The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 I've been told this is my best set YET! I'm still working on my Support/Related cards for it. Please show me the errors so I can edit them and please rate. LV Metal Warriors: [spoiler=Metal Warrior LV4] [spoiler=Lore]If this card attacks an opponent's monster with an ATK less than 1700, destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. If this card destroys a monster this way. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Metal Warrior LV6" from your hand or deck during your next Standby Phase. [spoiler=Metal Warrior LV6] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Metal Warrior LV4". If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Metal Warrior LV8" from your hand or deck during your next Standby Phase. [spoiler=Metal Warrior LV8] [spoiler=Lore] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Metal Warrior LV6." This card cannot declare and attack during the turn it was summoned. If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation, during the End Phase you used this card's effect, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Metal Warrior LV10" to your side of the field. [spoiler=Metal Warrior LV10] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Metal Warrior LV8." This card cannot declare an attack the turn it was summoned. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. During the End Phase you used this card's effect you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Rekeph, the Ultimate Dark Being" from your hand or deck. The Ultimate Evolution: [spoiler=Rekeph, the Ultimate Dark Being] [spoiler=Lore] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Metal Warrior LV10." This card cannot declare an attack the turn it was summoned. Once per turn, you can discard any number of cards from your hand to destroy a number of cards your opponent controls and deal damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x 400. This card cannot declare an attack the turn you activated this effect. Rekeph's Evolution: [spoiler=Rekeph, the Ultimate Dark Warrior][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Rekeph, the Ultimate Dark Being." Once per turn during your Standby Phase, your opponent selects 1 random card in your hand and discards it. This card's effect depends on the card discarded:•If it was a monster, deal damage to your opponent equal to half of the discarded monster's ATK.•If it was a Spell, you and your opponent both gain 500 Life Points.•If it was a trap, this card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of your opponent's next turn. Synchro Metal Warriors: [spoiler=Metal Warrior - Tuner] [spoiler=Lore]You can Special Summon this card from your hand when you control a face-up monster with "Metal" in its card name. Once per turn you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 monster with "Metal" in its card name from your hand, deck or Graveyard. [spoiler=Metal Warrior - Supreme] [spoiler=Lore]"Metal Warrior - Tuner" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Metal" monsters.This card's original ATK and DEF are equal to the amount of monsters with "Metal" in its card name x 700. You can tribute this card while it has 4000 or more ATK to Special Summon 1 "Rekeph, the Ultimate Dark Being" from your hand, deck or Graveyard, ignoring its summoning conditions. Support Cards: [spoiler=Metal Warrior Dragon] [spoiler=Metal Force][Trap/Normal]When an opponent's monster declares an attack while you control a face-up "Metal Warrior," destroy all attack position monsters your opponent controls. [spoiler=Metal Fiend] [spoiler=Metal Golem] [spoiler=Metal Giant][spoiler=Metal Guard] [spoiler=Metal-Saurus] [spoiler=Metal Tank] [spoiler=Metal Recovery][spell/Normal]Add 1 monster, Spell or Trap card that includes "Metal" in its card name from your Graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=Metal Reborn][spell/Normal]Discard 1 card, Special Summon 1 monster with "Metal" in its card name from your Graveyard. [spoiler=Metal Doll] You CAN use these in RPs, but PM me for permission, if you don't I will hunt you down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 awesome cards, perfect images, nice effects. 9/10 almost perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 yay me!Now I go make the Metal Warrior Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 come on people! COMMENT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FSBolthof Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 I like these cards, but they don't all have the same effect (but getting better). You switch effects between these LV monsters, although you shouldn't do that. Look at all LV monsters, they all have the same effect but getting better. There is a connection, you miss that.Nice Pictures.Good support with that dragon, although might pay Life Points, because so you can summon the next LV a bit too quick.If you improve these cards I will give 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 more cards addedthnx 4 the advicewait, you're saying that they should all have the same effect of LV4? 