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Aiku: There is still the same errors... over and over and over again...

 

OCG: face down = face-down

one = 1

standby = Standby

ability = effect

Pyro = Pyro-Type

deck = Deck

 

Effect: I know what you're trying to do, but it's Duelistly impoosible. You cannot perform a effect, before your Standby Phase. You maybe want to mean this: During your Stand Phase, if you activated this card effect twice during your last turn, Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Pyro King LVLX" from your (insert location here).

 

Image and Name: Beast to reaper to magician...? What?

 

Overall: 4.1/10

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I'll correct the first one, so that you'll have an idea of the next.

 

During your Main Phase, you can discard 1 monster from your hand to your Graveyard to destroy 1 face-down monster on the field and place 1 Inferno Counter on this card. During your Standby Phase, by removing 2 Inferno Counters from this card, you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon "Pyro King LV8" from your hand or Deck.

 

Uncreative and bad OCG. 7/10

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Effect: I know what you're trying to do, but it's Duelistly impoosible. You cannot perform a effect, before your Standby Phase. You maybe want to mean this: During your Stand Phase, if you activated this card effect twice during your last turn, Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Pyro King LVLX" from your (insert location here).

 

no, i should have said, the Standby phase after the 2nd(or second) time you activate this card's effect tribute this card, you know the rest, ( not actually that part). But i do agree with you about the pictures, i wasnt really paying any mind to them. Thank you for the critisism.

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