My first card(s)

[mentor-of-spells]

here it is, my first card it might be junk to you, senior members out there... :|

 

 

 

 

Effect: If this card is destroyed by another monster, you can pay 500 Life Points to return this card to your hand and destroy the card that destroyed this card.

 

 

 

Effect: When this card selects an attack target, you can discard 1 card to half the ATK of the monster selected as the attack target.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Welcome to the YCM. Lets see what you made.

No OCG Errors to start off. A great name with a great picture.

I love that first effect how you can recycle it when it's destroyed by battle, and destroy the monster that destroyed it. But I just HATE how it targets only Spellcasters. I'd make it just monster and not target a specific type. That last effect I think is not needed, and that you should remove it seeing the card needs a tribute to be normal summoned. Overall though, a great first card for a person new to the YCM. 9.4/10

[mentor-of-spells]

thanks, i look into the effect and change to what you said... how would i be able to edit my post? or do i have to make a reply with a modified picture of it?

[Anbu-of-Sand]

To change your first post, on the bottom right of it, you'll see:

Edit,Delete,Reply,Quote+,Report

Click the Edit button then choose Full Edit.

Then from their, do whatever you want to change your first post.

Add new cards to it, post a card that has been edited, etc.

I'm guessing it's the second one that you would want to do.

[mentor-of-spells]

ah thanks Anbu i'll get the card changed

[Anbu-of-Sand]

No problem :)

[mentor-of-spells]

card modified!

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i have created a new card... WOW im a fast card maker.

[HoneycombTroy]

"When this card is destroyed by battle, you may pay 500 LPs to return this card to your hand and destroy the attacking monster" Thats the real OCG.

AND always type you may not you can.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Merlin: I'm 100% sure it's 'you can' and not 'you may' I think it's 'you may' in Official Card Game grammar.

 

The new card has minimal OCG errors. A great card. It's kinda like a "Shrink". But also OP'd. This card can defeat monsters with up to 3100 ATK. Seeing when cut in half, would be 1650. So pretty much it needs another drawback otherwise kinda OP'd IMO. Maybe also you lose LP equal to the new attack of the monster that has it's ATK cut in half? Overall, 7.8/10.

[mentor-of-spells]

okay but ive seen plenty of real YGO card effects with kind of one in it Lp's is not how you do it it is Life Points. but thanks for the correction

[Nojrada]

Another simple way to make the card more balanced might be to simply decrease the attack a bit, but otherwise, losing the life points is good also. Another funny thought is, the pictures would fit the other cards better, looking at the effect and all. Just a thought. Great cards though! Love them and good luck with new cards you make. Beautiful!

[Rockin' Rollin' Duelist]

I like them. Very creative