poltre1 Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 [/img][/img][/img][/img][/img]im celebrating some good responses with my new phoenix cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalD Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Ouch. This needs a lot of work. First of all. I don't know about you, but I didn't see any "Hawk" cards.Secondly, Synchro monsters cannot be summoned with a Spell Card. (The only type that are able to do that are Ritual Monsters)Thirdly. Don't use Mu pics. It just doesn't look professional.Fourth, OP'ed card combo (Phoenix Tamer and Final Phoenix)Fifth White Backgrounds are a No-no.Finally Grammar. I expect you're tired of hearing the Grammar police, but for realistic cards you need to have good grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poltre1 Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 thanks. the only way to have a perfect card is suggestions from others. and the hawk cards are the rest of the ones in the set. i know i need to fix grammar, but thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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