My first 5 cards :) new without links.

[mkolp1]

 

 

 

 

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This is first cards so plz dont criticize....

Evry1 post wt u think honestly tho :D

[Anbu-of-Sand]

New Dawn

Halve the ATK of all DARK Attributed monsters and double all DARK Attributed monster's DEF.

The picture isn't that good either IMO.

Quite plain if you ask me. Would be way better if you changed it to EARTH Attributed monsters. 3.6/10

 

Dark Days

Halve the ATK of all LIGHT Attributed monsters and double all LIGHT Attributed monster's DEF.

Like the above, the picture could use some work.

Just like the above except for LIGHT monsters. Also like the above, would be better for EARTH.

2.6/10

 

Heavenly Creature

Should me a Normal Monster. Otherwise give it an effect. If it's a spirit monster, it should return to the hand the turn it was Summoned and such. If you change it to an effect spirit monster, add another addtional effect as well. Creature isn't a type, Looks more like a Fairy-Type. As a Normal Monster, give it a great lore. Picture is quite blurry. 1.2/10

 

Demonic Being

Pretty much the above. Except the type would be Fiend-Type or Pyro-Type. 1.2/10

 

I wont critique the last card. You said not to criticize but then what else are we going to talk about the cards? Overall, not the best cards I've seen. Okay attempts for a beginner. Overtime you'll become better with OCG and making cards. But for now, your first 5 cards get 4.8/10 overall for your attempt.

[mkolp1]

here is my character card :D

[Smesh]

Um...make a different thread for tht card, preferably in the introductions section

[mkolp1]

okay thank you