvan don’t destroy, they create. Flandre Scarlet doesn’t create, she destroys,” Zappy said, “we have come to the end of one of the most boring chapters involving that- wait, where’d Flan go?”

 

“You sound like you’re breaking through the fourth wall, stranger. Anyways, Ben, its been six years. Now, tell me your tales after we spank your red clone…” said Remilia, sobbing at her sister’s leaving.

 

“No, no, noooo!” Albedo screamed as Remilia and Ben approached him. Sorry Albedo, no debuts for the next ‘few’ chapters!

 

 

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[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)]It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

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[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)]It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

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[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)]It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

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I know you said no reviews' date=' but, if you didnt want reviews, you shouldnt have posted it till it was done, so enjoy.

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)']It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

 

lol@runescape

 

Sorry Jolta, but it was funny.

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I know you said no reviews' date=' but, if you didnt want reviews, you shouldnt have posted it till it was done, so enjoy.

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)']It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

 

lol@runescape

 

Sorry Jolta, but it was funny.

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I know you said no reviews' date=' but, if you didnt want reviews, you shouldnt have posted it till it was done, so enjoy.

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)']It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

 

lol@runescape

 

Sorry Jolta, but it was funny.

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I know you said no reviews' date=' but, if you didnt want reviews, you shouldnt have posted it till it was done, so enjoy.

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)']It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

Nicely done. IDK about having the actual characters show up, but it works.

 

You would have been safe from me, except I'm really tired after writing yesterday's eleven-turn Duel and the alien wasn't named after a Fire Emblem character. But now it's my turn...

(For the record, the Otaclub Mega Crossover is shaping up to be better than this.)

 

[spoiler=In the not-too-distant future...]

Our policy here is to use the author's own characters against them. However, this is supposedly a Mega Crossover that hasn't added all their universes yet, so I'm going to pick one Ben Ten character, one Gaia Online character, and one character generally associated with crossovers. Our team today is Gwen Tennyson, a spunky and sardonic ten-year-old witch, Rina, a... flower vendor and Ensemble Darkhorse, and Yukari Yakumo, manipulator of boundaries and frequent initiator of crossovers.

 

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It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Rina: It's... kinda hard to pin down what's wrong with this sentence, but I know there's something wrong...

Yukari: The problem is that the gist of the sentence is "many dimensions joined as one," but the subject is a poorly-defined "it." "Make every word tell" and whatnot.

Gwen: Whatever "it" is, "it" sounds stupid and melodramatic.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Rina: Yeah that sounds normal enough.

Gwen: But wouldn't the electric companies be freaking out?

Yukari: If it's only for one night, I'm sure they wouldn't notice. So long as it was only daytime in Africa and China and similarly exploited regions.

 

Little did anyone know, this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur – mysterious portals appearing everywhere.

Rina: Yay, portals~!

Gwen: If they're appearing everywhere, how do people not notice them?

 

The electricity was back up again in a week,

Gwen: Okay, now I'm pretty sure the electric companies are freaking out.

Yukari: Well, yes.

 

give or take a few days,

Yukari: The administrators in sub-saharan Africa didn't notice and waited another week before fixing it.

 

but nothing could remove these Portals.

Rina: Well, we wouldn't know if no one noticed, would we~?

Gwen: Despite the fact that they're appearing everywhere...

 

This was not the first time.

Gwen: Oh, well, that would be the problem.

 

We start off in a dimension, that

Yukari: —is full of misplaced commas and failed attempts at a philosophical introduction.

 

may or may not be full of intergalactic war,

Gwen: "May or may not?!" Is it or isn't it?! Intergalactic war is usually a pretty noticable thing.

Rina: You tell me, it's your home~

Yukari: Your poor clauses are lonely.

 

and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Yukari: But why do we care about the Earthlings, pray tell? After all, alienation is relative.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me~

Gwen: Yeah, say something we can understand for once.

Yukari: Say you lived on, oh, Vanadi or Exovarcéôs. Then Earthlings would be aliens to you.

 

Ben Tennyson,

Gwen: —was randomly introduced into the paragraph with no precedent.

