Death dealer Archetype RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE!!!

[zancrow the flame god]

[align=center]nother new archetype i'm working on

RATE AND COMMENT PLEASE!!!

[spoiler=death dealers]

lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card can be Normal Summoned in face-up Defense position. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT Monster you control to gain Life Points equal to half of that monster's ATK.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase.. If you call it wrong, destroy this card and take damage equal to this monsters ATK. You can only use this effect once per turn during your Main Phase.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot declare an attack unless you Tribute 1 monster you control. If this card battles a monster, destroy that monster at the end of the Damage Step.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. The ATK of this card is equal to the number of Chaos Counters on it x250. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Chaos counter on this card (max.7).Once per turn, you can remove 2 Chaos Counters from this card to remove 1 face-up monster on the field from play. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during this turn.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT Monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent equal to 1/2 of that monster's ATK.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 card on the field. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. Decrease the ATK of this card by 700 points during the End Phase of each of your turns.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, gain Life Points equal to half of the destroyed monsters ATK.

LORE: "Death Dealer - Mizuna The Lifetrancer" + "Death Dealer - Megumi The Berserk Reaper"

This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 LIGHT Monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters ATK. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. Decrease the ATK of this card by 700 points during the Draw Phase of each of your turns.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 "Death Dealer" monsters from your Graveyard. This card gains 500 ATK for each "Death Dealer" monster you control. This card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Rune counter on this card (max.6). The ATK of this card is equal to the number of Rune Counters on it x350. When there are 6 Rune Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to destroy every Spell and Trap Card on the field.

LORE: During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Slash counter on this card (max.4). The ATK of this card is equal to the number of Slash Counters on it x950. When there are 4 Slash Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to destroy every Card on the field.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card can attack 3 times during the same Battle Phase.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy 1 monster on the field, ans inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of destroyed monster.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no damage from battles involving this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Storm counter on this card (max.8). The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the number of Storm Counters on it x400. When there are 8 Storm Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to destroy every card on the field.

LORE: "Death Dealer - Hitomi The Silverlance" + "Death Dealer - Akiha The Swift"

This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase you can pay 2000 Life Points to destroy 2 cards on the field and inflict 2000 damage to your opponent.

LORE: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. You can pay 2000 Life Points too Special Summon up too 3 "Chaos Zombie Tokens" (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 1200/DEF 0) in Attack Position, these tokens can attack your opponent directly. Toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card can attack your opponent directly. If you call it wrong, destroy this card and remove it from play.

Lore: Pay half of your Life Points, then select 2 Level 4 or higher "Death Dealer" monsters you control. The selected monsters gain 3000 ATK and can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each until the end phase.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Lunar counter on this card (max.8). You can remove 2 Lunar Counter from this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can remove 1 card in your hand from play and roll a 6 sided die, if the results are 1, 2, or 3, destroy every face-up monster on the field. If the results are 4, 5 or 6, destroy every Spell or trap Card on thew field.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Burst counter on this card (max.8). The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the number of Burst Counters on it x300. once per turn, you can remove 2 Burst Counter from this card to destroy 1 Face-up monster on the field.

Lore:This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Savage counter on this card (max.8). The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the number of Savage Counters on it x450. When there are 8 Savage Counters on this card at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If you control a face-up "Death Dealer - Mizuna The Life Trancer," or "Death Dealer - Mizuna The Berserk" your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Tribute 1 LIGHT Monster you control to gain Life Points equal to 1/4 of that monster's ATK.

Lore: "Death Dealer - Sakura The Burst Edge" + "Death Dealer - Kaminari The Dread Lance"

This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. By sending 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up Fiend and Zombie-Type monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If you call it wrong, destroy this card and remove it from play. You can only use this effect once per turn during your Main Phase.

Lore: "Death Dealer - Sakura The Burst Edge" + "Death Dealer - Miku The Twin Blade"

This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card can attck twice during the same Battle Phase. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 Infernal counter on this card (max.4). The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the number of Infernal Counters on it x1000. Once, you can remove 4 Infernal Counters from this card to destroy every Defense Position monster on the field.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card gains 300 ATK for each FIRE monster you control. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 FIRE monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

Lore: Pay half of your Life Points, then Special Summon 3 Level 6 or higher "Death Dealer" monsters from your hand or Deck.

Lore: "Enraged Mach Angel" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Death Dealer" Monsters

This card is also treated as an "Angel" monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 2 "Holy" Counters on this card (max. 20). Once per turn, you can remove 4 "Holy" Counters from this card card to destroy 1 Card on the field.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If you control a face-up "Death Dealer - Sakura The Burst Edge", your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 1 "Burst" Counter on this card (max.5). The ATK of this card is equal to the number of "Burst" Counters on it x300. once per turn, you can remove 1 "Burst" Counters from this card to destroy 1 Spell Card on the field.

Lore: You must Tribute 5 "Death Dealer" monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in face-up Attack Position, you can place 2 "Hurricane" counter on this card (max.40). The ATK of this card is equal to the number of "Hurricane" Counters on it x100. When there are 40 "Hurricane" Counters on this card, you can Tribute this card to win the Match.

