jasonlee41 Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 here my Guardian deck if you feel its balanced and got a good ocg writing to it and pic selection i will add a field spell and other supportive cards to help with the dis advantage they cause a player, if not please tell me whats bad about them i will fix it (if its the pic give a link to a better one) then i will add the new card once i got them balanced and get no more complaints This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effects of "Rising of the Elements". This card cannot be targeted and is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Monsters, Spells, and Traps cards. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and send it to the graveyard place 1 Flare Counter on this card. (max 3) You can remove 3 Flare Counters from this card to destroy all Monsters or all Spell and Trap your opponent controls. Spell cards Traps will come later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
インフェルニティ・ミラージュ Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 All are pretty good except they are supposed to say "1st Edition" instead of "First Edition". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 "1st Edition", Capitalize each word in the card name, don't start new lines within the effect.And that should give you a new start, I hope it was helpful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 ok cap each letter in main name and did 1st instead of first as for effect cant move it any closer together dont know why it appears on the card like that but their no spaces like that when i typed it. any other fixes all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xykon Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 i will give it 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 thanks i will add support cards up for it a little later today i got another 3 monsters and 5 s/t Ps. just added up the last 3 monsters s/t coming later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whocaresrmd Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 7/10 goodjob Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 thank you i know it not perfect but once i add the s/t to it, i think it will help a player out with the bad side effect (if it was real atleast sadly it ant) (cry's like a baby lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune storm Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Hey TEN out of TEN these are better than anything i could ever make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Musicafee Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Some OCG errors. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 ant perfect but still i feel a pretty fair and balanced concept lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima Nightmare Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Common OCG errorsBahamut's pic is Overused but w/e8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Common OCG errorsBahamut's pic is Overused but w/e8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raw7890 Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Nice Cards, Cool Effects, Really Cool Pictures. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 nice pics.....not any critisism from my point of view Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 thanks all i am really grateful i start on the s/t now and get them up in the next couple of hours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 im gonna say AWESOME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jasonlee41 Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 just added the spell will do traps tomorrowand thanks all again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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