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[Dream Cabbage]

I keep on finding cards that I made ages ago lol.

 

 

 

Lore: During each of your End Phases, you can select up to 2 Normal Monsters you control, or 1 Effect Monster you control. Return the selected monster(s) to your deck. Then on your next Standby Phase, you can return the selected monster(s) to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position. .

 

[MibeR]

so, it like useless??im not rude

[psychicplayer]

pfftt... it could be used at the opponent.

7/10

[Master White]

It is not useless, think about it, its like removing your monster so it don't die, so it can come back to be on the field without dying, but to make it more useful, try this. This is just a suggestion

 

Lore:

 

During Each of your End Phases, you can select Up to 2 Normal Monsters you control, or 1 Effect monster you control. Return the selected monster(s) to your deck. Then on your next Standby Phase, you can return the Selected monster(s) you control to your side of the field in face-up attack position. This monster is removed from play during your 3rd Standby Phase.

 

You can use it if you like it, or If you want, I will keep it as you have it, with hopefully Better OCG, which is still probably bad, but then again, maybe not.

 

Lore:

During Each of your End Phases, you can select 1 Normal Monster you control and return it to your deck. During your next Standby Phase, you can return the selected monster in face-up attack position.

 

I hope that helps, but it is still a good idea, so i give you an 7.8/10 Keep woking on it.

[Dream Cabbage]

thanks guys, I'll go with your new effect XzY, it's way better than mine

 

 

EDIT: card is edited, I removed the bit about removing it from play cazsue this card is quite balanced.

[lolwhy]

Gemini support!

[Dream Cabbage]

I thought of that too, I told my brother but he said that Gemini's are rubbish but now they've got some support. If I get the chance I will give the idea too KONAMI.

 

 

Personally I think it's one of the best cards I've made.

[lolwhy]

Yeah, it's a simple effect. But why return to the Deck? lol

[Dream Cabbage]

well you wouldn't send it to the Graveyard or reomove it from play or put is back in your hand because

 

 

a) It's in your graveyard during your opponent's turn, they could do anything to it.

 

b) Remove it from play against an RFP deck would be catastrophic for you

 

c) If you returned it to the hand it would basically be a Spirit maker.

[lolwhy]

Touché xD

 

I still like the card though. Best I've seen this week (singles).

[Master White]

I guess it is, but thats alright. I usually take in consideration that I make cards and get them criticized by Max Darkness before hand, so yea. Well, the idea you had there is great, keep it up.