1700 or less ATK? Well I like how these guys are powerful, but harder 2 summon. Which the reason 4 the Dragon is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 COMMENT! BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Metal Guard is a bit OPed. It has 2500 DEF, LV4, and no negative effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 ok, I'll fix thatedited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Rekeph should not (I repeat NOT!!) be Level 4. It's too powerful. Make it at least a Level 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 it's level 12, I THOUGHT I made him 12!I'll fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 COMMENT PEOPLE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 I just looked at Rekeph's effect due to you mentioning it. 100% broken. I haven't even bothered checking out the difficulty of the summoning condition, but a 4400 that has a destruction version of Brionac's effect plus 400 burn per card, PLUS can attack multiple times based on the number of "Metal Warriors", 4 of which I presume you already used since it needs a LV monster to summon it, and it's worded in a way that you could have MULTIPLES of the same monster for additional attacks...everything about it is broken beyond belief. This is a card that basically says "I'll beat you even if you have 20,000 LP." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 I'll change it to 300 burn and 4000 ATK, ok?wait, I'll remove the multiple attacks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 I was going to critique everything else, but a site glitch prevented it. Before I look at the editted version, I'm posting this. Metal Warrior LV 4: I like it, actually. It's fine. Metal Warrior LV 6: Again, it's okay. Metal Warrior LV 8: This is where things got weird. It's got a weird LV up mechanism, one that doesn't fit with the same effects of the previous 2 LVs, and I'm wondering whether you copied the stats of Horus or something. (Lv 4 has 1600, 6 has 2300, 8 has 3000) Metal Warrior LV 10: Well done...it's got a really pricy LV up mechanism, but let's face it...it's OPed. By this point in a duel, you should be about to win, and the further evolution is entirely unneeded. That said, this card was way too easy to summon. It just takes longer than most LV monsters, and its effect is downright devasting. It and LV 8 just traded hand advantage for field advantage, and with their high ATKs, duels should be wrapping up about now. The last evolution is OPed to the max. There's a fine line between "Appropriately OPed because of how hard it is to summon, and absurdly broken DESPITE how difficult it is to summon." EDIT: Well, a LITTLE better...but maybe you shouldn't be allowed to attack the turn or something. It's like Brionac, only almost twice as powerful and deals burn, too. Here's just a little tip for duelists using these LV monsters: Level Up! loves you! Level Modulation loves you. These are semi-nomis, so Call of the Haunted and similar loves these. There are no drawbacks aside from waiting a turn to Level up. Metal Warrior Dragon: Mildly clever. Metal Barrier: Three Words: Use Negate Attack. Metal Force...because every theme needs its own Mirror Force. Do I really have to keep going? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 OK, I'll edit it, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coaster Guy Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 I really enjoyed reading these cards, good ocg and nice evolution scale. you get a 8.8 out of 10. Good luck against BLU-DAWN. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 thnx, I'm not worried 'bout it, I'm exited. and all edited evilfusionand by the way, Horus never came to mind when making these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 You're insane. You actually made the cards MORE broken, lmao. LV 8 is...rather interesting. It gets piercing, but if it attacks a faceup DEF monster, it'll deal no damage and then Level Up at the End Phase, which goes against your Standby Phase evolutions, not sure if that was intentional. LV 10 is okay, lacking the disturbing destructive power of the original and is actually weaker than Lv8, since Lv8 deals piercing damage if it attacks a f/d monster and levels up if it attacks a faceup monster. This nukes facedown monsters by attacking and lacks piercing. But Lv 8 and this level up TOO easily. Also, Lv 10 has way too much ATK. The only Lv 10 LV monster (Winged Kuriboh doesn't count), is Armed Dragon 10 with 3000. 3800 is pushing it for something not really meant to be a "god-card" level card (Obelisk, Dreadroot, Raviel, Hamon, Neosphere...) Most monsters dont have ATK that high. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 here I go again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilfusion Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 I've got no real complaints now. Much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 nice cards.nice OCG.Nice Effects.OK pics.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devlin Crow Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 I like these, and cant wait to see more cards :) 9/10 from me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The White Wolf Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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