Creatures of the Night Sky *Update*

[.Nine]

Hey, I'm currently working on a set called "Creatures of the Night Sky"

 

 

These cards focus on inflicting direct damage to the opponent from the Grave. It may not be the most original or the best OCG, but its my first.

I will be updating this thread with more in time =)

All image credit to FW

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Correct OCG for both cards:

 

Knight of the Night Sky

When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Magician of the Night Sky" from your Graveyard.

A decent effect to trigger Magician's effect. If most of these cards are going to get their effects when they are Summoned from the Graveyard though, I'd suggest changing it from "Night Sky" instead of targeting a single monster in the archetype, to make it more flexible. That's just IMO though. The card gets a rating of 7.6/10

 

Magician of the Night Sky

If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of a "Knight of the Night Sky", you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard, and then inflict damage to your opponent equal to the DEF of the sent monster.

Again, make it just "Night Sky" if most of the are going to get their effects when Summoned from the Graveyard, or will have the ability to Swarm from the Graveyard or other places as well. This card probably won't be that useful unless in the archetype you'll have that monster with like 2000 DEF or possible higher. I'd change that last effect to this: and then inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK or DEF of the sent monster (whichever is highest). Sure that might be a bit OP'd, but if you choose to change it to that effect, have it only be able for "Night Sky" monsters to be sent to the Graveyard for it's effect and then maybe add a drawback if you change it to that effect I suggested. This card has lots of potential, so 8.6/10

 

Overall, I'd like to see more of this archetype.

[.Nine]

Thanks, I have made more. Thanks for the effect ideas, they make a bit more sense that what I put..