koramore Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 blah cnc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 18px too tall. A lot of potential, you hit none of the marks .-." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Let me guess, taking a sheet? Interesting, but the Render doesn't fit the style you were goin with IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Not liking the lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 The lightsource is done badly =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 The lightsource is done badly =/ Explain? Please for the love of god explain. Red is the lightsource' date=' which is CLEARLY like a tunnel effect, where due to the positioning it slightly expands towards the focal. The fact that you said the lightsource is done badly just goes to show that you PROBABLY dont have much creativity.[/color']Blue is where the light SHOULD hit due to this tunnel effect of a light source. He doesnt have it all down and quite frankly I dont blame him. The problem lies in his own inability to edit the light spots on the render. Which is all fine and dandy... for now.Orange is my own personal advice. The image looks as if he's pulling himself out of a pool of adamantium (not gonna explain what that is). He could have pulled the C4D's up to look like liquid admantium to give the impression that he is moving and doing something. The slight on the back says that it's coming from all around or he had stood up from lying on his back. Nice job Kora, but there's some minor fixes that could make it look phenomenal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Thxs 4 all the feedback. I c this is missing some things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 The lightsource is done badly =/ Explain? Please for the love of god explain. Okay, let me refine that: The lightsource looks forced, which makes it look unreal.I understand what you meant with the tunnel effect, but still, in my eyes, it looks forced, even for a tunnel effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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