mkolp1 Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 anyone?and dont say its overpowered, because i have a real card sorta like that.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Well, then... Bluntly, it sounds childish. It can worded as "The equipped monster cannot be selected as an attack target." 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Holy crap.... Ok ok...simply put, this card's effect would be as follows... "A monster equipped with this card can not be selected as an attack target." That simple. Just look over some card from the game and get a feel for the grammar. Overall, the effect is very plain, and albeit boring...but it's not overpowered like most would be. I'll give it a 3/10 as is, 6/10 with an card grammar fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkolp1 Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 k thanks i will get onto that straight away....did i spell aura right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosIncarn Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 k thanks i will get onto that straight away....did i spell aura right? Haha, yes. You spelled it correctly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkolp1 Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 hers the new 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 OK, the first version is kinda fan fiction :DThe new one is bettercan not=cannot You could have just replaced the card in the first post with this one, though... Anyway, you have to find a better picture. This one is blurry and pixeleted.7.5/10And I want the effect of your next card to be more creative, OK? ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkolp1 Posted July 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 yes i understand.i will try making a better one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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