-Resistance- Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Here they are...So those were my Monsters..Here's my Traps and Spells Can anyone get me some better pics =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GemSal Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 wow cool cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Thanks^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 quick fixes... 1. There is supposed to be a space after a comma or period has been used.2. On the card "Dratinuy Master of Darkness" his effect should read "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play etc." not "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing etc." - This change also goes with "Master of Dratinuy"3. Master of Earths pictures has a sig on it, and is cut off on top and bottom, either get a new pic, or zoom in on it.4. Master of Mists whole effect needs tweaked so that it is correct card grammer5. Master of Water (do not say another, if its type is not fire) change effect too "If there is a Fire attribute "Dratinuy" monster on the field, this card gains 500 ATK"6. Dratinuy Reborns effect should be tweaked too "By discarding 4 cards from your hand"7. Dratinuy Fusion needs reworded because its confusing, also... you have no Dratinuy fusion monsters...8. Dratinuy Force needs changed to "Activate when your opponent attacks one of your "Dratinuy" monsters, after damage calculation destroy that card and all other attack position monsters your opponent controls"9. Dratinuy Dimension - Im not sure if its required, but a lot of cards read "inflict (x amount) points of damage to your opponents lifepoints. Maybe it needs added, idk.10. Dratinuy Battleground is a bit OP, maybe change it to 400ATK and DEF, also its last effect needs reworded to something like "If this card would be destroyed by a Spell or Trap card you can negate the effect and destroy that card by discarding 1 "Dratinuy" monster from your hand.11. Battleswords ocg needs a little work, and its second effect is a little OP. Easy change.12. Dratinuy Attacks title doesn't match its effect, also it needs reworded a little Hope some of these help... dont get mad just because I spotted a lot of things I would change.As the cards are before any of the changes I have suggested... 6.9/10 also because I've seen a lot of those pictures before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Um...wow...ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Just trying to help, whether you actually read all that or not =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 I know=]I appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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·Toot Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 these hv fr8 fx and OCG but u need better pics dood7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Resistance- Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Umm...Can you give me some sites for good pics other then Devianart.com,Photobucket.com,MagicDeckVortex.com? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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