Rina: You aren't very nice to your cousin~

Yukari: It's because she's a tsundere.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: She pretends to hate him so she can pretend she doesn't love him.

Gwen: OI.

Rina: Oh, well, that's nice~ But I don't have to hate my love~

Yukari: You're different, though.

 

aged 16,

Gwen: lolwut

Yukari: Actually, they released a second season in which Kevin Eleven stopped being a psychopath and was an ambiguous love interest with you. That's their source material.

Gwen: ...imma gonna be sick...

Yukari: Thought so.

 

was driving his car, the DX Mark 10,

Rina: No, no, no, it's the Mach Go...

Yukari: An impressive reference. We'll call it that from now on, if it ever gets mentioned again.

 

one morning. It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual

Gwen: You mean... unusual? Yeah, it's pretty unusual for him.

 

for Ben. “Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself.

Rina: But nothing's wrong~ Something's wrong even though nothing's wrong~

Yukari: Something's wrong because nothing's wrong~ Though Reimu doesn't usually follow that logic.

 

He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving.

All: ...

Gwen: You... don't have much of a flair for the dramatic, do you, author?

Rina: Now something's wrong because something's wrong~

 

Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,” Ben said as he entered the weird object.

All: ...

Gwen: The source of what?

Yukari: He didn't put much thought into entering the "weird object." Usually, people I know tend to think about these things, and given who I know, that's saying something.

Risa: You sound kind of annoyed~

Yukari: Well, it's hard to get lunch guests if the only way to get to your house is by dimensional rift. I'm thinking about installing a train line...

 

He was no longer in Bellwood.

Gwen: For all we know, he wasn't in Bellwood to begin with.

Rina: No, he was in... huh, we don't know~

Yukari: Hm, it's usually a good idea to describe the setting...

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town.

Yukari: Not enough information for dimensional transit.

Gwen: What time period is he in? Are there dragons running around everywhere? If so, are people ignoring them or taming them or running and screaming? Are you in the far future, or the distant past? Tell us something!

 

He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Yukari: May you?

Gwen: Can you, with this little description of setting?

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Rina: Sure he does~ See~?

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Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?” the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Gwen: He... didn't... left? What?

Yukari: Oh, come on, you can stretch that into a couple sentences. "This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline."

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Rina: Ooooh, we're in my world~! Hi Nicholae~!

Yukari: Do you know him?

Rina: Nope~

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae.

Yukari: Yes, but how is he saying it? How is Ben reacting? What's he saying in response? Add these details in; you'll double the length of your story. Describe the setting a bit and you'll triple it.

 

Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Gwen: Okay, he'd better not just ignore this. People only compete for the Omnitrix —

Yukari: Actually, it got powered down into the "Ultimatrix."

Gwen: ...okay, people only competed for the Ultimatrix every day of last summer. ...okay, "Ultimatrix" sounds really stupid.

Yukari: It could be worse. It could be the "Superatrix" or "Ultramatrix."

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,”

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

 

Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Gwen: Oh, boy. Who's 'let's?'

Yukari: I wasn't aware Nicholae was schizophrenic.

Rina: What's that?

Yukari: He sees and hears people and things around him that don't exist.

Rina: He doesn't do that~

Yukari: I didn't think so.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town,

Yukari: ...completely forgetting to look at the rest of the town and tell us what it looks like...

Gwen: Because obviously that's what he's going to be interested in.

 

he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes.

Gwen: Apparently, he didn't see anything else, or we'd know what this town looks like.

Rina: Do the flamingo, the flaming-gop~ Do the flamingo with a where-y'at? where-y'at?

Yukari: That song hasn't been written yet, I'm afraid.

 

“What would garden stuff be doing here?”

Yukari: Well, obviously, the Queen of Hearts invited the Lawn Gnomes to play croquet, and they're waiting on the hedgehogs.

 

Suddenly, the unanimated

Yukari: "Inanimate." You mean "inanimate."

 

objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated.

Yukari: Well, you might say that, except that anyone reading a mega crossover, especially one of your promised scale, can't possibly be expected to know about every universe contained therein, so you really have to explain each universe to a much greater degree of detail than you might ordinarily.

