Tsukihime set

[Saber]

My second set of cards based on the Tsukihime visual novel and corresponding media. I'm trying to train up and get good enough with OCG and all that stuff so that I can post in the Realistic section. Please rate and comment people, I'd be grateful! ^_^

 

The set is not yet finished, more cards are coming soon. Some of these characters are very obscure and there are practically no pictures of them on the net, to the point where I had to make pics myself using sprites from the visual novel (peeps such as Kishima, Roa and some others)

 

If the effects are unreadable just tell and I'll post them as text too.

 

Arcueid Lv

 

 

 

 

Shiki

 

 

 

 

Akiha

 

 

 

 

Hisui

 

 

 

 

Kohaku

 

 

 

 

Ciel

 

 

 

 

Kishi

 

 

 

 

Sacchin

 

 

 

 

Roa

 

 

 

 

Nero

 

 

 

 

Wara my favorite Type-Moon character <3

 

 

 

 

Sion

 

 

 

 

 

Aoko

 

 

 

 

 

Len

 

 

 

 

Mech huzzah!

 

 

 

 

Spells

 

 

 

 

Bonus: Ryogi Greetings from KnK. I had to give her justice as the most OMGWTFBBQIMBAOP entity in all of Nasuverse.

 

 

[NeosWiseman]

I can see another Type Moon fan. So it's Tsukihime this time

I can say that the OCG if good except for Flip summoned=Flip Summoned

Another nice set of cards from you after the Fate Set

9.8/10

Some pictures could use some improvement.

Other than that, pretty nicely done! ^^

[zancrow the flame god]

very very nice. 9.9/10

[Saber]

I'm flattered by the comments and ratings =D

 

But it'd be nice if I got some more specific feedback on the effects, whether they're balanced or useful and such, and what is this "synergy" I keep seeing people talking about?

[Saber]

bump

[Shizuku Oikawa]

[spoiler=OCG fixes]

attribute isn't need in effects

"may only be activated" is changed to "This card can only be activated"

"restore"="gain"

"may not"="cannot"

"may"="can"

"active"="face-up"

unless of course, i'm wrong

 

This looks like an awesome set, only minor errors, lol Life Points are set to 1.

9.5/10

[Cows198]

ocg errors:

-dont say active, use face-up

-a proper LV card is written like this: Arcueid LV5, both letters cap no space before number

-dont need ta say top of your deck, its assumed

-the infamous, dont use may, use can

-cap type like in Zombie-Type monster

-instead of Monster Card, just use monster (New OCG)

-dont use recover life points, use ...increase your Life Points by...

-instead of All monsters on the field with Tohno in their name...", just use All "Tohno" monsters (New OCG)

-dont say draw from deck when ur searchin for a monster, use add when going to your hand and Special Summon if their hitting the field. ex: for nero, just say special summon 1 Beast-Type monster from your deck, instead of all that other stuff

-dont say attribute, DARK monster is fine

-Ritual monsters need the lore: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "????".

balance:

waaaaaaay too many nomi monsters. They are underpowering the majority of your set. Either make them a bit stronger or remove the summon restictions

REally nice pics though, and a reasonably diverse archetype.

8.5/10

[Sákura Haruno]

Again, some of the lvl cards are extremely under powered. More so with this set than the last one. Cause of that I have to give it a 6.8/10

[Yang Xiao-Long]

How, exactly, do you Summon Ryogi? If it's a Ritual, you're gonna need the Ritual Monster clause, "This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell "Blood Rain"

 

People above got OCG, although, it's "can" not "may"

LV monsters are UPed as well, and their effects jump all over the place. LV monsters are supposed to be amped-up versions of their previous version, and they usually make you fulfill a certain condition before you can "LV Up" so to say. Stick with one special effect for the LV monsters, and make it more powerful bit by bit as you Level them up.

 

Pics are great though.

7/10

Just work on OCG and fine-tune your effects; then you'll be good to go.