Thalog Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 another Thalog original, gimmie some feedback on this guys. One Pyro Syncro monster + one or more normal monsters.Each time this card destroys a monster by battle summon one Burn soul token, for each burnt soul token on the field lower the attack and defence of this monster by 500 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 there needs to be a tuner in your requirements.you have some ocg probs, like you need to tell wat attribute the token is, its type, so on. but i guess its ok for a new guy 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I like it, but you wrote "One Pyro Syncro monster + one or more normal monsters" If you capitalize "One" on the first card, shouldnt it also be the same for the second card? Also when he destroys a card you summon one "Burn soul" token, and for each "burnt soul" token his attack is lowered. Shouldn't Soul be capitalized too, not just Burn? also fix burnt, to burn as well, so they are the same.. I like the card though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thalog Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 ok hers the remake based on you guys advice :D One Pyro Tuner monster + One or more normal monsters.Each time this card destroys a monster by battle summon one Burnt Soul token, for each Burnt Soul token (Fire Attribute 200 Att/Def ) on the field lower the attack and defence of this monster by 500 points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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