Gwen: Come to think of it, they never described Ben...

 

The army of forty attacked Ben.

Gwen: The suspense is palpable.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…”

All: ...

Gwen: You never mentioned Fire Emblem. Would've been nice of you to say something about that.

Yukari: Miserably enough, that's an actual alien. Think of Wildmutt, and then subtract a bit of intelligence and add some belligerence.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: It's very big, bestial in appearance, very angry, and very stupid. But I'd like to see how they really dealt with Rath...

 

Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix.

Gwen: You're not going to describe anything about the Ultimatrix being an object of power so mighty those intergalactic wars that may or may not be happening back in our world were waged over it, are you.

 

Transformation began.

Rina: Nope~

Gwen: ...do you have any idea how stupid that sounds?

Yukari: Unless used for comedic effect or irony, no sentence should be two words long. This isn't Japanese.

 

Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Rina: Huh~? How do you head morph~?

Gwen: Th... that does not make sense. Tigers are smarter than Wildmutt.

Yukari: They're smarter than alien!Rath, too.

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid

Rina: Hey, that's an oxymoron~

Gwen: Describe all this in its own sentence.

 

creature appeared at the same spot Ben was.

Rina: So who said "RATH!" up there~?

Gwen: Who knows?

 

The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben.

Gwen: Then how could it have appeared where Ben was? Astral projection?

 

Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Yukari: Show, don't tell. Those two sentences could have easily been a whole paragraph, not to mention engaging to the readers.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again.

Gwen: "Inanimate." You mean "inanimate."

Yukari: Magipulation "Return Inanimate~" Alice's Spell Cards aren't in Rath's arsenal, though.

Gwen: Come to think of it, aren't flamingoes animate in the first place?

All: ...

 

He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Rina: Ooh, mysterious~

Gwen: It's not mysterious to you, it's just gold. I had to look that up, though, so someone isn't doing their job properly.

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out.

Yukari: This is the most gripping action we've seen thus far.

 

When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him. “Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison. “Let me

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

 

tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted. “Let me

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

Gwen: This is the third time... in a row.

 

tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,” a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared.

Gwen: You seem to think that appearing is a way of saying something.

Yukari: This sentence, I regret to inform you, is hopelessly boring. You don't seem to care much about the spacing at all.

 

He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Rina: Yay, Commander Leon~! He usually runs and hides whenever I try and find him, though.

Gwen: ...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: There, there. That's quite enough now. Some people just can't keep up with Rina's high-energy lifestyle.

Gwen: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: ...we'll leave you to that, then.

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed.

Gwen: Seductive-sounding voices don't boom.

 

The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Yukari, Gwen: Oh, look, it's you.

All: ...

Rina: So which is it?

Gwen: For the sake of my sanity, I'll pick Yukari. She can probably make a seductive voice boom, too.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires!

All: ...

Gwen: ...Zapptaur... 10?

Rina: Yeah, apparently~

Gwen: ...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: I might have picked a better name, I think. "Violet Reverius" was a particularly nice alias, though "LegendaryGirlA" would have done fine.

Rina: But how did Ben know her name was Zapptaur10~?

Yukari: There's usually an identifier somewhere on the character in MMORPGs, to avoid confusion among duplicates.

Rina: I thought you said alien!Rath was stupid, though~

Yukari: ...

Gwen: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

Yukari: Mm, that's starting to annoy me. Bounded Field "Balance of Motion and Stillness."

Gwen: ...

Yukari: Much better.

 

RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

All: ...

Yukari: But you will. You spared the Tiffin, remember?

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy.

All: ...

Yukari: Bounded Field "Balance of Motion and Stillness."

Gwen: This is the third time in a row we're all stunned speechless.

Yukari: This isn't where you introduce the character's name.

 

Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being.

Gwen: You should'a thought of that before you told it to chillax.

Yukari: You heckle from atop the roof, but not when you're in harm's way...

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: I'm talking about people like her who'll do things when they think they're safe from the consequences and then cower when those consequences arrive. By the way, Gwen, it's definitely you.

