rebeccanthony Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 Hello, I'm building a deck based on removed from play cards, so here are the ones I've made so far, i know some are blurry, but can u please rate and if there are grammar problems or if they are overpowered, tell methank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 The effects are minimal... they could be alot better. You should work on getting better pictures with better quality. Try deviantart.com maybe? Good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 Bad Pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 "DNA Transmovement" Rating=5/10 Current Effect: Send your entire hand to the RFP zone Change to: Remove your hand from play. "Time Portal" Rating=7.5/10 Current Effect: Select a monster. Send them to the RFP zone. 2 turns after this card is activated, during your main phase, Special Summon the RFP card with 500 attack and defense increase. Change To: Select a monster. Remove it from play. 2 turns after this card is activated, during your Main Phase, Special Summon the card you removed from play and increase it's ATK and DEF by 500. More ratings soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 some of the pics are blurry 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rebeccanthony Posted January 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 thank you d-vader Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 It is ok but i really do not like the pics and the effects.Im sure there is OCG and grammar errors and also, is there such thing as RFP zone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 9.5/10 Where the 2 first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rebeccanthony Posted January 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 ok i fixed the first 2 cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 ok just a few things i will tell youDeck is capitalized, when talking about raising a monster attack or defense, or saying that if a monster attack and deffense are such and such, it should be written as ATK, or DEFand do not!abbreviate remove from play >_>6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 Thanks for changing them! I will rate more in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 6, 2008 Report Share Posted January 6, 2008 I think alot of the pics are blurr, but the effects are ok.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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