Lore: "Death Dealer - Miku The Twin Blade" + "Death Dealer - Hitomi The Silverlance" + "Death Dealer - Akiha The Swift" + "Death Dealer - Mizuna The Life Trancer" + "Death Dealer - Kaminari The Dread Lance"

This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Select 1 monster on your opponent's field and equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once, and you can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). This card's ATK and DEF become equal to half of the equipped monster's ATK and DEF. If this card would be destroyed by battle, the equipped monster is destroyed instead.

Lore: This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 DARK monster you control to destroy 1 card on the field, then Draw 1 card.

Lore: This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. You can pay 2000 Life Points too Special Summon up to 4 "Raging Beast Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 5/ATK 1500/DEF 0) in Attack Position. This card gains 600 ATK for each "Raging Beast Token" on the field.

Lore: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points during the Draw Phase of each of your turns. During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Death Dealer - Kasumi The Experiment LV6" from your hand or Deck.

Lore: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster by battle, by sending this card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Death Dealer - Kasumi The Experiment LV8" from your hand or Deck.

Lore: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell or Trap Cards. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Death Dealer - Kasumi The Experiment LV6". If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each with this card.

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[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

hmmm what to begin?.... Mizuna is balanced.... Miku, would that be when she was summoned that she toss a coin?.... Mka, the second effect kinda pointless unless you want it destroy the monster without Damage calculation... Mizumi is fine but.... Aki, having 1/4 is weird.... Megumi, she will abile to use second effect at 2 times and first seem a little oped along with the second but dunno... Natsuki is fine too?..... Mizuna is balance.... Ayane is not bad, dunno it's a bit oped or not but.... what is with the ATK and DEF?????? 90 and 10???? O.o

[zancrow the flame god]

hmmm what to begin?.... Mizuna is balanced.... Miku' date=' would that be when she was summoned that she toss a coin?.... Mka, the second effect kinda pointless unless you want it destroy the monster without Damage calculation... Mizumi is fine but.... Aki, having 1/4 is weird.... Megumi, she will abile to use second effect at 2 times and first seem a little oped along with the second but dunno... Natsuki is fine too?..... Mizuna is balance.... Ayane is not bad, dunno it's a bit oped or not but.... what is with the ATK and DEF?????? 90 and 10???? O.o

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miku tosses the coin during your main phase. i wanted these cards to be different, hence the 90 ATK

[zancrow the flame god]

bump

[NeosWiseman]

I agree with what Scheath666 said, especially about Megumi. 2500 ATK on a Level 4 monster with a mass attack is not a good idea for a balanced card. Ayano on the other hand is not overpowered imo. It would be hard to pull out many Death Dealers after she is Summoned. Maybe just make it so her effect doesn't include her. If she is left like that she might be a bit off, though.

I can't believe you started a new set already. How do you even manage to keep them all going??? O_O

Anyhow, my rating is 9.5/10

Nicely done! *thumbs up*

[zancrow the flame god]

NEW DEATH DEALERS!!!

[Lord Smeagle]

While I understand you like the ATK Point gimmick, you should probably consider that if you tribute Miku with Ai's effect, she inflicts four hundred and seventy-seven point five damage to your opponent. I dunno about you, but that'd get pretty annoying if I had to keep up with those Life Points.

[zancrow the flame god]

edited their atk and aki's effect and added Izunami The Destroyer

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

we never rally to use 1/2 in the term for inflicting damage of the monster's ATK to the opponent' the correct term is equal to half of the monster's ATK. but other cards are looking good today lol.

[ShinyBlades]

Most of them look good but not all of them , art is important here. =0

[zancrow the flame god]

name the ones that don't look good

[ShinyBlades]

like death dealer it look weird , something is missing there.

[zancrow the flame god]

like death dealer it look weird ' date=' something is missing there.

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Wut?

[ShinyBlades]

yes your card that you made , i looked at your cards set , the pic of the card kinda

boring , you missing something there.

[zancrow the flame god]

ok......

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

well I think it's good, sometime weirdness have it's balance in the card. if there something missing i would point it out, well what missing is having them to have an initial of an effect that define Death dealer.

[ShinyBlades]

well dont manage all the rates by your self , thats why we have a forum for!

Everybody has their own right to say their opinions , not just you , i understand

that you are the one who correcting people's mistakes but you are not a god!

[zancrow the flame god]

well dont manage all the rates by your self ' date=' thats why we have a forum for!

Everybody has their own right to say their opinions , not just you , i understand

that you are the one who correcting people's mistakes but you are not a god!

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calm down shiny, i have a lot of respect for sceath and his opinions

[ShinyBlades]

i am calm , but just little bit annoying people's attitudes like his , but anyways i loved your

cards but i was just saying my opinion.

[zancrow the flame god]

i am calm ' date=' but just little bit annoying people's attitudes like his , but anyways i loved your

cards but i was just saying my opinion.

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ok, i just didn't want a fight to get started on this thread

[ShinyBlades]

oh no i really respect you , i dont want to fight here. By the way how long you

were making your cards?

[zancrow the flame god]

oh no i really respect you ' date=' i dont want to fight here. By the way how long you

were making your cards?

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to make this set? about an hour and a half

[Slifer the sky dragon lu]

well very impressive , but why dont you make a dragon set i would like to see it =`

[zancrow the flame god]

i might be working on a dragon set in the near future:wink:

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

hmm well maybe it may be impressive of how long it take but the thinking and creativity on the cards are more like thoughts on a spot, it doesn't seem to look it was based on critical thinking but on the sorceress and angel they seem to be based on Critical thinking though it slightly off the road XD