Gwen: Gaaaah!

 

She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Rina: Like that~?

Yukari: Precisely like that.

Gwen: So what's next?

Yukari: Nothing, it's over~

All: ...

Yukari: Not the best ending, I know.

Gwen: I dunno, I think it's kinda fitting. It's as stupidly elementary and anticlimactic as the rest of the story.

Yukari: From a certain point of view, true~

 

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[spoiler=Prologue (Mystery Science Ripoff - #-5)']It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Reece: Isnt this only 2 dimensions?

Taylor: Apparently Gaia and Ben 10 is more then enough to classify it as many.

Max: Im here because I want to be.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Taylor: Universes? Theres only 1 universe.

Max: Nowai! Were in a cartoon place.

 

Little did anyone know,

Reece: If everyone knew, that was just ruin the plot.

 

this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur

Taylor: I doubt its that strange. Like, dimensions colliding...just talk to Yubel. She wont find it wierd.

 

– mysterious portals appearing everywhere. The electricity was back up again in a week, give or take a few days, but nothing could remove these Portals. This was not the first time.

Reece: Yet everyone stays calm, although portals are appearing and they refuse to leave.

Max: You dont even know how long the black out was for?

 

We start off in a dimension, that may or may not be full of intergalactic war, and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Taylor: Its called Earth, and Ben is the only alien who actually lives there, but he is half-human anyway.

 

Ben Tennyson, aged 16, was driving his car, the DX Mark 10, one morning.

Taylor: He must be a good driver. Hes only 16 yet he has his license. Not his learners, because noone is with him.

 

It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual for Ben.

Max: Now we know something is going to happen.

 

“Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself. He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving. Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,”

Reece: No, it isnt the source of these portals, yet its a dimension rift. Its just meant to be there.

 

Ben said as he entered the weird object. He was no longer in Bellwood.

Max: Why did he enter a strange rift which causes portals to appear?

Reece: He just went through a dimensional rift. Why would he still be in Bellwood?

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town. He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Taylor: Id definetely park my car in a strange little town.

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Reece: Im assuming thats someone from Gaia.

 

Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?”

Taylor: *Ben Impersonation* I COULD go for a tour, but I could go by myself and get lost.

 

the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Taylor: I knew it!

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Max: Geez, first he is in a civilized town, but know he bumped into a farmer like person?

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae. Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Nicholae: Hey there young lad! Over here! The name is Nicholae. Can I take you away to my lair?

Ben: Youre a bad troll.

Nicholae: Ill take that...fun...toy from your wrist!

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,” Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Ben: I would give you it, but Im tired from all the action Gwen has been giving me.

Nicholae: Lets just follow him, so I can get him un-expectedly.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town, he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes. “What would garden stuff be doing here?” Suddenly, the unanimated objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated. The army of forty attacked Ben.

Reece: He states there is about twenty of each, but there is an exact amount of 40. Coincidence? I think not.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…” Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix. Transformation began. Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Taylor: Ben head? Whats that?

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid creature appeared at the same spot Ben was. The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben. Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Nicholae: What big fur he has! Its like a forest down there.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again. He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Ben: I can un-animate things when Im a tiger.

Reece: Hey, my ruppees!

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out. When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him.

Ben: Im going to eat this here coin, right now, to show you Im not an idiot.

 

“Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison.

Regulars: Yeah, you often see robotic, synchronized people in Gaia.

 

“Let me tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted.

Ben: Nobody messes with RASH!

Max: Why did you just put emphasis on your name?

 

“Let me tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,”

Regulars: I dislike you animated rashes! Go, Commander Leon!

 

a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared. He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Regulars: Commander Leon, use Splash!

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed. The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Alice Culleeeeeeeen: Yay, now I get to be in here, with a cross over with the purple teletubby.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

Gwen: Its me in disguise, so just chill out.

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires! RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

Ben: Die, cousin, die!

Gwen: If you dont know the meaning, then look it up in this dictionary!

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy. Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being. She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Zappy: Apparently Im a character in an online game, so I get a cool username. But is it like Zezima? No. The Old Nite? No! King Duffy?! NO! Wait...

