Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 [spoiler=Effect]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. During each of your Battle Phases, this card can attack each monster your opponent controls with a DEF lower than the DEF of this card once each. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Nice so you decided to do a scorpion instead of a cactus?I love it.A 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A King by Rights Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Not gonna lie when i first read the title i was expecting a Peacock!! I must say this is very nicely done and i cud see it being a real life card. my rate 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Small Grammar mistake: "If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card" Shouldn't that be: "If there are no face-up Field Spell Cards on the field, destroy this card" Also you don't need to repeat yourself. "During each of your Battle Phases, this card can attack each monster your opponent controls with a DEF lower than the DEF of this card once each." You could use: "During your Battle Phase, This card can attack an opponent's monster whose original DEF points are lower than this card's." Otherwise nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound Ojamortal! Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Nice Effect,no offence, but the image is your worst of EI Images...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Small Grammar mistake: "If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field' date=' destroy this card" Shouldn't that be: "If there are no face-up Field Spell Cards on the field, destroy this card" Also you don't need to repeat yourself. "During each of your Battle Phases, this card can attack each monster your opponent controls with a DEF lower than the DEF of this card once each." You could use: "During your Battle Phase, This card can attack an opponent's monster whose original DEF points are lower than this card's." Otherwise nice card.[/quote'] 1st Correction: That line is actually copied word-for-word from a real EI 2nd Correction: My wording is written so that this card can atk multiple times in one turn. If I change it to what you put, it only gets one atk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 also there can only be 1 face-up field spell immortal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 also there can only be 1 face-up field spell immortal What are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Not gonna lie when i first read the title i was expecting a Peacock!! I must say this is very nicely done and i cud see it being a real life card. my rate 9.8/10 pikaq is the literal incan translation of scorpion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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