Lucario Pkmn

[Strider25]

Here is my Lucario and support cards. Please comment.

 

 

 

Lore: You must tribute one face-up Continuous Spell Card on the field when this monster is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If you do not this monster returns to your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can look at your opponent's hand and all Set cards on his/her side of the field.

 

 

 

Lore: When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Aura Counter on this card (max. 3). You can Tribute this card with 3 Aura Counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Lucario".

 

 

 

Lore: Activate only when you control a face-up "Riolu" or "Lucario". Destroy 1 monster on the field.

 

 

 

Lore: Activate only when you control a face-up "Lucario". Destroy all monsters your opponent controls.

[Strider25]

Bump

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 6/10. 1/4 of them has Low Quality. Lucario's picture doesn't seem that cool. (If that makes sense.) Get a High Quality picture, not a picture from a video game. (Which by the way was an awesome game.)

 

OCG: 4/10.

Minor errors such as:: Face up = Face-up

summon = Summon.

Things like that.

And the Magic card Aura Blast is OP'ed. You should be able to pay Life Points to activate that card. (Same as with Aura Sphere.)

When saying a Monster cards name in another cards effect (Spell/Trap or monster effects) You say it like "Riolu" Not simply Riolu.

Is an Aura Counter even real? Not very sure. But for now 4/10. If you prove to me it is real then you get 6/10.

 

Total: 5/10. Not bad, keep working on it.

[Strider25]

Thanks for the advice. In the case of the Aura counters I think you can make up types of counter if you want.

[Lord Metallium]

lol there good card 8/10

[Guest Fusion X. Denver]

[spoiler=Lucario OCG fix]

Destroy 1 face-up Continuous Spell Card when this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If you do not, this card returns to your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can look at your opponent's hand and all Set cards on his/her side of the field.

 

[spoiler=Riolu]

When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Aura Counter on this card (max. 3). You can Tribute this card with 3 Aura Counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Lucario".

 

Aura Sphere=Activate only when you control a face-up "Riolu" or "Lucario". Destroy 1 monster on the field.

Aura Blast=Activate only when you control a face-up "Lucario". Destroy all monsters your opponent controls.

 

Hope this helps

[Strider25]

I've fixed the OCG. Thanks for the help.