 

Nicely done. IDK about having the actual characters show up, but it works.

 

You would have been safe from me, except I'm really tired after writing yesterday's eleven-turn Duel and the alien wasn't named after a Fire Emblem character. But now it's my turn...

(For the record, the Otaclub Mega Crossover is shaping up to be better than this.)

 

[spoiler=In the not-too-distant future...]

Our policy here is to use the author's own characters against them. However, this is supposedly a Mega Crossover that hasn't added all their universes yet, so I'm going to pick one Ben Ten character, one Gaia Online character, and one character generally associated with crossovers. Our team today is Gwen Tennyson, a spunky and sardonic ten-year-old witch, Rina, a... flower vendor and Ensemble Darkhorse, and Yukari Yakumo, manipulator of boundaries and frequent initiator of crossovers.

 

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It all happened in a split second when many dimensions joined as one.

Rina: It's... kinda hard to pin down what's wrong with this sentence, but I know there's something wrong...

Yukari: The problem is that the gist of the sentence is "many dimensions joined as one," but the subject is a poorly-defined "it." "Make every word tell" and whatnot.

Gwen: Whatever "it" is, "it" sounds stupid and melodramatic.

 

It started with an ordinary blackout one night, happening at the same time in different dimensions, throughout all universes.

Rina: Yeah that sounds normal enough.

Gwen: But wouldn't the electric companies be freaking out?

Yukari: If it's only for one night, I'm sure they wouldn't notice. So long as it was only daytime in Africa and China and similarly exploited regions.

 

Little did anyone know, this has caused a queer phenomenon to occur – mysterious portals appearing everywhere.

Rina: Yay, portals~!

Gwen: If they're appearing everywhere, how do people not notice them?

 

The electricity was back up again in a week,

Gwen: Okay, now I'm pretty sure the electric companies are freaking out.

Yukari: Well, yes.

 

give or take a few days,

Yukari: The administrators in sub-saharan Africa didn't notice and waited another week before fixing it.

 

but nothing could remove these Portals.

Rina: Well, we wouldn't know if no one noticed, would we~?

Gwen: Despite the fact that they're appearing everywhere...

 

This was not the first time.

Gwen: Oh, well, that would be the problem.

 

We start off in a dimension, that

Yukari: —is full of misplaced commas and failed attempts at a philosophical introduction.

 

may or may not be full of intergalactic war,

Gwen: "May or may not?!" Is it or isn't it?! Intergalactic war is usually a pretty noticable thing.

Rina: You tell me, it's your home~

Yukari: Your poor clauses are lonely.

 

and where aliens are known to the Earthlings.

Yukari: But why do we care about the Earthlings, pray tell? After all, alienation is relative.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me~

Gwen: Yeah, say something we can understand for once.

Yukari: Say you lived on, oh, Vanadi or Exovarcéôs. Then Earthlings would be aliens to you.

 

Ben Tennyson,

Gwen: —was randomly introduced into the paragraph with no precedent.

Rina: You aren't very nice to your cousin~

Yukari: It's because she's a tsundere.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: She pretends to hate him so she can pretend she doesn't love him.

Gwen: OI.

Rina: Oh, well, that's nice~ But I don't have to hate my love~

Yukari: You're different, though.

 

aged 16,

Gwen: lolwut

Yukari: Actually, they released a second season in which Kevin Eleven stopped being a psychopath and was an ambiguous love interest with you. That's their source material.

Gwen: ...imma gonna be sick...

Yukari: Thought so.

 

was driving his car, the DX Mark 10,

Rina: No, no, no, it's the Mach Go...

Yukari: An impressive reference. We'll call it that from now on, if it ever gets mentioned again.

 

one morning. It seemed like an ordinary day, which was not usual

Gwen: You mean... unusual? Yeah, it's pretty unusual for him.

 

for Ben. “Something’s wrong,” Ben muttered to himself.

Rina: But nothing's wrong~ Something's wrong even though nothing's wrong~

Yukari: Something's wrong because nothing's wrong~ Though Reimu doesn't usually follow that logic.

