General Assclown Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 CnC pl0x. Re-attempt of a shitish previous tag ... if you could call it that.I attempted to add lighting and flow for this tag. Didn't really concentrate on the other basics D: Edit: [spoiler=Sharpened And Desaturated Version] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
۞Jolteon۞ Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 It is a little blury, and the lighting could use some work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 try to and something that negates some of the light and soothes the eyesI see it as too bright and your render looks unfocused to the point where it blends in to the rest of the image.Truth:Had to focus on the sword to find him+The image gets you up in the morning+The colors chosen-The brightness needs to be dimmed down-the render blends too much into the bg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 It is a little blury' date=' and the lighting could use some work[/quote'] Yeah, I suppose. try to and something that negates some of the light and soothes the eyesI see it as too bright and your render looks unfocused to the point where it blends in to the rest of the image.Truth:Had to focus on the sword to find him+The image gets you up in the morning lolwut?+The colors chosen Monotone is a good colour choice? ._.-The brightness needs to be dimmed down Yeah-the render blends too much into the bg Really? I usually have problems with blending at all ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Added new version. More comments pl0x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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