My first attempts: Speed Archetype

[Aarontheman]

Like it says, this is my first attempt at any cards so I hope they turned out good.

 

 

[spoiler=Monsters]Speed Accelerator:

Speed Soldier:

Speed Destroyer:

Speed Defender:

Speed Sniper:

Speed Tuner:

Speed King:

Speed cannon:

Speed Booster:

 

 

 

[spoiler=Traps]

Emergency Reflector Shield:

Quick Speed Tuning:

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

Speed Recovery:

Sonic Transport:

 

 

 

Thank you to Jazin Kay for the images used. Constructive criticism is accepted, but please do not just post bad OCG or good OCG. Please explain why. I want to know for the next ones I try.

[Ignis avis]

Other than quick speed tuning being a more specific version of Urgent tuning they look fine.

[Aarontheman]

I know, but I had that idea and thought it went good with them.

[Prince of Tennis]

You have some Capitalization errors, remember words like "Tuner" needs to capitalized. Also on "Speed Cannon" it should be tribute not sacrafice.

[Aarontheman]

OK, I fixed the ones I saw. If you see any more please tell me.

[Lord_of_Cards_55]

Dude those are awesome for a new member!! Where did u get the images?? Welcome to YCM dude!

[Aarontheman]

The images, as I said in the post, I got from the Machine gallery of Jazin Kay, which I learned about from a friend.

[JadenxAtemYAOI]

Well idk if they're from a specific anime or not but do you think making their effects Spell Speed 3 in the effect would do any good? They're called the "Speed" archetype so why not? The pictures are great as well and the effects aren't too bad as well. Another suggestion would be perhaps trying to make an accel Synchro card because it being called the "Speed" archetype would make it very ironic

[Aarontheman]

Actually, they originally were supposed to be Speed World and the spells were originally speed spells, but a friend told me that Speed Spells are border on realistic, and so I changed it up some. Originally also, speed accelerator had an effect that was based around increasin speed counters. I actually kind of like them as is now though, but I was thinking of other monsters to add into it, so I'll consider that. Also, I like the effects as they are right now, because the whole idea behind the Archetype so far is that they all support each other and go very well together.

[Half-Demon Legend]

These are pretty good. A few capitalization and OCG errors (change all of the "may" to "can"), but overall, still pretty good. I like them.

[Aarontheman]

Fixed. Thank you for that.

[Kohdok]

Let's fix some OCG: Basically, change "One" to "1" and "Excluding Speed Warrior" needs to be in parenthesis.

 

I see a bunch of Duel Masters artwork up there...

 

Speed Accelerator

By discarding 1 card from your hand, this monster can attack your opponent directly. However, its ATK is halved until the End Phase when it attacks.

 

Speed Defender

Your opponent cannot select another "Speed" monster (excluding Speed Warrior) on your side of the field as an attack target.

 

Speed Cannon:

Once per turn, you can tribute one Face up monster on your side of the field to deal direct damage to your opponent equal to the monsters Level x 200. This monster cannot attack the turn it uses this effect.

 

Speed Recovery:

Special Summon one "Speed" monster (excluding "Speed Warrior) from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position and equip it with this card. When this card is removed from the field, destroy that monster.