 

He saw a dimensional rift up ahead of him while driving.

All: ...

Gwen: You... don't have much of a flair for the dramatic, do you, author?

Rina: Now something's wrong because something's wrong~

 

Ben scratched his head. “Must be the source,” Ben said as he entered the weird object.

All: ...

Gwen: The source of what?

Yukari: He didn't put much thought into entering the "weird object." Usually, people I know tend to think about these things, and given who I know, that's saying something.

Risa: You sound kind of annoyed~

Yukari: Well, it's hard to get lunch guests if the only way to get to your house is by dimensional rift. I'm thinking about installing a train line...

 

He was no longer in Bellwood.

Gwen: For all we know, he wasn't in Bellwood to begin with.

Rina: No, he was in... huh, we don't know~

Yukari: Hm, it's usually a good idea to describe the setting...

 

He was now in a somewhat-small town.

Yukari: Not enough information for dimensional transit.

Gwen: What time period is he in? Are there dragons running around everywhere? If so, are people ignoring them or taming them or running and screaming? Are you in the far future, or the distant past? Tell us something!

 

He parked his car and went up to a passer-by. “Hello there, sir. May I know where I am?”

Yukari: May you?

Gwen: Can you, with this little description of setting?

 

“Errr… You don’t look like a Gaian.

Rina: Sure he does~ See~?

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Anyways, welcome to Barton Town. Want a tour?” the kind gentleman asked. Ben did not accept the offer and left.

Gwen: He... didn't... left? What?

Yukari: Oh, come on, you can stretch that into a couple sentences. "This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline."

 

He continued walking and bumped into a man with a blade of grass in his mouth and a beret-like hat.

Rina: Ooooh, we're in my world~! Hi Nicholae~!

Yukari: Do you know him?

Rina: Nope~

 

“Hey there young lad. Over here,” the man said to him, “the name’s Nicholae.

Yukari: Yes, but how is he saying it? How is Ben reacting? What's he saying in response? Add these details in; you'll double the length of your story. Describe the setting a bit and you'll triple it.

 

Could I have that thing on your wrist? It looks pretty weird.”

Gwen: Okay, he'd better not just ignore this. People only compete for the Omnitrix —

Yukari: Actually, it got powered down into the "Ultimatrix."

Gwen: ...okay, people only competed for the Ultimatrix every day of last summer. ...okay, "Ultimatrix" sounds really stupid.

Yukari: It could be worse. It could be the "Superatrix" or "Ultramatrix."

 

“Even if I wanted to, it can’t be removed. Sorry, gotta go!” Ben ran away from Nicholae. “Weird kid,”

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

 

Nicholae muttered to himself, “Lets follow him.”

Gwen: Oh, boy. Who's 'let's?'

Yukari: I wasn't aware Nicholae was schizophrenic.

Rina: What's that?

Yukari: He sees and hears people and things around him that don't exist.

Rina: He doesn't do that~

Yukari: I didn't think so.

 

While Ben walked up to the fountain in the middle of town,

Yukari: ...completely forgetting to look at the rest of the town and tell us what it looks like...

Gwen: Because obviously that's what he's going to be interested in.

 

he saw about twenty Lawn Gnomes and about the same number of Pink Flamingoes.

Gwen: Apparently, he didn't see anything else, or we'd know what this town looks like.

Rina: Do the flamingo, the flaming-gop~ Do the flamingo with a where-y'at? where-y'at?

Yukari: That song hasn't been written yet, I'm afraid.

 

“What would garden stuff be doing here?”

Yukari: Well, obviously, the Queen of Hearts invited the Lawn Gnomes to play croquet, and they're waiting on the hedgehogs.

 

Suddenly, the unanimated

Yukari: "Inanimate." You mean "inanimate."

 

objects became animated, or should I say, the Animated.

Yukari: Well, you might say that, except that anyone reading a mega crossover, especially one of your promised scale, can't possibly be expected to know about every universe contained therein, so you really have to explain each universe to a much greater degree of detail than you might ordinarily.

