pppaulius Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 OK so im making another Dragonball set, and imposting first part of it the Pilaf Saga will be updated daily (or will it?) [spoiler=Pilaf Saga] [spoiler=World Martial Art Tournament Saga] [spoiler=Red Ribbon Army Saga] [spoiler=Lore] As long as this card stays on the field, a monsters Dragonball-Counters are put on this card.There cannot be more then 7 Dragonball-counters on the field.When 7 Dragonball-counters are on this card, take Shenron ummoned from your deck, graveyard.If a monster destroys other monster with Dragonball-counters on it, put them on the moster that destroyed it.Increase ATK of every monster with ,,Red Ribbon" in its card name by 500 *Yes I Know* *Yes Its Blury Picture* [spoiler=Fortunteller Baba Saga] [spoiler=Lore] You can Tribute this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase. [spoiler=Lore] Once per turn you can discard a card, if you do, draw until you draw one Spell Card, keep that Spell Card, put other cards on top of Deck in any order, if any of those monsters drawn are LVL4 Fiend-Type monsters, Special Summon any amount of drawn Fiend-Type monsters, pay 800 Life Points x number of monsters Special Summoned.This card can't attack directly [spoiler=Lore] When your opponent's monster declares an attack, you can remove from play this card to negate the attack. If this card is removed from play in this way, Special Summon this removed from play card during the End Phase. [spoiler=22nd World Martial Arts Tournament Saga] *Yes I know Image Sucks* [spoiler=Lore] You can Special-Summon this card without Tribute if ,,World Martial Arts Tournament" is on the field.In your every Standby-Phase take one Quick-Play Spell Card from your deck.Increase ATK of this card by 100 for each Quick-Play Spell Card in your graveyard [spoiler=King Piccolo Saga] [spoiler=Piccolo JR Saga and the End of Dragonball] [spoiler=Lore] This card can be Special Summoned without Tribute if ,,Kami's Lookout" is on the field,by discarding 3 cards from your hand.Discard one card and pay 500 Life Points to negate an effect of a card and destroy it, if you control a card with ,,Piccolo" in its card name you can offer this card to increase its ATK and DEF by 800 [spoiler=Lore] This card can be Special Summoned without Tribute if ,,World Martial Arts Tournament" is on the field.Increase this card's ATK by 300 for each Fiend Type monster.Once per turn you can remove from play any number of cards then increase this card's ATK by 100 x number of cards removed this way, until end of the turn [spoiler=Saiyan Saga (Incomplete)][spoiler=Lore]This card can be Special-Summoned if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters without "Älien" in it's card name.When this card is Summoned, you can take up to two cards with "Saiyan" in it's card name from your deck to your hand.When this card is selected as an attack target by a card with lower level then this card, change it to DEF position.This card cannot be destroyed by battle once. PLZ RATE AND COMMENT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Kinda interestingBut there effects are too short for most of them.Dragonball Counter isn't in quotations nor are there of the dash thingy "-" since it's a Counter, and how are you supposed to keep 7 if your only allowed 3 of the same card on top of keeping the monster on the field long enough to hold themYou should have some kinda of card of Field Spell for the Dragon Balls Fusion Materials are in quotations Shouldn't "Puar and Oolong" actually be actually useful rather than 2 weak monster combining to a weak monster with the exact same effect, especially "Pilaf Crew"5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 well puar and oolong werent too useful in the anime too, also ill try to edit the counter thingy thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 um, is it me, or is "Quest for the Dragon Balls" cut halfway? Because I can't see the bottom part of the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 *UPDATE* Another Daily Update this time RR Saga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 I like the idea alot. I like the pictures alot. I think you need to fine tune the cards. They are a little sloppy, and usually people dont mind, but when you have such simple effects thats kinda all we got to look at. And with the 7 dragonball counters you need to be really specific with the OCG. You might want to check out royal magical library and final countdown for the OCG. Overall 8/10. Nice pics, nice set up, nice ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Thx for that ill definately keep your advices in mind, i mean i have whole dragonball/z/gt and if ppl like u keep cimmenting ill make it the best DBZ Set EVER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Heck yea, but dont worry too much about what other people think of your cards man. Make them for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 I need other ppl comments to keep my dream alive and that i could improve my cards so KEEP GOIN, also Baba's Saga is done next one is gonna b HUGE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Musical K-ON! Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Some Bad PicsMercenary Tao doesn't have a typeWhy is Pure Hearted Goku Light attributed and not the other ones?But not bad!8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Bad Pics- Im doing what i can those here r best i can find its not like general yellow has a fanclub.Mercenary Tao not having a type-THX for tellingPure Hearted Goku is PURE HEARTED that is noted you know like capital letters, other goku's r pure hearted too but that is not their strength and this one is full on pure heart Overall thx for taking your time to check the cards and thx for comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Shouldn't the Dodonpa work for Psychic monsters, since Chiaotzu and Tien are Psychics kinda? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Good Idea, ill try to fix that or add an extra variant in next 22 Budokai Saga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Wait, doesn't Mercenary Tao know it also? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 If you dont use it already you can go to deviantart.com. People on there are really good at drawing things, and you could probably find some good pics there. I go there first, then the search engine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Some pics aren't that great, and they are VERY underpowered, so put more effort which lacks. Also, change the OCG and grammar too. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 First yes i use Deviantart and yes general yellow still lacks a fanclud of devoted deviants which would at least remember who he is, SO OF COURSE PICS ARENT GREAT EVER TRIED FINDING KID KRILLIN PICTURE WHICH WOULD BE AT LEAST DECENT?Yes they are underpowered because 1.Dragonball-Underpowered (some crappy pics)2.DBZ-Normal (Deviantart pics (which we all love)).3.DBGT-Overpowered Just like in anime because it will be hard to make stronger goku if i make him strong now he is getting stronger every saga.The OCG is weak because i havent seen a real YGO card for a year, i used to be a real copy machine year ago dont worry that'll fix itself, the grammar isnt wrong just when i turned 16 my fingers had grown XXL large and i press like 100 buttons at a time which was handy writing this super long comment ALSO THE EFFORT PART IS A MATTER OF OPINION for a guy who has never tried to find a decent Bacterian pic i mean most of us really forgotten who he even is (i think hes one of most important chars be cuz of him we came to notice that krillin has no nose) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 I think your pics on the new ones are pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Yeah thats cuz the story advancing and some chars are added that people really like and really make fanclubs of.Also added King Piccolo Saga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poopybuttoxes Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 The pics on the king piccolo ones are really good, but i personally dont like the effects. Sensu bean was a little disapointing :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 15, 2010 Author Share Posted July 15, 2010 · Hidden by pppaulius, July 8, 2011 - old and usless post, im back now Hidden by pppaulius, July 8, 2011 - old and usless post, im back now OK so now that ive finished Dragonball ill take a short couple of days break while you guys say which cards you would want redone or maybe made (dragonball only) after ill perfect this set ill start DBZ Link to comment
pppaulius Posted July 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 K im back from vacation, should i continue the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<haxx/> Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Why does Bulma have a higher level then kid goku but kid goku is stronger? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pppaulius Posted July 12, 2011 Author Share Posted July 12, 2011 · Hidden by pppaulius, July 15, 2011 - No reason given Hidden by pppaulius, July 15, 2011 - No reason given dn maybe shes older and wiser Link to comment
pppaulius Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Because she is older and wiser, like Dark Sage having higher level but less ATK then some monsters.FINNALY STARTED DBZ, PLZ RATE AND COMMENT, BECAUSE I WAS VERY CLOSE TO DUMPING THIS...I'll upload rest of Saiyan saga morrow, cuz im very lazy today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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