Zextra Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Here's my first Blackwing support card. Please rate and comment! BLACKWING - TWISTER THE INFERNAL HELLSTORM Lore:2 "Blackwing" Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card's Attribute is also treated as WIND. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 "Black Burning Gust" Counter on this card (max.3). Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Black Burning Gust" Counter from this card to destroy 1 monster on the field that does not share an Attribute with this card. If a monster is destroyed by this effect, inflict damage to both players equal to the level of the destroyed monster x 300. You can remove 3 "Black Burning Gust" Counters from this card to Special Summon up to 2 DARK monsters from your Graveyard with less than 2000 ATK. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. When this card is removed from the field when it has 3 "Black Burning Gust" Counters on it, destroy cards on the field equal to the number of "Blackwing" monsters in your Graveyard. Thanks! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 That is absolutely stunning (effect + pic)How do you make images like that? With the colored borders.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Thanks a lot. For the colored border, I just used GIMP to edit a regular border (and I downloaded a few, too!). Search card templates in the search box and maybe you'll get something. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bangverde Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 the effect and overall stats are pretty cool to. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YCM Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 those are really good cards i love the way you made your pic hw do u make it all scratched like that its so cool and how do you get the bordering that way no doubt about it im gonna download gimp and def search card templates but for now 10/10 amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 That is an epic picture. IMO the Blue Border throws it off. Red would be better IMO.Only 1 OCG Error: "Black Burning Gust" Counter = Black Burning Gust Counter That first effect somehow throws me off. Making it a DARK,FIRE and WIND. What would happen if Ally of Justice Catastor attacked it? A hard-ish way to destroy monsters on the field being tokens. Seeing it has 3/6 Attributes, the only monsters that won't share an Attribute with this card is EARTH,LIGHT and WATER. Burn damage ftw? Destroy a Level 4 both players take 1200. Destroy a Level 8...both players take 2400. I think that effect is tad bit OP'd, even if it affects both. I'd make it only x200. Has great swarming potential. Special 2 Blackwings. Special a Blackwing Tuner + Blackwing non-Tuner and you got yourself a Synchro that hopefully won't be interrupted. The last effect is great. Great way to destroy cards on the field, with Blackwings synchroing like hell, you'll get quite the Blackwings in the Grave. Overall, great card. 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 I'm ignored??? T_T Yes you are. Personally' date=' I'm disappointed by Konami's idea of "power" that Jack is craving for. The effects are rather defensive than offensive because giving it the immunity of being destroyed is more protection than aggression. The idea of "power" is giving Jack a card that can't be stopped. So the ATK boost is a good offensive style, but it should have this: "When this card attacks, the attack cannot be negated." The only way to stop it is ATK reducing effects. and another effect should be "If this card is targeted by Card effects, Discard a Monster Card to switch the target to other monster on the field." O wait. That just sounds silly.[/quote'] Exactly. The idea is that, although Jack wants more power, he needs an alternative fighting style. Honestly, though, I can't see how this is too different than just more power. Maybe he'll just never give up power and only fight with power, despite the prophecy. That is an epic picture. IMO the Blue Border throws it off. Red would be better IMO.Only 1 OCG Error: "Black Burning Gust" Counter = Black Burning Gust Counter That first effect somehow throws me off. Making it a DARK' date='FIRE and WIND. What would happen if Ally of Justice Catastor attacked it? A hard-ish way to destroy monsters on the field being tokens. Seeing it has 3/6 Attributes, the only monsters that won't share an Attribute with this card is EARTH,LIGHT and WATER. Burn damage ftw? Destroy a Level 4 both players take 1200. Destroy a Level 8...both players take 2400. I think that effect is tad bit OP'd, even if it affects both. I'd make it only x200. Has great swarming potential. Special 2 Blackwings. Special a Blackwing Tuner + Blackwing non-Tuner and you got yourself a Synchro that hopefully won't be interrupted. The last effect is great. Great way to destroy cards on the field, with Blackwings synchroing like hell, you'll get quite the Blackwings in the Grave. Overall, great card. 9.2/10[/quote'] I like the card actually with good support,better than that Blackwing Emperor card anyway. I didn't realize that you don't need quotation for the name of a counter but now that i see a Blackwing Armor Master's effect show wedge counter without quotation i thank you for the head up XD.... that mean i gotta fixed those "damn" harbinger cards XD.. oh btw good card and that give a good 9.4/10.... kinda don't like the blue border just been to used the black border. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 gahh!!!! No Moar Blackwings! xD But really at first i was reading and said "This isnt Op enough to be blackwings" but then i read the rest xD Errors to Fix-a-maified"If a monster is destroyed by this effect, inflict damage to both players equal to the number of Levels of the destroyed monster x300." this is incorrect it should be If a monster is destroyed by this effect, inflict damage to both players equal to the level of the destroyed monster x 300. 8/10 not a 9 cause of blackwings xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 It's all over the place. First it destroys monsters that's not its attribute. Then it special summons blackwings. It's a FIRE monster btw. Meh, I have seen better. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 FIRE Attrribute is kind of out of no where, so I would just leave that out. But pretty epic Blackwing. They need more cards. YES they do!9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 OK, updated, I took out the FIRE attribute! Thanks for all the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I appreciate the rate, but could you give me some suggestions for problems on the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 That my friend, is what I call SPAM, its something that leaves you wondering why a 7/10Those types of posts are merely for the +1 post count they will somehow enjoy.Anyways, I don't think I noticed the FIRE Attribute before, its a lot better as DARK, obviously because that's what all Blackwings are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 still got that single error i pointed out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 oops - sorry about that. There, I fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 That's a great card (epicness equal to Shooting Star Dragon and Scar Red Nova Dragon)I would expect to see it in the anime :3 10/10 ♥ it^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 That's a great card (epicness equal to Shooting Star Dragon and Scar Red Nova Dragon)I would expect to see it in the anime :3 10/10 ♥ it^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tricksy Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 This card.. it's just completely amazing. It has perfect balance and great use. It would fit so well in any Blackwing deck. The ammount of effort put into this card is awesome. I would just like to congradulate you for making the best card of the day. I love the graphical effects you put onto this card. The OCG is perfect and to give this card anything less than 10/10 would just be wrong. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tricksy Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 This card.. it's just completely amazing. It has perfect balance and great use. It would fit so well in any Blackwing deck. The ammount of effort put into this card is awesome. I would just like to congradulate you for making the best card of the day. I love the graphical effects you put onto this card. The OCG is perfect and to give this card anything less than 10/10 would just be wrong. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thanks a lot to both of you. I really appreciate it! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Thanks a lot to both of you. I really appreciate it! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tricksy Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 zmuzik... i have seen you around this site a lot lately, i actually competed with you in a contest and i just wanna say, you are an awesome card creator. Probobly one of the best out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Wow, thanks! That means a lot. I look forward to competing with you again! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 this card should be Limited Type, for a little bit overpowered. overall nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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