Gwen: Come to think of it, they never described Ben...

 

The army of forty attacked Ben.

Gwen: The suspense is palpable.

 

“We’ll see how they deal with Rath…”

All: ...

Gwen: You never mentioned Fire Emblem. Would've been nice of you to say something about that.

Yukari: Miserably enough, that's an actual alien. Think of Wildmutt, and then subtract a bit of intelligence and add some belligerence.

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: It's very big, bestial in appearance, very angry, and very stupid. But I'd like to see how they really dealt with Rath...

 

Ben slammed down the watch on his wrist, also known as the Ultimatrix.

Gwen: You're not going to describe anything about the Ultimatrix being an object of power so mighty those intergalactic wars that may or may not be happening back in our world were waged over it, are you.

 

Transformation began.

Rina: Nope~

Gwen: ...do you have any idea how stupid that sounds?

Yukari: Unless used for comedic effect or irony, no sentence should be two words long. This isn't Japanese.

 

Ben head morphed from human to tiger.

Rina: Huh~? How do you head morph~?

Gwen: Th... that does not make sense. Tigers are smarter than Wildmutt.

Yukari: They're smarter than alien!Rath, too.

 

His arms became brawnier and he grew claws. “RATH!” a stripy, orange, feline-like humanoid

Rina: Hey, that's an oxymoron~

Gwen: Describe all this in its own sentence.

 

creature appeared at the same spot Ben was.

Rina: So who said "RATH!" up there~?

Gwen: Who knows?

 

The stripy creature, also known as Rath, was Ben.

Gwen: Then how could it have appeared where Ben was? Astral projection?

 

Nicholae saw the whole thing. He was rather shocked and was eager to bid a high price for the watch.

Yukari: Show, don't tell. Those two sentences could have easily been a whole paragraph, not to mention engaging to the readers.

 

Rath punched the ground, causing the Animated to become unanimated again.

Gwen: "Inanimate." You mean "inanimate."

Yukari: Magipulation "Return Inanimate~" Alice's Spell Cards aren't in Rath's arsenal, though.

Gwen: Come to think of it, aren't flamingoes animate in the first place?

All: ...

 

He noticed a mysterious looking currency they left behind.

Rina: Ooh, mysterious~

Gwen: It's not mysterious to you, it's just gold. I had to look that up, though, so someone isn't doing their job properly.

 

Rath, being a rather dumb alien, ate a coin. “YUCK!” wailed the beast as he spat the coin out.

Yukari: This is the most gripping action we've seen thus far.

 

When he did, he saw many people in metal suits around him. “Barton regulars here,” all of them said in unison. “Let me

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

 

tell you something, Barton Regulars! Nobody messes with RATH!” Rath shouted. “Let me

Yukari: No, no, you're supposed to start a new paragraph when there's new speaker.

Gwen: This is the third time... in a row.

 

tell YOU something, Animated, Commander Leon messes with any Animated,” a man wearing a bigger suit than the others appeared.

Gwen: You seem to think that appearing is a way of saying something.

Yukari: This sentence, I regret to inform you, is hopelessly boring. You don't seem to care much about the spacing at all.

 

He was the commander of Barton Regulars, Commander Leon.

Rina: Yay, Commander Leon~! He usually runs and hides whenever I try and find him, though.

Gwen: ...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: There, there. That's quite enough now. Some people just can't keep up with Rina's high-energy lifestyle.

Gwen: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: ...we'll leave you to that, then.

 

“Sorry, Commander Leon, he’s a good guy,” a seductive sounding voice boomed.

Gwen: Seductive-sounding voices don't boom.

 

The Regulars looked behind and saw a Gaian Vampire wearing Purple, with a hat and an umbrella.

Yukari, Gwen: Oh, look, it's you.

All: ...

Rina: So which is it?

Gwen: For the sake of my sanity, I'll pick Yukari. She can probably make a seductive voice boom, too.

 

“Sorry Ben,” she said, “I think you have to chill out.”

 

“Let me tell you something, Zapptaur10 of the Vampires!

All: ...

Gwen: ...Zapptaur... 10?

