alexphantom Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 i made my first card ut i need a better picand i wanted to know what everyone thinks of the card in general and i wouldnt mind some card and opinions No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated in response to this cards's activation. When this card is activated, each player selects 1 monster from his/her hand, Deck, Extra Deck or Graveyard and Special Summons it. If the original ATK of a monster Special Summoned by this Effect is 0, increase its ATK by 3000 until the End Phase. Only monsters Special Summoned by this card's Effect can attack this turn. When a monster Special Summoned by this card's Effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, its controller takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. i fixed it this is the newest one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
firetire18 Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 not bad but it really needs better effect.think about this pm me and i might be able to help.oh yeah and WTF is a quick-play trap card?!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Alot of OCG errors,A Trap card cant be Quick Play,go to Deviantart.com,Photobucket.com,or Idk the other oneUmm....4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kohdok Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 First: Don't make a new thread every time. Second: There is still no such thing as a Quick-Play Trap Third: Too many OCG errors to mention. What kind of summon is it? It's got to be a Special Summon. Fourth: Special Summon from the Extra Deck?! That has gotten more cards banned than I can count on both of my hands... All one has to do is pull Mist Wurm and then use it to blow away whatever their opponent summons with its effect. Hello Broken-dom. Reconstruct it properly and then we'll talk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 well sorryok i have updated thecard and ps i only made a new topic because the old one got locked please ive your ideas and any pic ideas and pics in general if you want to support...enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Fix the card grammer, use capitalization, make it a normal trap card... not a quick trap, and change the part about special summoning a monster from your extra deck. After those changes, you should be all set. Also I think the words "Deck" "Special" (when used with summon) "Summoned" "Spell" and "Trap" are supposed to be capitalized. oh.. and whenever is one word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 well i did all that but the reason i kept the extra deck parts because of the new part i added but does anyone have any card pics they think should be in there When ever this card is activated you and your opponent can select any monster in your Deck ,Hand ,Graveyard, or Extra Deck, and Special summon it. If the monster has 0 attack points, then its attack points are 3000.When this card is activated no other Spell or Trap cards can be activated this turn. Only the monsters summoned by this card can attack this turn. When the monster summoned by this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard the player whos monster is destroyed takes damage equal to the attack points of the destroyed monster. what is missing from this card? anyone with suggestions is welcome to give them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 this would be way better if it had a better picand u shud post lore icant really see the effect.until then 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 well i dont really know what lore is but i am trying to get people to help me get a better pic so do u want to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 OCG Fixes: No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated in response to this cards's activation. When this card is activated, each player selects 1 monster from his/her hand, Deck, or Graveyard and Special Summons it. If the original ATK of a monster Special Summoned by this Effect is 0, increase its ATK by 3000 until the End Phase. Only monsters Special Summoned by this card's Effect can attack this turn. When a monster Special Summoned by this card's Effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, its controller takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 This is basically last turn, but without the auto-win effect. You also can't have a Quick-Play Trap Card. But that aside, you should probably try to balance the effect before you do anything else with it. I'd start by taking out the 0 to 3000 ATK effect...someone could just grab a 0 ATK monster, and run you over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 ok i did edit it and the monsters atk is only 3000 on the turn its summoned but the reason i said from the extra deck is because of the last effect please read the bottom/newer edits and comment No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated in response to this cards's activation. When this card is activated, each player selects 1 monster from his/her hand, Deck, Extra Deck or Graveyard and Special Summons it. If the original ATK of a monster Special Summoned by this Effect is 0, increase its ATK by 3000 until the End Phase. Only monsters Special Summoned by this card's Effect can attack this turn. When a monster Special Summoned by this card's Effect is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, its controller takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. picture ideas are appreciated please help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 An image is important, but if your Card Grammar is horrid, you should worry about your Card Grammar first. Since it is basically "Last Turn" without the victory effect, here:[spoiler=Pic] You should use Deviant Art for your pictures. It's not really that hard to find pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 this is the kind of pic i was looking for any othersok how is this pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 how about this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted May 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 So tell me what do people think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 Actually, it looks like Last Turn, without the ending-the-game part of it. It looks great, but 1 MINOR (MINOR) OCG fix: In the second sentence, change "cards's" to "card's"... I like it. 8.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2011 That's for the support Thanks for the support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexphantom Posted May 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2011 Thanks to sirty_stan I was able to find that error,now are there any other notes or ideas to add?I would greatly appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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