Rina: Yeah, apparently~

Gwen: ...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA—

Yukari: I might have picked a better name, I think. "Violet Reverius" was a particularly nice alias, though "LegendaryGirlA" would have done fine.

Rina: But how did Ben know her name was Zapptaur10~?

Yukari: There's usually an identifier somewhere on the character in MMORPGs, to avoid confusion among duplicates.

Rina: I thought you said alien!Rath was stupid, though~

Yukari: ...

Gwen: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...

Yukari: Mm, that's starting to annoy me. Bounded Field "Balance of Motion and Stillness."

Gwen: ...

Yukari: Much better.

 

RATH doesn’t knowthe meaning of Chill out! And Rath will not spare even friends!”

All: ...

Yukari: But you will. You spared the Tiffin, remember?

 

Rath then growled at the Vampire, known as Zappytaur10, simply called Zappy.

All: ...

Yukari: Bounded Field "Balance of Motion and Stillness."

Gwen: This is the third time in a row we're all stunned speechless.

Yukari: This isn't where you introduce the character's name.

 

Even for a Vampire, she was frightened by the ferocious tiger-like being.

Gwen: You should'a thought of that before you told it to chillax.

Yukari: You heckle from atop the roof, but not when you're in harm's way...

Rina: Your big words are confusing me again~

Yukari: I'm talking about people like her who'll do things when they think they're safe from the consequences and then cower when those consequences arrive. By the way, Gwen, it's definitely you.

Gwen: Gaaaah!

 

She ran and hid behind the fountain.

Rina: Like that~?

Yukari: Precisely like that.

Gwen: So what's next?

Yukari: Nothing, it's over~

All: ...

Yukari: Not the best ending, I know.

Gwen: I dunno, I think it's kinda fitting. It's as stupidly elementary and anticlimactic as the rest of the story.

Yukari: From a certain point of view, true~

 

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You do, at least, seem to have put the effort into this required to proofread, but it reads more like an excited fangasm than a properly constructed fanfic. Give us length and detail! This treats its subjects only in outline.

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You have successfully and unintentionally created a Bad Fic. Well done.

 

Let me give you some headers.

 

. Descriptive language - Take your time in writing and re-check it, use a thesaurus and make sure the language is as descriptive as possible.

 

. Dialogue - I can see you tried hard here, however, slow it down, have more speech and take your time with where he's headed rather then a mere bullet point sentence.

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Let me tell you something, YCM users! Nobody reviews Rath's Jolta's reviews with a sign on it! That makes Rath Jolta really mad!

 

lolJK. I'm not Rath. I don't rant. And I don't spare pieces of Sh**. That includes the Tiffin.

 

Sh**-like creatures, I meant. The Tiffin was too cute for Rath.

 

So I'm supposing its... Practical?

 

Anyways, I'm gonna complete the Prolouge by today. And maybe an incomplete Chapter 1.

 

Oh yes Pichu, I'm afraid there are A LOT of characters that I don't know. But I'll include Herbert

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Immune to Alien X? lolwut? I was under the impression that Alien X was a limited-power Reality Warper. Villain Sues are also threats to good writing.

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Let me tell you something' date=' YCM users! Nobody reviews [s']Rath's[/s] Jolta's reviews with a sign on it! That makes Rath Jolta really mad!

 

lolJK. I'm not Rath. I don't rant. And I don't spare pieces of Sh**. That includes the Tiffin.

 

Sh**-like creatures, I meant. The Tiffin was too cute for Rath.

 

So I'm supposing its... Practical?

 

Anyways, I'm gonna complete the Prolouge by today. And maybe an incomplete Chapter 1.

 

Oh yes Pichu, I'm afraid there are A LOT of characters that I don't know. But I'll include Herbert

use Pikachu and "Mr. Furry" (AKA: Wolf) too!

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Interesting rp you have here Jolta. So the polar bear is really a perv or is that just the title?

 

Just a title. If it was really a perv, Club Penguin would be sued and Disney would have their entrails burned.

 

Unless I make him a perv. After all, he isn't wearing clothes. Herbert never does.

 

And it rhymes.

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